kriyansh ultimate luv confession..FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I had a thought of this many days ago...during my G.K. exam...<the paper was of one n a half hrs...aur sabne aadhe ghante me hi poora kar liya tha >...fir suddenly i thought of rey ka rone wala chehra ...lekin fir socha ki chalo kuch accha hi soch lu...so dn i had a thought ki kriyansh k luv confession wale scene ko thoda sa reconstruct karu...<i know ki abhi sab log kriyansh k horrible track se nafrat karne lage hai lekin...fir bhi...chalo thoda refresh ho jaye... >well it wud be my first ff which i hav posted...hope u'll lyk it... i did'nt had tym 2 update dis b4 coz of my examz...

Here it starts...!

PART 1

its a canteen scene, kriya and swayam are sitting together (opposite to each othr).and on the other side i.e. , near by our dude aka ReY was there with "NicOLe"...tHey were discussing about the dance fest...kriyansh were sitting in such a position that they faced each other{ i hope u got the sitting arrangement made by me... } Har bar ki tarah iss bar bhi kriya was jealous seeing rey and nicole together and as alwayz rey apne "MiSSiON: KRiYA GHAi" mein focus kar raha tha...

{}KriYa: whot the hell does he thinks of himself??<in a low tone>

{}swayam: hmm...!????

{}kriya: hmmm...?? kya??

{}swayam: wot kya..??tumne abi kuch kaha...?

{}KriYa: nnn..na..nahi..! mene kuch bhi toh nhi kaha...!me toh kabse chup baithi hu...She thought in her mind: rey ko toh bas bahane chahiye...! CaSaNoVa kahin ka...!me toh assistant hu,,,muje bhi bula sakta tha, bt y do i care...??? y the hell am i thinking of him...?

{}swayam: KriYa...KriYa..!!(he shaked his hand in front of her eyes...right to left..!and then left to right...!) hellooo...kriyaa...??????

she was irritaed with what swayam was doing...she was unable to see rey...!

{}KriYa: kya hai...? aur ye kya kar rahe ho...andhi nhi hui hu mein..!abhi bhi meri aanhke thik hai..ok!!

She again started staring at rey and nicole...!

{}swayam: ok...sorry...! <to himself: ye itna wierd kyu behave kar rahi hai...!>

he was really confused...!suddenly he saw kriya staring someone...he turned around and the view which he saw was not very surprising...he undrstood dt rey mahashay apni batcutter ko jalane me laga tha...

{}swayam: lage raho beta, good going...!

{}KriYa: wot...??tumne abhi kya kaha..??<confused>

{}swayam: <to himself> damm...did i said it loud..??

he said to kriya: no..!!mene kahan kuch kaha...?

he thought dt he shud change the topic...!vaise KriYa tum baar-baar rey aur nicole mam ko kyu dkh rahi ho..??

{}KriYa:<to herself>helll...did he saw me staring...at rey..(actually she was keeping an eye on them)

she quickly said: haan...!mera matlab hai nhi...!me kyu dekhu un dono ko...!mere paas aur koi kaam nhi hai kya...??

{}swayam: <to himself: notanki...!> vaise kriya...

He was about to say sumthing to her lekin beech pe Sharon tapak gyi...!

{}Sharon: swayam...suno...!

{}swayam: haan...Bolo...!!kya hua..??

{}Sharon: swayam tum...<she was intruppted seeing kria..."JeaLoUS...!"bechari Sharon...kria ko swayam k sath dekh k jealous ho gyi...!so sweet of the girls...>

{}swayam: Sharon...???????????tumhe kuch kehna tha kya...??

Sharon came back to her senses...

{}Sharon: haan...vo tumne dance fest ki saari reports bana li..??

{}swayam: haan...bas ek last wali baki hai...!!bt i'll make sure ki me tumhe vo files aaj hi de du...!

{}Sharon: haan...chalo theek hai...!ok then...

Swayam was shocked...(he said to himself: itne pyaar se baat kar rahi hai...i cant believe...) bt yes...she had spoken sooo...politely that kriya did'nt even noticed that sum one was there...she was busy investigating...

Sharon realized that she had spoken so sweetly to him...she cud not digest it...she saw kriya again...and once again she felt "jealous" aur fir hona kya tha...sharon said with 100% attitude on her face...

{}Sharon: u know wot...!!u shud better be quick...!

Finally ...(1)Sharon ka avatar was back...(bura wala...)

(2)aur kriya came back to her senses n saw Sharon...!

(3)and swayam said to himself..."back on her track..!"

Sharon was about to leave bt on her way se saw rey and Nicole...and said: rey...??nicole mam k sath...!! she was loud enough...Kriya heard it...

Sharon thought : kriya rey ki assistant hai toh fir y d hell is she with swayam...???bechara rey...!!sara work load uss k upar...!and then she went away...

KriYa thought : jab Sharon apne assistant se kaam karwa sakti hai toh fir iss rey ko kya problem hoti hai...!!sab toh ye hi sochte honge ki A.G.S. bilkul kaam hi nhi karti...!

{}swayam : kriya tum fir se rey ko dekh rhi ho...!

{}KriYa: swayam...!tum plzz...apne kaam me concentrate karo na...<irritated>

{}swayam : kriya u know whot...tum bilkul unn girls k tarah behave kar rahi ho jo apne BF ko kisi aur ladki k sath dekh leti hai...!!!! and then the only thing...

a girl's BF wth other chick= ""JEALOUSY""

sooo...r u jealous...???????

This was my first chapter (a bit long...) i know issme kriyansh bilkul bhi nhi tha...!!lekin fir bhi...thoda wait karo...! if u lykd it then plzzz...do coment...i wud luv to read ur comments...!

NeXt CHaPTeR: rey's holding nicole's hand...kriya z loosing her temper...her eyes are filled with tears...she tried to clench her fist in which she held the glass...aur fir hona kyat ha...it broke out...'''BLOOD...BLOOD...all around...'''

CHAPTER 2- PG 6

NEW PROMO-PG 9

CHAPTER 3-PG 12

CHAPTER 4-PG 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh
ha kafi achca tha wo chepter
jelsi...
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Very nice start dear. Plz do pm me whenever u update.
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wow..it was gud even though kriyaansh wasnt der...waiting for d next part...pls pm me i added you!!
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Awesome concept
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hey its lovely plz pm me next time wen u update
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awesome start...bechara swayam to buri tarah se phas gaya kria and sharon dono hi bechare swayam par chilla rahi thi🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣poor swayam...but loved kria jealous she is sooo cute
continue soon precap is fabulous waiting eagerly for next part and please pm me
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plz update soon and pm me when u update
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awesum loved d start do pm me plz
precap was breath taking update soon
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awww...this is sooo cute...!!1 loved it...!!!!!
please PM me when u update next..!!!!!

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