AK Excerpt |The Last Goodbye|

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banner by me =] it ended up huge :/
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nVtlzJ9I244[/YOUTUBE]

AK Excerpt - The Last Goodbye

It's supposed to be short so please don't complain on it's length -_- I completely love the song to the core! And it inspired me to write this. Here, the story is pretty sad, but I still try to ignite hope into the whole thing. I hope you all like it =]

I see her everyday.

No one would believe me. They said she was dead. Yes, to them she was but to me she was still there.

I always remembered Khushi's last words. She had said she'd never leave me, no matter how far she went away she'll always reside in me.

All I had was her memories but that was enough to keep me going. Life wasn't as bright but believing that she was around somehow consoled me.

I see her everyday.

I would look into the pictures, and remember those golden moments we spent together. Her smile was still fresh in my mind. I'd close my eyes and that bright smile would vividly come together. The sound of her anklets still rung into my ears. I'd still feel that Khushi would come running and the sound of her anklets would engulf the entire place into its beautiful rhythm. Her bright eyes twinkled as brightly as ever in those pictures. I'd still remember how she whispered 'I Love You' closely into my ears.

Her bangles lied lifelessly on the table.

Roses seemed colourless without her.

Summers lost its warmth.

That portrait of her in my room looked so alive. I could stare at it for hours.

The rain wasn't as beautiful anymore, but when I reminisced Khushi dancing in it, it would brighten up.

I lost so much, yet the hope would remain alive. I missed her every moment, and wished to find a way to bring her back.

Goodbye was never this hard to say to anyone.

Maybe, I'd find her. Somewhere...someday.

Link to blog - Last Goodbye


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww.. That was really heartbreaking..
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----Unresing-----Twixu :') That was brilliant,you brought tears to my eyes-and yes the real ones which make you feel all sentimental inside =') God -I see her everyday.I can imagine him dreaming of her smile🥺It was beautiful in a teary way-ermm I hope you get what I mean😆PS-banner and song breathtaking!
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After reading you first OS ijazat ( first for me that is) I'm all over the place reading your other works ( this one!) and I adore it! So beautiful!
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i cried alot...hate u for this😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fab update twixy! double update! 😳 luved it! ur creation is awsum!👏 really lokkin forward for more! thnx a ton for d pm!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I really liked it!!
Although I didnt understand much!!
Can u PM for ur future works!!!
Thanks!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Baby piece 👎🏼 Sad 😒 waise it was good one 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Aanchal_

Baby piece 👎🏼 Sad 😒 waise it was good one 👏



Arre aanchi excerpt that not OS!😳
I might continue both😆 if time permits...
And I lovee you..❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ss374

I really liked it!!
Although I didnt understand much!!
Can u PM for ur future works!!!
Thanks!!



That's the strangest comment I've ever got but thnx anyways!😆

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