New Abhi Nikki FF - From You to Me-Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@jyothi , Thanks so much sweetie . So happy to see you in this thread. Am posting the second part today.

@Rucha , thanks sweetie , par comment kyu nahi hai ??? Kidding , no compulsion for comments . I see your like so assume that you liked it. Kya karoo , you have always been so sweet that , I tend to get a little demanding .

@Nehu , Thanks . I know you loved this part when I put it up on the thread . So , thanks for that comment again. Waiting for your reaction on the rest of the FF


@Khush , No problem sweetie . We understand . Crack your exams and all the very best for them . Those are more important . Will wait for your comment .

@immayurfan , hi there and thanks a lot . Glad you liked the part and hope you like the rest of the FF too.

@Pri , thanks yaar . I am already so unforgivably late in joining AN on IF , so just trying to make up for that delay and if anyone's keeping the spirit alive , it is Mitzi . Hats off to you Mitzi.
offcourse not but whatever she would have chosen she would be in same spot. that is she doing something wrong.
Yes this is true . She was still confused about her exact feelings and she hadn't even admitted to herself . And then she had to confront either one of them . Of course , she couldn't , so she ended up staying silent .
Yes , they are not done with each other . Right now there is so much hate on his side and she has just realized her love and is wanting to sort things out desperately . AN in their vulnerability . Hope you like the rest of the FF too . Thanks so much for the comment , I have always loved your comments and this one's no exception.

anu008, cukish, hemvb, piya-jiya,
Thanks guys . Your likes mean a lot to us .

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Posted: 13 years ago
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And finally Mitzi , thanks to you for being my source and inspiration . This FF has seen its origin (and will see its end ) only because of you .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RESERVED!!!

Mujhe maaro mat, main tum sab se bohot pyaar karti hoon! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo shongo guys... :D :D

amazing work Pra. love your writting. Keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm loving your ff Pra and Mitzi's idea obviously. I have always loved your writing Pra and youknowthat, don't you?😃
First of all the poems at the start are so good, loved them.😃 And Iloved this update a lot. So our very own Suman Lata has made an appearance.*sigh* I never liked her in the show and obviously I'm not liking her here as well😉 but I'm looking forward to the story as per your point of view. 😉
Update soon!
PS I loved this line a lot
finding some odd comfort in the fact that she was still a part of his world ,by being a recipient to his hatred .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I can't hold myself any longer ... I have to comment on this heheheh
I just loved that You gave Nikki such a nice flashback .. instead of that stupid diary wala flashback that didnt make any sense ... and now it has just struck me ... if she had seen the pink suit ... the one she wore in AR roka .. tab kya hota haye...
I never hated Suman ... that much hehehe so I find Abhi and SUman dialogue v v believable ...
I always felt the scene where suman asks nikki for help and where Nikki was draged into the car by Suman and even the scene where lab ka darwaza band ho jaata hai .. these scenes had potential which was not exploited ...
So Abhi hits back at Nikki in the car ...oooh
But why does he forget her house and speeds away ?
He dsnt wait for her to get inside ...🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitzification

I can't hold myself any longer ... I have to comment on this heheheh

I just loved that You gave Nikki just a nice flashback .. instead of that stupid diary wala flashback that didnt make any sense ... and now it has just struck me ... if she had seen the pink suit ... the one she wore in AR roka .. tab kya hota haye...
I never hated Suman ... that much hehehe so I find Abhi and SUman dialogue v v believable ...
I always felt the scene where suman asks nikki for help and where Nikki was draged into the car by Suman and even the scene where lab ka darwaza band ho jaata hai .. these scenes had potential which was not exploited ...
So Abhi hits back at Nikki in the car ...oooh
But why does he forget her house and speeds away ?
He dsnt wait for her to get inside ...🥺

And I couldn't stop myself from quoting this one and tell you my point of view.
@bold I never said I did. But then I never liked her for some obvious reasons like being a die hard AN fan I hated her spoil some best of the intense AN moments. Arghh I so wanted to rip her apart back then.😆
@red I totally agree. In that car wala scene,I so wanted that specks wali ajeeb ladki should have been dropped at her place first and then I wanted to see only AN in the car. Kya hota tab?
And abt the the scene where they get locked in the lab,I already told you my point o view on that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OOh nice point ... wldnt it be fun if su was dropped first and it was just AN in the car ..hai ...
I am generaly saying people realy hate Suman ... i do too but not that much... some of her dialogues were really funny like ... ration card or passport bag mein rakha hai dikha doo ...heheh to prove she was real SLD..
of course CV's ruined some great AN scenes with her ... like lab and badminton court..aur uske baad to sab kuch he ruin kar diya unhone ...

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