Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 3 pt 47 pg130 - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum
still so much suspense is there.
hope maan realise his feelings soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m speechless
superb!!
awsum!!
suseil is a nice girl1👏feeling bad 4 her
precape is interesting.finally maan is going to accept his love
but who sid that he doesnt deserve her.
eagerly waiting 4 mxt part.⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
mishty this is for u dear

and for the update

suzeil is so cute feeling bad for her
its un believable maan's dad used him for his project.
precap is interesting.maan wil realise his love n accept it that geet is just not his best frnd but more than that.

eagerly waiting for the nxt pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing...maan is realising everything slowly...loved suzeil...
Precap is interesting
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar plz update today plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm for part 45 n 36..superb updates
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Part 47



suzeil smiled, "i do maan..i do..i do hold a special place in ur life...but im not ur life maan.."

**************

maan removed his hand from hers n looked away...his heart was beating terribly fast..he had no answer for her

words..sumwhere he also hav started to realize it...

"suzeil..u r over reacting..i just need time dats it.."

suzeil smiled...god when dis idiot vil learn to read his own heart...cnt he see dis simple thing dat he loves geet n

not me...cnt he understand his insane possessiveness towrds geet..cnt he understand he loves geet more dan

anything...

"maan..im not over reacting..its u who needs to understand ur heart.."

maan closed his eyes n walked away from her, "suzeil im already very much confused..plzz dnt strt again or i vil go

creazy..."

suzeil was getting irritated now...why is he being so ignorant to d simple fact..grhh d idiot he is..

"maan i vil ask u a simple question..vil u answer me honestly.."

"wat is it ??.."

and suzeil hit d hard " do u love GEET ?? ..."

WATT

maan turned in a swift n stared at her shocked..dazed..like he might hav seen sum ghost...

"maan answer me..do u love geet.."

maan was still in d shock...love..n geet..wat rubbish..how can he love geet..she is...she...she is his best..oughh why

he cnt speak dat simple line.she is his best frnd...his more confused heart..started to blast now...

"do u love geet..." pressurized suzeil again..

" WATT rubbish zuseil...u hav lost it..how can i love geet..she is my ..she is my bes..."

suzeil snapped, "she is watt...haan watt..best frnd ??...she is just ur best frnd...dats it..??"

maan ran his hands through his hairs frustrated..god he hismelf is searching for so much answer and she is asking

me more questions...

suzeil was not gonna leave today, "answer me maan..is she us just best frnd ??..r u sure about it.."

"yes..i know.." muttered maan..

"fine den.." suzeil felt like giving up on him..d stubborn maan singh khurana vil never accpett d fact so

easilly...fine den..here i give u d shock treatment again...

suzeil smirked, "sameer is cuming in d evening..."

maan's blood boiled wid d name, "why.."

suzeil made casual face, "ofcorse for dinner maan...he is cuming along wid geet..."

dat angered maan 10 times more, "why cnt he just stay away from my geet..d chipku.."

"ur geet.." suzeil played well..."she is not ur geet maan...she is just ur BEST FRND...her name vil be tagged to d

person she vil love n marry..."

maan had nothing to say over it...since when he had heard geet's liking towrds sameer..nothing is going fine wid

him..he himself hav no clue when he started to hate sameer...dat ...oughh i just hate him...

"and dat person is sameer..so geet is sameer's claim.."

"shut up suzeil..n just leave me alone.."

"im not yet maan.." snapped suziel back wid same anger...

"ok i vil do 1 thing..i vil 1st ask sameer to kiss me on my lips..." she paused reading maan's expression which sa

same as b4...n den continued, "n den i vil ask him to kiss geet on her lips..."

Dat was it !!

"just shut d freak up ..."

maan hit his fist hard on d cement structure and blood started to ooze out...but he felt no pain..no more dan d pain


when he heard dose words..dat ba* sameer can not kiss his geet...she is mine...i rip appart dat sameer in peices if

he vil even dare to touch geet...

suzeil calmed herself from paying attnesion to his bleeding heart..she had..its now or never...she had to make him

understand today at any cost..

suzeil question, "wat happened maan.. ? why so angry...did i say sumthing wronf..dey like each other..so obviously

dey vil get married and aftr dat..."

"vil just shut d hell...she is my geet..n no1 touches her.." screamed maan not able to bear d words anymore..


his eyes gave up n filled wid d rage of blood..d anger through dose pericing eyes just scared suzeil for a second..but

she instantly calmed herself...

suzeil smirled widely...and dat smile angered maan even more...he felt like she is mocking on his state...

he was about to leave but suzeil started again...

"u feel pain when geet feels pain..but u dnt love her..."

maan looked away..but couldn't deny it..

