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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Lovely update dii..
The race ws exciting and well written...
But that addy is scaring me..HOpe he wont do any harm to mayank...
Cont soon dii..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Amazing update

Loved the racing part.

Yeahhh!!!!!Mayank won the race...Yipee


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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hello fiza-ji... OMG this was so damn interesting :D looking fwd to the next part... awesome!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
nic update
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
amazing story line...
both the part are superb...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Interesting di...and pic description is good.
sorry for short comment but its superb update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
nice dear.
i like ur new style of writing... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Sorry for being so late..though this chapter was already written. I am lazy I know tht

Thanku so much… I am actually overwhelmed with the response though initially I was very apprehensive about the concept ..thanku so much…I know u all r waiting for Nupur… she will join them, actually they will join her, but a little delayed.. let the plot set to strt a love story

Thanks a lot

fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MEHAK(CLUSTERSOFSTAR) AND PARUL



Chapter: 3

It has been a week to the race Mayank has won, and he was done with his car repairing and all. Chilling on the beach he was having loads of fun there. Just than his cell buzzes and he looked at it with a smirk..

Mayank: so addy' missing me'

Addy: so what is the plan

Mayank: whts are u cooking haan'.

Addy: when race like a man

Mayank: really for a change u are racing like a man, wht u always race like a chiken,,

Addy: watch ur words'.huh..if u really have guts that I so doubt come on the race'

Mayank: donot even speak about Mackz guts..get it'you donot know me'where and when

Addy: now on main street

Mayank: WHT'.r u nuts

Addy: woo woo wo..so Mr Mackz is scrared '

Mayank: that's illegal addy, we both will be in jail

Addy: simply say that u are scared to do so'ur a coward MAckz..its a man style not for u kids

Mayank: I am not scared got it'.i ll show u 'see ya in 10 mins at the main street'

''..

Ben: have u lost it or wht'it's the main street the most crowded, u will not only be charged of high speeding plus u will come in eyes of policy ..mackz it's a clear suicide..

Mayank: ben are u getting on track or not'I need u to be there so that u can clear the area , u know it's the most busiest street..

Ben: I am cuming but I am still telling u addy is just trapping you'say no to him

Mayank: I wont sat no ..if u want can come if donot ..bye'

He hanged up the phone and went to take his car on the road..

He knew its dam risky, its crowded, its illegal, and it is a trap . yet Mackz has been challenged and tht he cant deny to prove he is the best'

Reaching at the lane, he looked around for addy, benji joined him..

Ben: where is addy

Mayank: don't know..

His cell runged ..

Change of plan addy'ur out of race'

Addt: in ur dreams kiddy'.i am on the track at your front, the blue car near the end off lane we cant strt it together'

Mayank: so addy though he cant win it, yet he should strt in front, oki gave u that point'

Game began in '.3'.2'.1..

He put his car in gear and rushed it through he lane'it was busy hell busy. Making way in between so many cars was not tht so easy, addy was in lead as he started in front, while benji was beside mayank in his own car to check every thing'

Mayank took over take the cars from left and reach near addy, just than a black car come infornt of him, he took left, the car took left , he took right the car took right, he got its addy's boys who are trying to make it difficult'

Mayank: ben..looks like we have loads of company around

Ben: ya I am seeing, let me escort them'cuming up'.

Ben cum beside mayank and placed his car almost touching mayanks, the were driving in sych, and were touching the edge of the black car'.

3..2'1'

With the that mayank took left and benji right, yet both put there cars in low gear and switch the sides , and put full accelerating making mayank and ben car bypassing the black one'

Mayank: woo hoo'.

Addy was lost he couldn't see him, he rushed through the car, broke the signals, a car was cuming from left he turned his car sharply at right and made his way, while the left behind car crashed with the car cuming form the back

Mayank: oops' sorry 'didn't mean to hurt ur lady'

Ben: there he is mckz

Mayank: yup I see him..i see him'

He was moving fast, turning his car left and right, cutting throw the cars tucks and buses, making his way towards addy, he reach beside addy and smiled widely..

Addy was taken a back with his sp quick recovery and chase of him, but he knew he has to many back plan in his mind, and this just not a race for him, it a full on revenge of the lost bet'

Addy: guys it's the time'he called his boys'and took turned to right waving mayank with a smirk

Mayank was surprise the way addy left the track as this was the link to the other road'

Ben: I told u it's a trap man'.mackz get aside'.

Before mayank got react to anything , there were 8 cars that completely blocked him from all around'two at the back two at front and two at the either side'

The side cars hit mayanks car but he maintain his car balance some how..he cant lower his speed as the speed of the cars behind was to much he will be crashed infront cars if he did so 'the back car lower it speed for a second and than gaining it hit his car with so much power, so that his car crashed into the front car, but it didn't happen,

The front two cars move to either side at once making way for mayanks car..and this was it

Mayank: crab'his eyes widen

His car was in such speed that he could control it and in front of him was a truck full of cars, his car went up in the air , and flipped twice , bang on crashed with it,

The truck stoped and soon the police joined to..benji stopped his car and rushed towards mackz car'there was blood, broken glass piece all around and a total crashed car

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
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very nice update Fiza.

totally different type of FF ... so different writing style of urs n another different type of ff.

thank u so much for giving us such beautiful ffs.

thanks a lot.

mayank was such a unique character her ... mackz

a total different guy ... only faithful of his racing.

love the racing ... it was so exciting ...its seems like i was there witness of those allz

love it loads.

beautiful writting.

continue soon.

love ya ...



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago

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