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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 20
M:It not important okay

Maan got irritated and threw the bracelet out of the room.

M:GEET DOENS'T HAVE ANY AFFECT ON ME I NEVER LOVED AND I CAN NEVER LOVE SUCH A LOW GIRL GOT IT.

Maan walked angry into the shower.Emma sighed.Geet was just passing by went she heard Maan scream that. Maneet wanted a ice cream from this hotel. He loved the ice cream from here.But when geet was leaving with the ice the ice cream fell from her hand. She went to the washroom to clean it up, while Maneet was waiting in the car. The washroom was next to Maan's room. When she walked outside the washroom. Her bracelet fell on her. She picked it up, that's when she heard Maan scream.That he never loved her and that he can never love such a low girl.She presumed he must be talking to his wife. So his wife nows about her. Does she know her wife.

The city of angles is lonely night
Keep themselves alive by candle light
Say she can't love you like I do
Look me in the eyes and say it's true
I ask myself, is this love at all?
When I need you the most you let me fall


Geet felt like breaking down there on the spot. She put the bracelet in het pocket and walked outside. With a lot of diffuclty she acted like nothing was wrong, while inside she was torn apart.

I'm always here at the side of your stage
Would you live your life and pretend I'm okay
I'll be okay
I'll hold you close will stay forever


She openend the door of the car and sat inside. She saw
Maneet's lips moving.
She persumed he was asking something
but she didn't hear anything. She smiled weakly and
started the car.



I, I don't understand, now without you I can't breath
Please don't, don't leave me here
Take my hand and I'll plead into tears
I don't understand why you can't
Take me with along

She saw Maneet staring at her. She took a deep breath and started riding.
She was to scared to talk. She was scared that if she would open her mouth
she would start sobbing.


You can't pretend that I don't excist.
I hope you hurt when your walls fall down
When you hear the sound that I'm okay
I'll be okay

She openend the door of the car and walked
to her room as fast as her legs could carry her.
Whitout looking behind her she shouted. Maneet go
change then we'll eat together. She went to her room and
lay on her bed sobbing.

I watched you leave I'm awake tonight
And I'm ready to go for the last time
And through the tears I say goodbye
So breath in, breath in, breath in, breath out


She calmed down after crying a bit. She wiped her tears.

Geet's monologue

Come on Geet you always knew what he said today. What's new about it he just confirmed it.However I always thought he used love even when I used to deny gosh how wrong I was.

Geet heard her door opening. She sat on her bed. And tried to make a happy face. Maneet peeped in.

M:Mom are you okay. did something happen at the hotel
G:What no what makes you think that

Maneet came and sat on Geet's lap

M:Mom you came back without ice cream

Geet smacked her head

G:Maneet you mom is getting old sorry sweety I forgot. I bought it but it fell. Then I cleaned my dress and came back to the car. Come on let s have dinner I will and I will send Ramu kaka to get you your ice cream
M:Alright mommy let's go

Maneet grabbed Geet's arm and walked with her to the kitchen.

Emma ordered dinner. Maan came out of the shower. He saw that Emma had set up a candle night dinner. She was wearing a red short dress with red lipstick. Maan felt like trowing up. But he straighten himself and walked up to her.

M:You orderd
E:Yes I orderd salad and chicken you love that right
M:Right yummy (Yuck Maan thought, but he never said anything to Emma. He felt that she going through enough because of him)

Emma grabbed Maans hand. Maan tried to push her hand away.

M:Emma I can't eat like that
E:I will make you eat
M:Great but how will you eat. Oh Maan don't worry. She said smilling weirdly.
E:Maan you now D&G is my favorite clothing company. I would love to meet the MD of that company. But Maan what where you doing there.
M:Ehm I tried to set up a appointment with the MD. Thats your surprise
E:And
M:Her sectary promised to call me back
E:OMG you know what I would love If she would design a exclusive dress for me.
M:Yeah that would be great if we meet her you can ask her. Emma I have a important client to meet. I have to go.

He stood up, loosen his hand. Emma also stood up

E:But Maan you haven't eaten properly and Adi said you are here not for work.
M:True but I saw a client. And we started talking and he want me to come and see some construction site so I need to go or else I will be late.
E:But Maan

Maan walked out of the door. He smacked the door behind him. Leaving a bewildered Emma behind. Emma grabbed her purse and decided to followed Maan


Maan walked on the beach feeling all irritated.He didn't like the way Emma was behaving

