VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
nice update... loved the classic damsel in distress and hero saves the day thing! though the car crash was an interesting twist... def left me wondering as to whether they would be okay or not and where manvi will end up!
thanks for the PM and do update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
thanks for ur pm..i lovedf ur both ff and ss
pl pm me when u update them
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

I know i havent updated in a long time and really sorry was kinda busy but i did write like two OS in-between but finally an update dont think its to long but anyways

Chapter 4 - Lost

Manvi had covered her face with her hand in protection; she peaked through making sure she was safe before moving them away. She looked around at her surroundings. "Mein zinda hon" she shouted shocked at the faint reality that she was alive. This was the second time in one day she had almost been killed and it came as shock that she was still breathing. She couldn't figure out if this was her good luck that she was still alive or her bad luck that she kept getting into these accidents.

Manvi looked beside her and noticed that Virat had his head against the steering wheel. She was stunned and for a second had no idea how to react. "Chep!" she called out as she pulled him upright making his head rest against the back of the seat. "Chep" she said again unsure if he would respond to the bizarre nickname she had given him; she was still unaware of his actual name. Manvi nudged him hoping he would open his eyes but it seemed her procedure hadn't worked. Manvi began to get worried what if he is...but she noticed he was still breathing.

She noticed a bottle of water beside him and reached over to get it. She poured some of the water onto her hands and sprinkled in on his face whilst watching his eyes flinch and slowly begin to open. A wide smile appeared on her face as she let out a sigh of relief. "Tum bhi zinda hon" she assured him. Virat felt the drops of water trickle down his cheeks; he wiped them away before he started talking. "Mein kya koi sara hua podha dikta hon jo tum mujhpe yeh bina mausam pani ki barsaat chara rahi hon."

"Meine tumahari madat ki aur thank you kehne ke vaje tum mujhe hi path para re hon"

"Deko bandariya" Virat commenced before wincing in pain, he touched his forehead and realised it was bleeding "Ouch!" he choked out.

"Tumhare saar mein se toh khoon niakl ra hai" Manvi pointed out. "Wait." She told him as she began to rummage through her bag. She took out a first aid box and handed it over to a confused Virat. Virat opened it and took out some cotton wool and dipped it on to some antibacterial. He adjusted the front mirror of his car so he could look into it. He began to dab his injury with the cotton wool. "Ahh" he grimaced in pain. "Tum na bilkul chep hon, mujhe do mein kardeti hon" Manvi said putting her hand forward. Virat handed the box over to her and Manvi started wiping down his blood whilst softly blowing onto his injured forehead. She took out a plaster and placed it over his injury. "Done" she said "Aur tumhe dard bhi nahi hua."

"Thanks" Virat said. "Waise kya tum hamesha yeh first aid box lekar gumti ho"

"Gar chor ke ayi hon who bhi akele agar mujhe chot vhot lag jati toh aur waise bhi akir mein tumhare hi kaam ayi na" Manvi replied irrationally

Virat closed both his hands together and bowed down in front of her "Sorry tumse yeh sawaal pooch ne ke liye mein toh bhool gaya ke tum pagal hon."

"Tumne mujhe pagal kaha aaj mein tumhe chor diya kunki mera mood nahi hai tum jaise insaan se argue karne ka aur agar tum teek hog aye ho hum chale."

"Chalte hain tumse mu lag ne se acha hai" Virat told her as he started the car. "O sh*t no way" Virat banged his head on the steering wheel. He then stormed out the car and kicked the tire which was flat. Manvi followed him out "Kya hua?" she asked. Virat pointed at the punctured tire reluctantly. "Toh kya hua gari mein spare tire hai na aur tumhe tire badal na to ata hoga" she tried reassuring herself. Virat raised his eyebrows and nodded timidly "nahi hai" he mumbled. Manvi choked ant spat out the water she was drinking "What the...Tumahare paas spare tire nahi hai kaise admi hon ab mein kya karongi."

"Mujhe kya pata ta ke tire puncture hojayega damn sirf tumhari vajhe se yeh hora hai na mein tumse milta aur bacha ta aur nahum yaha hote"

"Meine kaha tumhe hero ki taara ake mujhe bacha ne tum ne mujhe gari mein bitaye au tumhari vajhe se hum yaha hai"

"Sorry meri maa meine galti kar di aur kabi kissi anjaan ladki ko nahi bachaonga"

"Tum bakwaas karna band karo aur kuch socho." They both looked around and realised they were in a forest surrounded by lots of tall trees there was no sign of people or even animals it was dead silence and lll they could hear was each other's breathing. Manvi began to sob "ab hum is jungle se kaise niklen ge" she moaned.

"Oi dram queen apna yeh rona dona band karo please mein tumhare age haath jor ta ho. Gari to chalne vali nahi ab humein pedal hi raasta doond na hoga."

"Lekin hum iss jungle mein agar koi jungle janwar agaya to."

"Uski chinta mat karo eaise bhi who tumhe dek kar bhag jayenge ab chale jitni jaldi chale utni hi jaldi hum apne manzil poch jayenge." Virat walked on leaving Manvi trailing behind him.

PS: pms will got out foe my buddys now will pm everyone else later sorry buddy me if u want pms so its easier for me to pm people

Edited by Jafrina_luvs_KM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Wow... Nice part jaff... And i always loved der nok-jhok... Waiting 4 sm weird nd akward moments in jungle... Rofl... Well u r updatng dis ff aftr a long tym... Thnk god u updated bcs m gttng bored by dis recent track... And i like hindi convo between dem,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
superb pls pm me when u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
thanx shiv i updated coz iwas getting bored of the track aswell but god knows wen il update next but ive something planned for them sum wierd stuff
thanx preethis
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Awesome update Jafrina!! Thanks for the pm and please pm me when you update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Nice update,loved how they fight at every little thing.

waiting for the fun in the jungle.

pm me the nxt update pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
I knew it jaff... U r planning smthng like jungle main mangal...rofl
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
jaff it was amazing .
And u gotta update this SOON . K soon very soon not months wala soon.

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