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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi.. how abt my theory of whats gonna happen at mukesh mills?

Bani is going to the mukesh mills and jai decides to follow her in his car.he keeps on thinking where bani is going 2.he follows her and suddenly realises that he is driving thru park road.he understands that bani is hear 2 trace the secret.that excellent expression of his comes on his face.nahin..bani ko us raaz ke baare mein nahin patha chalana chahiye.mujhe use rokna hein.kisi bhi halat mein....agar usko sab patha chala to woh mujhe chodkar chale jayenge..aur phir mera kya hoga?(how was that?)šŸ˜‰

meanwhile..our CID Mrs Kurbani has reached the mills.she walks out and goes into the mill.somebody walking with boots on is seen.bani calls out"koi hai?"

"welcome Mrs walia," bani turns around.she is shocked to see him(whoever it is).the man has a knife in his hand.he laughs like a mad person.and says"at last i've got u in my hand bani.i will not leave u.and he stabs bani(where is munna)

jai reaches the mahesh mills and sees the taxi parked outside.he asks the driver and the driver tells him that the lady has gone insidejai rushes inside.he calles out"banii..banii"

no answer

" bani tum kahaan ho?"please humein yahaan se nikaalna hein'baaaaani?!!!

"mr walia..

its bani.she's lying on the floor with a pool of blood around her..jai felt paralysed

"mr walia..bani whispered..mr walia mujhe maaf kijiye..maine aapke baaton ko dhyaan nahin diya.us insaan ne.."

"bani tumhe kuch nahin hoga.hum hospital chalenge..."

"nahin..mr walia ..mera bhi yahi kwaish thi..aapke haathon par mar jaana..ab to meri jeene ka koi zarrorath nahin hein maine apni behenon ki shaadi karvayi..abb.............

she closes herr eyes

"BAAANI..................."

jai lifts her and takes her 2 then car.he drives to the hospital.the doctors are all running around with a worried look.

by now the whole family is here.maasi,dadi,piya rano everybody are crying .but nobody has that shocked look on his face othrthan jai.he is speechles. aditya is pouring questions at him but jai doesn't even hear him.he is looking at bani in the ICU through the glass

the doctors come outeverybody r anxious.the doctors say"ab hum kuch nahin kar sakte.unkišŸ‘ zindagi hum bach nahin sakte.Mrs walia.andar apni aakri saas le rahin hein...."

jai is SHOCKED STILL.hE SHOUTS "YEH APP SAB KAISE BAATHEN KAR RAHEIN HEIN..BANI KO KUCH NAHIN HO SAKTA..KUCH NAHIN..MEIN BANI KO MARNA NAHIN DUNGA..BANI KE BINA JAI WALIA NAM SE KOYI IS DUNIYA MEIN NAHIN RAHEGA...KUCH BHI KARO MUJHE MERI BANI KO VAAPAS CHAHIYE..ABHI ISI WAQT!"(if only he said this actually in the serial)šŸ‘

enjoying?shall i continue?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow nice prediction buddy šŸ˜› Please continuešŸ‘
Edited by mayona - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well, i'm continuing.

Jai is screaming and he catches the doctor's throat.All are shocked.Aditya shouts"jai what r u doing!"and tries to save the doctor.
jai is sweating and and is loooking ready to kill anyody.Mausi is shocked to see her dear darling munna's other face but touched at jai's love for bani (ha we 'r waiting for such a scene)
inside bani is being provided oxygen and looks very weak.she is concious and hears all the commotion around her and thinks"mr walia ab to mar jaana bhi mere liye kuch bhi nahin hain.kyunki mein ab jaanti hoon ki aap mujhse pyar karte hein.mein bahuth khush hoon bahuth"
tears flow down her face
Jai comes inside and sees the tears.bani also sees him and looks at him weakly but she can't speak anything bcoz of the mask
Bani..mein sirf tumse itna kehna chahta hoon ki mein tumhe bahuth chahte hoon.bahuth.aur mera timse yahi vaada hein kikoi bhi ho, jisne tumhara saath yeh sab kiya mein usko zinda nahin chodunga
Bani takes a deep breath.her BP has gone high and all the machines around her start beep beeping.the nurse calls the doctor who comes rushing inside
Jai places his hand on bani's with a great expression on his face.. and whispers.."i love u baani...shayad mujhe yeh pejle hi kehna chahiye the.mujhe maaf kardo baani mujhe maaf kardo

well give me ur comments


Edited by NUKUTTY - 19 years ago
NEHA*S_JANO_JAI thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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VERY GOOOOOOOOD

PLZZZZ CONT SOOOOOOOOON šŸ‘
hi_neha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow good prediction i must say šŸ‘ but plz don't let bani die in ur prediction
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Posted: 19 years ago
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please do continue ur prediction.. at first i thought it was a ff.. but nice
prediction.. plz dont let bani die!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cmon.. bani is the main character!! she cant die now.. can she?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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you should continue this as a fanfic... nice writing šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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what happens next? is she going to be okay? 😔 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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even though i want jai to express n admit his feelings for bani soon !!!!!!!!!!

i dont want to see that poor lil gal bani to be hurt !!!!!!!!!

but it was a nice fan fic continue it but without hurting bani

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