"u cry when geet cried..but u dnt love her..."

he closed his filled eyes and tried hard to not show his blood filled eyes..

"u get possessive when sum1 comes closer to geet...but u dnt love her..."

maan's heart again raced in pain..remebering d hug betwen geet n sameer..

"u just cnt stand d sight of sum1 touching geet..but u dnt love her..."

maan fisted his already bleeding hand..wanting to give pan to himself..

"u go insane when geet likes sum1 else..but u dnt love her..."

maan eyes restlessly looked here n dere wid sudden pain..remebering geet's word dat she like sameer..how could

she..

"ur heart beats normally when geet smiles...but u dnt love her..."

maan's calmed his creazy going eart beat..remebering d beautifull smile..she used to give him alwz..

"ur every sentense strt wid geet and close on geet..but u dnt love her.."

maan remembered d unlimited memories when he had talked about only to geet to suzeil..geet aise hi..waisi

ha..pagal hai..pyari hai..masson hai..n wat not...

"u love it when geet look at u..u hate it when geet avoids u..but u dnt love her..."

a tear rolled out of his eyes when he remembered just how difficult d two years were for him when his geet didnt'

even talk to him..how much his eyes craved for her look...how much his ear craved for her nonstop speaking..when

has his chatterbox disappeared...

"niddles passed through ur heart when geet gives importance to sum1 else dan u...but u dnt love her.."

maan walked away angrily and held on d pillar for support..his body dat shivering in unknown restlessness..

"ur heart craved for geet's love..ur eyes craves for geet's smile..ur ears craved for geet's words..ur hands craves to

hold geet close...but u dnt love her..."

maan closed his eyes as d restlessness increased...he so much wanted to shut suzeil right now..but his tongue

simply betrayed him..just why he cnt deny dis...just why he cnt say a simple NO...grhh..dis is all so

frustrating..why cnt i deny d fact dat...i dnt lo...i dnt..i...i dnt lov...oughh why its so difficult...

"how much u feel happy when u hug me close..."

"not U..its geet.." snapped maan instantly..

suzeil lips curved into smile...

while maan's eyes widened in horror...wat just he said..why he just said dat...not suziel n geet...why his heart

instantly denied to dis 1...n couldn't deny when she was talking about geet...

does he..

WATT

NO

he dnt lo...

oughh..he dnt lov...

suzeil smiled in tears, "and u say u dnt love her..."

maan's entire existance felt shivered in realization..wats happening to him...

he fell on his knees..while his eyes still seemed restless...searching for sumthing desperately...

suzeil sat beside him, "u want peace na ??.."

"yes.." maan mumbled lost into sum realization..

"close ur eyes.."

maan did as suzeil said...

"put ur hand on ur heart.."

maan did it...

"and confess to urself...u love geet.."

as maan put his hand on his heart..he felt a sudden satsfaction ran through his heart..his blood..his mind...he felt

hismelf calming and joining a sudden delight..all his restlessness vanished and a happiness...a satisfaction..a

realization...a delight creeped his heart...

a smile formed his lips and he read his heart...

" I LOVE GEET "

a moment passed...


n maan's eyes nsppaed open...his felt himself calm n satisfied...he felt so happy like never b4...

he couldn't stop his damn smile...

maan looked at suzeil wid so much happines..so much surprise..like d realization took his breath away...

"i love geet..yes i love my geet..she is mine...i love geet..."

suzeil smiled and d tear of happiness n pain rolled out alltogether...

maan noticed d tear in her eyes n crushed her into his arms...

"im so sorry suzeil...thnqq so much..thnqq so much for dis..u r a sweetheart..i love u so much..."

suzeil smiled in etars and hugged him back, "i love u too maan...i love u so much.."

both held onto each other in happiness...

*************

a tear of happiness n pain rolled out from geet's eyes alltogether..and she turned back...


she had heard suzeil was searching for maan..maan's sudden disappearance confused geet..she almost left her ha;f

meeting n came running but when she came here...she saw maan suddenly hugging suzeil n asking sorry folowed

by his confession dat he loves her..he loves suzeil...

geet smiled in tears..damn dis heart..dats wat she wanted..she wanted suzeil n maan to be back together again n be

happy..but why dis heart paining again...oughh i i hate my hearst sumtimes...

geet smiled in pain hearing suzeil saying d same dat she loves maan so much...

dey r indeed made for each other..maan was never mine..geet had long realised dat...

clutching on to d shattered peices of her broken heart..geet left from dere...not wanting to disturb deir personal moment... !!

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precap :

" i love geet... "

" but u dnt deserve her..." came a ruthless voice

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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me first wow 🥳
super update
suzeil u Rocked
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Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago
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