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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

kitna time lagega pls tell



well writing dear...

may be late night or next morning...
sorry...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy



well writing dear...

may be late night or next morning...
sorry...😕

ok then im🥱 will read 2mrw😃
gud ni8 mahi dreams😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

ok then im🥱 will read 2mrw😃

gud ni8 mahi dreams😳




good night dear...
maihh dreams to you too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtib

when ru updating this



late night or next morning dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy15

awesum...👏

loved it😊




thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part...
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thanks daer
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Marv ' yah he did '. Anwesha's big brother did call her a gold-digger indirectly '..

He said when geet remained silent for long time '.

Marv ' damn these men '. What do they think of themselves '. Some one comes close to your family and you think they are behind your money '.

Rick ' well jash ' rose ' is there any connection between maan singh khurana and arnav singh raizada ???? since their activities seem very close ???

Khushi ' yah' they are cousines '..



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy






<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#990099">Marv ' yah he
did '. Anwesha's big brother did call her a gold-digger indirectly '..</font></font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#990099">He said when
geet remained silent for long time '. </font></font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#990099">Marv ' damn these
men '. What do they think of themselves '. Some one comes close to your family
and you think they are behind your money '. </font></font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#990099">Rick ' well jash
' rose ' is there any connection between maan singh khurana and arnav singh
raizada ???? since their activities seem very close ???</font></font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#990099">Khushi ' yah'
they are cousines '..</font></font>



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wow dear
asr too
do geet belongs to asr
why everything.ll be mystery
i thought this is love story
but again mystery love story dear
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It was after geet dragged marv out maan called annie inside ' when she walked in it was clear that she was irritated beyond limit'.. she entered the cabin and looked at maan '. As her eyes flickered around the room she saw her family sitting there '. As she looked at maan she saw him staring at her '

Annie ' you haven't called to stare at me bhai ' have you ????

She said irritatedly when he didn't say anything '.

Maan ' what was that scene outside annie ????

Annie ' you just don't need to worry about it bhai '

Maan ' really ??? is he bothering you annie ???

He again asked trying to keep his cool '.

Annie ' you don't need to bother about it' waise bhi aap kuch kar nahin sakte iss matter main' so just leave it '.

Maan ' you can say it since I am your brother .. and I have the right to know it '..

Annie ' shut it yaar ' do you realize bhai ' you are not just my brother but also you are THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA' MD of khurana constructions '.elder khurana '. And you are just not my brother ''

Maan ' what happened??? Kisine kuch kaha ??? do you want me to talk with geet ???

Annie ' really bhai ??? you don't know kya hua ??? she asked raising one brow '..

Just then a old lady sitting there asked'. Kya hua annie bte ????

Annie ' dadi '. Muskil se mere do dost bane the ' itne saalon ke baad do dost '. Bhai ne phirse sab kuch barbad kar diya ''.

Dadi ' ab kya kiya maan ne ????

Annie ' dadi ' aapko yaad hai main kehti thi ki mere do dost the marvin aur geet ???

Dadi ' haan '..

Annie ' geet bhai ki secretary hai' jo ladki abhi abhiaayi thi '. Aur marvin hai whoh ladka jise whoh lekar gayi'.. bhai ne jake marvin ko keh diya ki main anwesha singh khurana hoon '.

She said dejectedly as she sat down in the chair''

Mrs.khurana - toh phir problem kya hai ????

Annie ' problem kya nahin hai mama '. Un dono ko nahin pata tha ki main kaun hoon '. Marvin gussa hai' baat nahin kar raha hai ' and I am sure geet ko bhi jald hin pata chal jaega ki main kaun hoon'. Aur bhai ne use kuch kaha hai geet se '. Am I wrong bhai ????

Maan didn't say anything but just remained silence ' indeed he remembered every thing that he had said to her '..

Annie ' great bhai '. Just great'.. listen to me very carefully bhai '. Agar geet ne mujhse baat karna chod diya or she tries to keep distance with me '. Then I don't know how ' when and where ..but YOU ARE GOING TO BRING HER BACK'. Do you get that ???

Maan ' and why shall I do it ????

Annie ' believe me bhai ' anwesha singh khurana hoon '. Just aap pray karo ki whoh aisa kuch na karein '. Because if she does '. Then you are gonna bring her back'.

Maan ' I don't know what this girl has done to you annie '.. you are anwesha singh khurana and she is your brother's secretary '.. you don't have same classes princess '.

