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Posted: 13 years ago
part 23
OMG Maan and Vicky are twins...
poor Maan...
Geet will make him happy...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey awesome yaar..
I lov muski di's ff n dis ff is superb..
read it in one go, jst loved it..
Plz cont soon n pm me as well...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved muski di's Deewangi
and i loved this twisty deewangi
awesome story
plz continue soon and add me in your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago

Me read all the comments atleast 3 times!!!!!😆

thanks for encouraging me by your sweety comments!!!😳

A big hug to all those who comment and liked!!😳

Me has got my sessionals so i may not be able to update daily, but will try pakka, so forgive me if i vanish for a few days..😳
please buddy me for PMs...😳

PART - 24 (part 101)


"Bass abb hum aur nahi sunn sakte….aisee bahut si batein hain jinke bare mein aapko nahi pata….hum Raj se apne bete se bhi zyaada pyaar karte hain….Yaha tak ki humein Maan bhi itne pyaare sirf isliye hain kyunki unmein humein Raj ki chhavi dikhti hai…..Hum to…."

Dadima and Vicky were distracted by a crashing sound that came from the door. They looked in that direction and saw a devastated Maan standing on the door. Tears were running down his eyes. It was very clear that he had heard everything. Still Dadima tried to do some damage control.

"Beta aap kabb aaye.. hum to…."

She stopped when Maan showed his hand clearly asking her to halt her charade. He took a deep breath and finally whispered-

"Kya yeh sab sach hai?"

"Beta aap baithiye hum appko sab kuchh…."

"MAINE PUCHHA KYA YEH SACH HAI???? HAAN YA NAA???"

Both Dadima and Vicky jumped out of their skin at his outburst. Dadima lost her tongue and just sat down defeated. Vicky went towards Maan and kept a hand on his shoulder-

"Yup dude….yeh hi sach hai….You are my twin bro….Mera bhai…."

Maan looked up at him. He kept looking at him and then encaged him in a bone-crushing hug. Both Dadima and Vicky were shocked; they had expected a very different reaction. Anything and everything but not this. Maan finally broke the hug and said in a low voice-

"Main ne jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha, tab se hi pata nahi kyun I felt a connection….Main hamesha se chaahta tha ki mera bhi ekk parivaar ho….Haan yeh sach hai ki vo sapna Geet, maa aur Papaji ne pura kiya par phir bhi ek aaas thi….ki mera bhi koi bhai-behen ho, jise main chhed sakoon, pamper kar sakoon, apni zindagi ki baatein share kar sakoon….Main apne so called pita se nafrat karta tha aur unhi ke kaaran mera rishton par se vishwaas uth gaya…. humesha mujhe lagta tha ki kahin main unn jaisa darinda na bann jaaoon…. aaj mujhe iss baat ki behad khushi hai ki meri ragon mein ek bahut nek aur achchhe insaan ka khoon daudta hai….Parr saath hi saath kisi ke dhoka dene ka dukh bhi hai….."

He looked at Dadima with tears and accusation in his eyes while Dadima's heart broke to see the loss of warmth and love in his eyes for her.

"Maan beta….hum jaante hai ki humne bhi bahut si galtiyan ki hain parr humne uss waqt jo decision liya uske pichhe ek bahut bada kaaran hai….Shayad ek din aap dono puraa sach jaan ne ke baad humein maaf kar paayein…."

Maan and Vicky were confused but didn't probe on this matter further as they both could make out the feeling of dejection in Dadima's voice. Anyway they both wanted to cherish the feeling of togetherness and brotherly love after their long separation. Vicky tried to make the situation lighter-

"Dude….what is this tum..tum…. Better give me respect after all I am full 3 minutes elder to you…."

"What rubbish…."

He playfully punched Vicky. "OUCH". He punched him once again when he heard him moaning in a mock hurt tone and then hugged him. He asked rather stated the obvious-

"Geet ko sab kuchh pata tha na…."

Vicky nodded feeling relieved at his cool reaction about it at the same time confused. But still he was not surprised as these two people had a strange bond. He had seen Geet's Deewangi a lot of times in London too.

While Dadima was a little confused-

"Geet beta….Par vo kaise…."

"Savitri Devi ji….The nerd you think is Geet is not…..Yuck that creature can never be our Geet…."

Maan gave a small smile while Dadima was confused further.

"Yup….Rimi is not Geet….Maan ne apni asli Geet ko pehchaan liya tha….Don't give me those looks….And don't stress your brain….Meet is our Geet…."

Dadima looked at Vicky and started giggling. Now Maan and Vicky were super confused.

"arrey abb aap dono humein aise mat dekhiye….Humein to yeh tabse pata hai jab se Geet India wapas aayi hai…."

"WHAT????"

"Aur nahi to kya….after all my dadi is the best…."

Both of them were shocked when Geet came out of nowhere and gave dadima a hug while smirking at the Khurana brothers.

"Doll tumne mujhse itni badi baat chhupaayi….."

"Aur mujhe to tum Day 1 se hi bewkoof bana rahi ho…."

Geet cutely held her ears and said "Sorry" and made a cute crying baby face. Both of them melted and invited her in a group hug. She ran and hugged them and cutely said-

"Chalo chalo abb humein uss chudeil ko bhi theek karna hai…..Main jaanti hoon ki aap dono Dadi ma se naraaz ho par abhi ke liye just forget the gila-shikvaas and concentrate on that creature."

Dadima looked at Geet gratefully while Maan and Vicky couldn't help but agree to her.

"Haan after all humein uss kaminey tak pahuchna hai jo iss sab fasaad ki jadd hai….aur uss tak humein pahuchayegi yeh Rimi…."

Everyone smirked, while in Rimi's room, she was still trying Brij's number which was coming out of reach. She was perspiring badly while murmuring to herself-

"hey bhagwaan yeh kamina kahan marr gaya hai??? Yeh Khurana parivaar to Handa parivaar ke saath milke pata nahi mera kya karne waala hai…."

AIRPORT

Meanwhile the flight from London to Delhi had just landed. And two people had returned to India to support their family. They had come back home after more than two decades. They cherished the warmth of their DESH…..

"Haaye mera pyaara India abhi bhi utna hi sonna hai…."

"Tum sahi keh rahi ho bhaagyawaan….. Inn pichhle kucchhh barso mein vaise to hamare paas sab kuchh tha par yahi apne desh ki mitti ki mehek thi jise main ne sabse zyaada miss kia hai…."

Yes, they were none other than Raj Singh Khurana and his lovely wife Naina Singh Khurana.

Abb….ek Rimi…..aur 5 Khurana+ 2 Hanada + 1 Khurana cum Handa(Geet), Bahut naa insaafi hai re….😉😆


PRECAP

OFFICE mein ROMANCE parr…..😲


so dears hope you liked it!!!

I know ek aur emotional update hai...😆.

But trust me i couldn't help it…...😳

will wait for your views on this one…..😳


PREV - PART 23 NEXT - PART 25

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear
wow so maan accepted him as bro
thats good awesome
and geet lolz dadi new it im happy
now see rimi or shimi ke toh baand baaj ne wale hai
let see the precap also lolz
thanx for update dear
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem dadi knew geet from before maan got family raj naina back do next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Part...
Will wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow
wat an brotherly union

gr8 that geet is knowing everything

now will happen to rimi

excited to know that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it maan and vicky's scene was so touchy the update was great but short😭 but better something than nothing anyway loved it con soon

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