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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
But hated those 2 bit_hes (rano n sammera)
Waiting for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! That was really hilarious!
Geet dancing and dusting and singing!
Maan getting his entertainment ROFL!
ha ha Maan teased her and she was going on and on about her champi and all! lol!
Poor Maan must have got headache more!
uffo Geet and her wierd choice of songs and chicken tandav lol!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
update nxt part soon
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
will update MY JUNGLE GIRL & TUM DENA

SAATH MERA after 14th march with a NEW

MG FF 😉 wait till then
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Posted: 13 years ago
today its the 16th march ! :(
abhi tak koi update nahi aya :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 11

Geet,sameera,aj bahut khass din hai beta..aj bade puja ka din hai,aj subha puja hogi beta,jo tum dono milkar karoge,uske liye maine humne applogo ke liye saari chose ki hai..ye lo beta,she gave a packet of saari to both of them.

No sooner meena went out,sam snatched the packet from geet

Di ye app kya kar rahi hai,,choti ma ne appko vi to diya hai na saari..

Chup..unhone diya to hai,bt sam wo leti hai jo use pasand ho..& I am sure ki un hone tumhe hi zyada khubsurat saari di hogi,

She opens up the two packets,& says..dekha,main janti thi unhone tumhe accha waala diya hai,aur mere sar pe ye tho diya..

Aisa nahi hai di,dekho unhone hamare kundan setse match karke diya hai,mere red kundan ke liye ye saari aur apke green kundan set se match karta hai dusra..

Chup bari ayi kundan set pehene wali,wo dono mere hai

Par main choti ma ko kya zavav dungi..

Hmm 'u can take the green kundan set..BT ONLY THE EARING & MAANGTIKA,waise vi wo acche nahi dikhte..

*********

Are kaha gayi hamare bahu e..pratham asked

Meena smiled ..are bhaisaab unhe taiyaar to hone dijiye..lo dono aa gayi..

Both were coming from opposite direction,sam was busy fixing her sari as she was not used to it so she did not look at geet..

Are beta ye kya ap do no ne adla badli karli!! Meena said

Ha wo wo maine,nahi geet ne kaha ki usko uska red kundan set pasand nahi aya,usko mera green wala chahiye tha,wo lene ke baad usne kaha ki green wale ke saath wo saari match karti hai jo mujhe mila hai,to usne wo mang liya..

Jo vi ho..achha hi hua..meena said & sam frowned ..she thought by saying this she will create displeasure against geet..bt..

Are kitni pyari lag rahi ho tum dono,jo maine tum logo ko diye the wo agar adla badly na karti tum to shayed ITNI sundaar nahi lagti tum dono..the things u are wearing suits u the best. Pratham said..

bolna padega,hamari bahu ka fashion sense bahut accha hai,isiliye to usne adla badly karli,kyuki wo janti thi ki kisme konsa jyada accha lagega..meena said

Tum to khubsurat ho hi sameera,aj geet beti vi akdam LAXMI ma jaisi lag rahi hai..geet smiled..

That's when sameera looked towards her & burned inti jelousy'

Sam's outfit..

geet's outfit..

Though sam' sari was more gorgous,bt geet looked best in her simplicity won all heart..

Chalo baccho puja ke liye'& same something in meena's ear..she became a little tensed,

Actually it was meena who sang for aarti always,today also she wanted to do it,bt her voice broke & the band which was called for aarti could not come..

Geet noticed meena's restlessness & asked her if anything was wrong,she told everything ..

Choti ma agar app bura na mane to main gau..

Beta ye sirf ghar ka hota to main kuch nahi bolti,lekin bahar wale vi aye hai,& all knows khuranas are perfect in all ..to ye.

Choti ma main itna vi bura nahi gati,I promise I won't let u down..

Meena gave permission reluctantly..

All were in front of mandir,she went to the idol & lighted the diya before KRISHNA"S idol singing..

Man Mohana Man Mohana

Kanha Sunona Aaa

Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina

Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina

Chodke Apne Kashi Mathura

Chodke Apne Kashi Mathura

Aake Basao More Nain

Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina

Kanhaaa

Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina

She remembered how she was treated in rano's house,then coming to km,becoming frnds with maan ,then suddenly their scandalous marriage..

Ek Pal Ujiraya Aaye

Ek Pal Andhiyara Chaye

Maan Kyun Na Dhabraye

Kaise Na Dhabraye

Maan Jo Koi Dhara

Apni Rahon Mein Paaye

Kaun Disha Jaye

Tum Bin Kaun Samjhaye

Tum Bin Kaun Samjhaye

She looked at the idol,looking at Krishna she remembered Vicky & misha,they were surely very naughty,bt that's what she wanted all her life,a loving family with papa,mama ,a big bro & little naughty bro & sis..she smiled..

Raas Rachiyan Brindavan Ke

Gokul Ke Basi

Radha Tumhri Daasi

Darshan Ko Hai Pyaasi

Shaam Shalone Nand Lala Krishna Banwari

Tumri Chab Hai Nyari

Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari

Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari

Man Mohana Man Mohana Man Mohanaaa Man Mohana

Kanha Sunona Aaa

Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina

Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina

She thought it was no use to keep wandering in the past..she should thank god for what HE has given her presently'she closed her eyes..