Annie ' no bhai '. She is different'. She never knew that I was your sister before she had accepted my friendship'.. and bhai the other reason is that anwesha singh khurana might not care for her thousands friends as they drool over her money and family ' but anwesha singh does cares about her two friends bhai'.. so bhai '. You better remember it '..

She said as she walked out of the cabin ''

Dadi ' I will one day meet this girl

Dev ' you should meet her '. I am sure you will like her '.. he said simling '..When maan looked at him with anger '. Come on bhai' you cant deny that she is not one of the girls we have met since long '. Anyways main annie ko leke ghar leke ja raha hoon

Yes she is different '.. maan thought as he smiled that didn't go unnoticed by his dadi '.

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After dragging marvin out of the office ' they sat in her scooty and went to their colony'.

Marv ' jash '. Please I swear I didn't do anything to her'..

Geet ' I know marv'. I am not angry on you '. Its just that you know I loose control very early '.

Marv ' thank god jash you are not angry on me' I thought that girl would create difference between us '..

Geet ' no one can create any difference between us marv '. Not even god

She said smiling as they were near to their place of residence he just kissed lightly on her head from back '..

Marv ' thanks jash '..

Geet ' no need '.

As soon as they parked the scooty near the car they were surrounded by a group of children'..

Didi' its not fare '. You cant be with bro when you are playing in opposite team ????

Geet - don't worry dear '. Its just that he came home with me '. Still we are playing in different teams '..

Marv ' wait for few minutes' we both are coming '.

He said as both geet and marv entered the huge cottage and went up the stairs and separated to their rooms that was in opposite directions''

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It was almost 2 pm in afternoon when a sumo halted outside one of the most expensive and highly sophisticated hotels of delhi '. As the 2 people got out of the car and walked in the 4 one went to park it'..

They entered the hotel and asked for a table for 4' as they were shown the table they made themselves comfortable and waited for the others to come '.. as they were sitiing in the table at one corner the girl said'.

Marv .. do you think jash will come with us tonight?????

Marv ' never rose '. she would say' I would prefer to read then to waste my time '..

Of course we very well know that she hates going to parties' disco' shopping and those stuffs '. So there is no way she is going to come'.

Anathor man said as he joined them and sat with them'..

Rose ' but sure we are going to ask her '.. but rick where were you????

Rick ' nothing yaar '. Just went to bring a rose for the beautiful girl sitting in front of me '..

He said as he handed rose a red rose '..

Well rick if you can just go on your knees and ask her it would be perfect for a official relation '.. wont it be ?????

A female voice was heard as geet sat with them near marv'.

Rick ' come on jash'. What will my girl friend do if she will know that I have proposed her ????

Rose ' possibly kill you rick ''

Rick ' very funny '. Ms.khusi kaur grewal '..

He said as he made a sad face and after some time they burst out laughing '' as the waiter came up to them and asked for their orders ' they placed their order and continued to talk '.

girls -


boys ..


Rick ' so how was the shopping ????

Khushi ' awesome' I never enjoyed it so much '..

Geet ' I really don't know how you gies enjoy this stupid thing going from one shop to other '. Holding bags'. With the people staring at you '. It's the yukiest thing I have ever seen '.

Khushi ' for god's sake jash '. You are a girl ' please at least remember it and talk some time like one '..

Geet ' of course I am a girl rose '. I don't think any one doubts that '. And enlighten me how do girl talk like this ????

Ooww '. Your nails are so beautiful which brand's nail enamel you use ' loreal ??? lakme ???

Oww' your purse '. Are so good ' your sandals' your hairs ''

These are the typical womanish thing that makes a women chipku and clumsy '..

Yak' yak'. And yak'..

And then their order arrived '.

Rick ' cool down jash' ever since you have joined the office you are becoming aggressive very soon' this is not you' yesterday you almost killed yourself ' this is not you ' what is happening?????

Khushi ' yes it has seriously started to worry us '..

Geet ' I just don't know ' I have marked my change in behavior ' its just that ' she closed her eyes and gave a sigh ''

Rick ' what happened???? He asked as he kept a hand on her shoulder '..

Geet ' I don't know '. Every moment '. Every second being there makes me so much defensive '. As if something related to that office ' to those khuranas jaise ki it is related to him'.. Kitna bhi avoid karna cahoon nahin hota '. Kal bhi yaar bewajah bechari anwesha pe chilla diya '.