Maan's monologue

Why was Emma behaving like that. And what the hell was she wearing. And why was she acting so weird. I know I told her we would start a new life together, but I can't. Yes I don't love Geet anymore. At least I am trying not to love her anymore. Why is that so difficult, when she is acting all so close with that stupid Ronald guy. Feel liking hitting the day light out of him again. I can't deceive Emma and myself by acting nothing is wrong. I now for a matter of fact that I never can love another girl. I am even not in the state to give her the dress Geet Made her. I just can't gift another girl a dress like I used to do it for Geet. Why is it so dahm difficult. he took a deep breath. Thats why I lied to her. Well I will arrange a meeting with Geet. I don't if that's such a good idea. Well will see, at least then Emma can make Geet design a dress for her. But first I will be needing the dress Geet made. Emma can't get the dress I picked. She won't like it anyways. She loves to wear short dresses YUCK. In the start she didn't. I don't know what went wrong with her. In the beginning of our marriage. she always used to wear decent dresses just like Geet

Suddenly Maan felt a arm on his shoulder. He turned around.

E:So this was you important meeting.
M:Emma what are you doing her
E:I should ask you that Maan
M:Emma I am sorry. I just felt weird with your behavior. Sorry but I just want to be friends. You now na I don't mind if you want to date someone else. We promised each other we would marry only for our parents sake and life like friends.
E:Maan that was ten years a go and I love you now. Pleas move on. Geet was never worth you.
M:Stop bringing Geet up. Listen I can't deceive you by saying that I will be able to love I can't I am sorry Em pleas forgive

Emma busted in tears.

E:WHy because you still love that witch
M:EMMA
E:Why don't you admit it Maan you still love her dahm'it even after c
she cheated on you.
M:Dahm't YES I LOVE. I STILL LOVE GEET.
E:Maan

Emma fell on the ground sobbing. Maan sat next to her.

M:Sorry Em. I would never go back to her cause on one side she cheated me but my heart can't stop me from loving her . Sorry for ruining your life.
E:No maan it's not your fault. let's go home

Emma stood up.

M:Sorry
E:It's ok. I guess you like cheaters.And of course you don't love me cause I can never be a disgusting and cheap person like her. And you only like cheap people.
M:Emma stop it. Let's go home

Emma walked angerly to the car.
While Maan was a bit irritated he didn't like the way Emma was talking about Geet. Even though he knew she was right. What geet did was really low and cheap

precap: what happened between Maan and Geet?What was Ronald's part in all this?

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54267275

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
R*edit*

Celebrations time baby..im first this time...yohoo!!!!

Okay so now I can see where u r movin the story..
Urgh!!!I hate EMMA...

How the hell cud she say that she's not cheap as geet???
Stupid girl,get lost!!!!wat u did was way too monstrous that wat geet'd hav done!!!
Poor Maan,he still luvs her so much...i feel bad fr geet do..
My heart squeezed wen Maneet asked her wer his icecream was amd the way she triied to control her tears ..

Lov ya mel fr dis one..muah
Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the update...
very curious...wanna know wat happened...
i feel EM has a lot of things to do in the past...
waiting update soon...
stong emoyions yaar...
loved it
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...i hate emma 🤣 she is no.1 witch
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..
I m definitely sure emma has hands in separating maneet..
atleast maan admitted he luvs geet..
But y geet s not trying to show that she s innocent..
Then she shud leave maan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

hate dat emma n all of geet's family...i want all of dem killed with my bare hands...i felt disgusting...but m angry more with maan...i hate him...but plz let him b pure fr geet...

one request...plz end dis mu b/w maan n geet...i cant see both of dem apart...dey meant to b together...plz do dat if u can...


i loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a beautiful update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 20
nice part...
poor Geet...
i just want Maan to know the truth and then Geet should not forgive him easily...
wanna see him grovel and plead and beg Geet for forgiveness...
and Emma better control ur tongue and language...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: *Dakoo_Minzy*

nice update...i hate emma 🤣 she is no.1 witch


glad you liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome update...

hate dat emma n all of geet's family...i want all of dem killed with my bare hands...i felt disgusting...but m angry more with maan...i hate him...but plz let him b pure fr geet...

one request...plz end dis mu b/w maan n geet...i cant see both of dem apart...dey meant to b together...plz do dat if u can...


i loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a beautiful update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...


you still hate maan don't worry you will love him again I will make you😆 nobody hates The Maan singh khurana😆
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Posted: 13 years ago


I am waiting to know what happened that Maan thinks so low of Geet...what is the role of Ronald...if Ronald feels really sorry for what he did he should tell all this to Maan...

I think Geet also don't know why Maan thinks about her like this...

I really hate Emma...

thank God Maan realized that although he hates Geet but still he can love her only and he is not going to gift that dress to Emma...he feels like throwing up when he see Emma in short dress trying to seduce him so it means he still feels that Geet is the only girl who he feels is beautiful for him...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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