Jeevan Ek Nadiya Hai

Lehron Lehron Behti Jaye

Ismein Man Ki Naiyaa

Doobe Kabhi Tar Jaye

Tum Na Khewaiya Ho To

Koi Tat Kaise Paaye

Majdhaar Rehlaye

Tu Tumri Saran Aaye

Haan Tumri Saran Aaye

She opened her eyes only to see maan beside her,yes their marriage happened in wrong circumstances,bt whether maan get well or not she will never leave him& go with another person,she thought..she will leave only if maan wants her to leave him,she was after all a traditional Indian girl ..bt it was not only the tradition that bounded her to this relation,it was the feeling of happiness,the feeling of apnapan she yearned for & finally got fromthis family & specially maan..she looked at maan when no one.not even maan noticed..& sang..

Mein Hoon Tumhari

Hai Tumhara Yeh Mere Jeevan

Tumko Hi Dekhon Mein

Dekhun Koi Darpan

Bansi Ban Jaungi

In Hooton Ki Ho Jangui

In Sapno Se Jalthal

Hai Mera Maan Agan

Hain Mera Hmmm Hmmm

Geet was in rasoi,sam was in the hallroom with rest,the guests seemed to get gaga ovet the new khurana bahus specially geet..

Wa wa pratham ji kaha se aisi bahu wok o late hai app ek ek hira laye hai app,aur khass ka raj geet beti ne jo bhajan sunaya hai..muje to laga ki jaise KRISHNA DEWAANI MEERABAI sawayam ga rahi hai..

While in the other hand ladies surrounded meena..

Bata na tu itni khudgarz kyu ho rahi hai??

Ha yaar bata..koyi aur behen hai kya in dono ki,geet ki to cusin ya dur ke rishtedaar vi challenge,jo dekhne me ma LAXMI aur gun me MA SWARASWATI ho,uske kuch gun vi hamari bahuwo me ho hamare to kismat hi chamak jayegi'

someladies were talking among themselves..sam was passing by & heard their conversation she was getting irritated by all the phrases geet was receiving..

Kyun choti bahu hai na..

Ha wo to hai..wo vi acchi hi hai..lekin ..

Lekin kya??

Are wo bade bahu ke samne gun aut use vi zyada rup me uske aspass vi nahi ja sakti yaar..

Haye ! thik kaha tune,kaha badi baahu,aur kaha choti bahu..

Ha dekha nahi sari choti bahu ki zyada acchi thi,par geet zyada acchi lag rahi thi..

That's it..sam fumed & went to kitchen..

Geet was arranging food alone in the kitchen when sam pulled her by arm,her big nails pierced through geet's skin..she let out a agonished sob..di!!

Bada sauk haina tujhe mujhse zyada sundar dikhne ki??

Nahi di aisa nahi hai..

Zyada bholi banneki koshis mat kar..isiliye tune meri wali sari pehenli..

Lekin di sari to apne hi badla tha na..apko hi meri sari pasand aa gayi aur..

CHUP!! She shouted piercing her nails into her skin more..

Zyada zuban chalne lag gayi teri'bahout bolne lag gayi hai tu'.

Ab dekh main tera kya karti hu..

Ye jo sab tujhe itna sar pe charaya hai,inhi ki aankhoon me tere liye sirf nafrat hogi..

Nahi di..aisa nahi karo..ap jo bolegi main wo karungi..

Geet panicked..after a long wait she got love & did not want to loose it..

Bye sweetheart ..she smirked evilly

********

at night'

all were eating dinner while sam & geet were serving,geet went to grab something from kitchen..

sam said papaji..main apse ek baat puchna chahti hu..

SHILPA aunty..jin hone mere shadi me itna hungama khara kiya..kya wo apki relative hai???

Pratham & all stopped eating hearing this..

Pratham said nahi to beta..mujhe to laga ki wo apki koi rishtedar hai..ya apki koi frnd ki ma

Nahi to..maine to unhe pehli baar dekha tha..

Now all became serious..

Pratham asked seriously now..beta sach sach bataiye..app ko aisa kyu laga ki wo hamare rishtedaar hai??

Wo papa..sam saw geet was coming'

She acted as if she was scared..

Al lnoticed this ..sam getting scared when geet came..

Prathan said boliye beta..be jijak kahiye..

Wo ap logo ke naam unke taraf se ek letter aya tha..

Letter..mujhe dijiye..sam just ran to the drawer nearby , returned with a letter & gave it to pratham..looking again & again to geet with scared eyes trembling ,all noticed it while geet had a confused look on her face..

Pratham opened the letter'.

PRECAP- WHAT IS IN THAT LETTER???


Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
ab kay hoga geet se sab nafrat karege
yeh sam ki toh mein 😡
really i want maan hear all geet and sam conversation .
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
So again geet in trouble..
I hate sam...y she has to do this..
I hope maan vl b dere to give geet support..

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