Rick ' anwesha singh khurana '. Sister of maan singh khurana right????

Geet ' yah '. She again gace a sigh and looked down at her plate ' and then laughed lightly '. I seriously think that I need a physchiatric soon if I don't wish to kill some one'.

There was a silence in the table for few minutes as all were eating their lunch when suddenly

Rick ' kitne dino ka contract hai ????

Geet ' 1year 3 months '.. usually its for 2 years but I am a student and my course is of 2 years so dev sir ne ise 1.3 years ka bana diya''

Khushi ' exactly the same time jab mera contract khatam hota hai '. 1.3 years'.

Rick ' did any one from the office say anything to you geet ???

Marv ' yah he did '. Anwesha's big brother did call her a gold-digger indirectly '..

He said when geet remained silent for long time '.

Marv ' damn these men '. What do they think of themselves '. Some one comes close to your family and you think they are behind your money '.

Rick ' well jash ' rose ' is there any connection between maan singh khurana and arnav singh raizada ???? since their activities seem very close ???

Khushi ' yah' they are cousines '..

Rick ' very good'.. and now girls if the condition goes very bad I will talk with dad and he would break your contracts '..

Geet ' koi jarurat nahin hai yaar '.. waise bhi contract ke baad we are going to leave the job '..

Khushi ' yah' any ways us time pe hamari summer ke internship hoti hai ' compulsory ' and then hamare final semisters '. 2nd year main career ke saath compromise nahin kar sakte '..

Geet ' right '.

Rick ' hmm' last question ' are you going ask her why she didn't tell you about her real identity ????

Geet ' no ' I will wait till she herself believs me to tell who she is ' I wont force her or ask her '. Unless the situation goes out of my control '..

khushi ' what does you mean by situation goes out of your control ?????

rick ' it means she is forced to do something she doesn't wants to'.. leave that yaar waise yeh bata ki you are coming to the show ????

geet ' never rick' you know I would prefer to stay in my room than watch some semi-nude babe walking in the stage showing her sexy legs and other things '. I hate these free shows '.

And saying she shrugged her shoulders '.

Rick ' you know jash.. this is what we adore about you '. How are you like this yaar ' had we not been the way we are now I am sure I would have proposed you by now '..

Geet ' trying to flirt with me advocate rick o' connel ???? or trying to impress me haan ????

She asked him teasingly and smiled a wicked one '..

Rick ' haye jash'. Mar jawan '. And anyways I don't need to try to impress you because I have already impressed you '..

Geet ' really ??? so confident ????

Rick ' of course ' warna tu mere saath lunch nahin kar rahi hoti''

Geet ' huh' boy there are other two sitting with us '. So itna udne ki jarurat nehin hai '..

Rick ' fine!! Fine!! I admit defeat '. Waise jash kal main office main tha'. You had lost the match but by how many runs ???

Geet ' one run ' mere team ka 354 ' and franco ka 355 '..

Khushi ' it was so much fun during the match '. Geet was sure to do a last 6 ' then iski team jeet jati but then suddenly you what happened '..

Rick ' hmm' aunty ne kaha ' I am amazed how did you loose your concentration ????

Geet ' I don't know rick but yaar nearly about from last Friday .. remember I had been to taj with mule '.since then I am feeling that some one is watching me every where I go '. Yesterday too I thought I saw someone clicking pictures that's why the bat slipped from my hand '..

Marv - are you sure that you are not imagining ????

Geet ' I too think that I might be hallucinating '. It might be due to excess stress '..

She said as she moved her hand through her long hairs that were tied in a loose pony pushed to one side '.. and she tied her hairs in a bun '.

Khushi ' no she is not hallucinating'. Because I have also seen that man yesterday

Rick don't worry ' we will see to it jab hum ghar jaenge right ???? waise jash' who is mule ????

Geet ' mule snake koala 'MSK '.

And then as she said it they laughed '. Loud and heart out '.

Rick ' he is your MD right '. I get it ' all these days you were cursing your MD'. And I thought you called him robort silencer khurana '..

Marv ' robort I get it but silencer ?????

Geet ' hai babaji' she said while she kept a hand on her forehead ' that man you wont believ him '. 14 hours ' till date I have seen him 14 hours sitting in that cabin and working'. Constantly' jab meeting hota hai ' alag baat hoti hai if not tab mule ka saar kisi na kisi file main ghus ke rehta hai '.. and he works in so much speed ki pooch mat '. And so I call him robort ''

And silencer because he never speaks '. Mule bas ghoorte rehte hain '. The only time you can hear him speak is the time when he shouts on his employees '. And the second reason is that the way he stares at others ki doosron ki bolti band ho jati hai '. So the name silencer '..

Rick ' I see that your habit of giving names has not yet gone '.

Geet ' sorry rick its in built ' cant really help it '..

Marv ' and what would happen if one day he comes to know about it ?????

Geet ' no!!! please don't say like this ' because that day will be my last ' gussa hamesha naak pe rehta hai yaar '. Don't know what he will do'

Marv ' anyways today you are not coming to the concert right' soch le kashmira aa rahi hai '..

Geet ' who is this kashmira now ????

Khushi ' she is the topmost model '..

Geet ' okies ' yes I am NOT coming '..

Marv ' well then next Friday ??? we have planned a outing ' to the '.

Geet ' none of us are going anywhere '..

Rick ' why ??? why are we not going anywhere ??? come on yaar ' next Sunday we have Christmas and before that ''

He stopped abruptly '..

Geet ' yaad aaya ???? I am sure marv has forgotten '..

Marv ' kya hua ???? he looked at her in a defensive way as if to fight if the fact was wrong'.

Geet ' dear marvin I am very glad to say that this Friday on 23 december you have your parent's marriage anniversary

Marv ' shit ' shit .. shit ' how did I forget it ???? he said to himself '..

Khushi ' yah marv how did you forget it ????

Marv ' come on jash ' of course I knew ki tumhe yaad hoga toh mujhe kya tension lena hai '. Anyways kya planning kiya hai ????

Geet ' hmm ' soocha hai ki is baar kuch special karenge'. What about getting them married again ???? she said while sipping the cold drink

Rick ' wow that's a good idea '. But yaar ek baat bata '' whoh kaun hai ????

Geet ' kaun??? Kiski baat kar raha hai????

Rick ' whoh aadmi yaar'. Jo hamare table ke side main baitha hai ' useless man '. Starring like he will kill you any moment '.

But as she looked at the man the drink spilled and she began to cough badly '' rick patted her '.

Rick ' what happened ???/ who is he ??? do you know him?????

Geet ' gadhe .. pehle nahin bata sakta tha ???? he is maan sir '..

Rick ' who is maan ??? mule ???? robot??? Your MD???

Geet ' chup kar rick' chup kar' wahi hai'.

She said pressing her teeths and trying to hide herself '. But marv then called her '. He is calling you'.

Geet ' kaun???

And then she looked slowly towards maan and gave a nervous smile '.

Geet ' he he he .. hie sir'..

Maan ' what did you call me ??? robot ????

Geet - n..n..o'no..s..s..sir '.

Maan - Mole ?????

Geet ' its mule sir '..

But before he could answer anything anathor sound came to them '

So here are handa and grewal ' and who are these boys handa ??? your boyfriends or body guards ????

Geet ' lo isiki kamithi '..

She said as she turned to see the most unwelcoming sight ' her most favorite enemy ' vikrant singh'..

Geet ' had I not been with my friends singh .. then believ me for the most lowly activity that you have been doing ' I would have run the car over you '.. TWICE '..

Vikrant ' you and grewal will die before you take the next breath '.

Khushi ' challenging us singh ???? you wont be able to do anything'..

Vikrant - I am a rajput ' grewal'. Don't challenge me '. I have not learnt to loose '.

khushi - hum sikni hain '. Harna hamare khoon main nahin mr.vikrant singh ''

khushi said with a smile that was mocking and challenging '. As vikrant was about to go khushi said ... yeh sab fizul ki harkat karna chode singh warna pitega kisi din '.

Vikrant - dekhte hain grewal kaun pit ta hai kaun nahin ' chalta hoon ' good bye '.

Geet ' kya jarurat thi use kuch kehne ki'. Tu janti hai us ladke ko ' bina baat ke bakheda suru kar dega '.

Khushi ' so you want me to keep quiet '.

Geet ' no' par insaan dekh ke baat kar '. Yeh ek number ka kamina hai jo apni matlab ke liye kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hai ' so you need to shutyour mouth '

After all silence is better than regrettion '

Rick ' right ' what she said is right khushi ' anyways lets go '. We are getting late for our concert '.

After paying the bill they left the hotel not once looking back'..

next...


what will maan do in office ?????😳


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