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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 23: At Twilight...

She didn't move and felt the ticking of time take her back to a similar setting in her life, arresting and vivid in its recollection - precisely the kind she was ignoring ever since she came back. But with the nearness to the same people and energy, she felt tied and helpless with it's taking over in a sweeping force - which perhaps may not have been the case had she not resisted them all these days. However, they came and the unfurling seared its presence across all of her being.

She felt the anger of those early days come alive, like the wind in the kitchen she was standing in, uncoiling itself from the pit of her stomach. Arrogant bas***d that he was at the time. He was nothing like Maan, in his easy charm, free and over succulent words as if he was at odds with his own gorgeous magnificience. And what with the six foot frame stuffed with mass of bulk and flesh, running around in nothing but jeans proceeding the times he didn't show up for the meet and greet with her. It was like he wanted to announce visually all that she would be missing in life, if their alliance didn't come through, physically bringing into existence a strong friction between them from then on.

She knew about all the women who pined for him, from the uninvited tell tales of his free-love days from Aashi. To think that she was up against the skimpy clothed, stiletto wearing, hair in a wild up-do like those of paris models, was much a laughable matter, with her too conventional methods of dressing and yet she oddly couldn't pull back from the game when he practically behaved like he was a silent bully.

With the in-exhaustive persistence that their moms had, she was forced to show up at his house almost all weekends, excepting the ones he wasn't going to be around. Coming to think of it, she couldn't entirely agree she'd gone there for their mothers so much as to see for herself, how long he could keep up with his deft ways of tuning her presence out. "Don't mind Geet'He is opposing this proposal. So it's only obvious that he is going to act like you are not there. Even last night'" She could picture his mom moving with an awkward step between the stove and island, as she talked, "He behaved as if I wasn't in the room when I asked him his decision'You american kids'I have no hope for you stiff lipped children"

Another six months passed, each dancing to their shy tunes of avoidance, until the one day Aashi devoutly insisted on catching up with that vampire crazy movie that had the entire teen population of the world in its hooks. Although, what she hadn't known was that he was joining them at the theater until the picture started. He showed up next to her seat and froze with white horror, glancing back and forth between the ticket, Aashi and the empty seat that was next to her. Unable to back out now that he'd traversed to the middle of the row, stamping a few feet along the way and with his tall frame obstructing the view to the viewers behind, he sat down beside her. He must have had his tickets handed to him much earlier, conveniently schemed to keep their arrivals a secret from each other, she turned and cast an evil look at Aashi, which she turned a blind eye to and shrugged still looking at the screen.

She shuffled uncomfortable and suddenly she didn't know how or where to rest her elbows. A thin sheen of sweat laced her palms and she rubbed it against her jean. A whiff of very male perfume blew up against her face and she couldn't breath for another second or two, not knowing if they were pheromones that would do vicious things to her control which were already threatening to break under pressure.

It took her a while before she could busy herself with the scenes that were another drab of high school angst. All until Bella showed up at the biology lab and Edward's abysmal chalk face gave up and oozed color wanting to either throw up or run like the wind as her scent wafted into the room. The scene struck a strange familiarity as she continued to watch Edward convulse and collapse under his skin, the hardening of his jaw, the eyes that turned dark as fiery molten lava and the mountainous effort he put into taming the beastly desire to keep himself from punching holes in the crook of Bella's neck.

Without her knowing, her eyes flicked down to where he was clutching the arm rest and she saw the white of his knuckles. Her eyes drifted fixedly to his wrist and then his arms, visible from the roll of his shirt, and what she had always remembered seeing but only recognized then, made her heart drum up a frenzy of beats.

Just then Aashi's phone rang and she ran out to take the call as if she was being sought by the UN for world peace. He heard him cuss mildly and from the corner of her eyes noticed him raise his hand and rub his temples. Dammit, now she could hear the thud of his heart too, the theater swamped with a humming silence and her body attuned to his every suffering that made her want to run like Edward. Her chest stiffened with the knowledge of how affected he was almost to the point that it appeared frighteningly abnormal with his show of resistance that had gone a little too long.

It can't be, she told herself as she felt the dousing power of being desired by a man take over her senses. In that forgetful moment, she gave up all pretenses and turned fully to take in his face that was trying to achieve a balance between pained and bored. To her surprise, he closed his eyes, grabbing the arm rest more vehemently and she felt a cold tingle permeate her being with an unseen rush. His eyes flicked open shortly and his face drew nearer with a hard conviction that hadn't been there a second ago. She could almost see a smile break his thinned lips as she heard him say, "Shit'" and rake his fingers through his hair quickly.

He got up and bending low with his hands on either side of the arm rest, caged her to the seat making her sink deeper into the cushion. Without losing another instant, he kissed her smack on the lips and pulled back with a grin. She didn't move for an overblown paralysis had taken siege of her body with the exception of her eyes...It was fearfully wide and hazy from the current of sensations she was caught in. "If I were you...I wouldn't tell anyone about that'" She heard him whisper upon coming close to her ears and the next instant she watched him walk away leaving her as a tangled mess of cluelessness.

Her feet drew up to the seat in the dark and cold of the theater, her eyes unseeingly glued to the ground. She sat there absently in a strange mix of relief and alarm gripping her wildly, her mind free of every thought and action.

Aashi came back a few minutes after and jumped into place, "Where is he? Where did he disappear'?"

She was silent unable to muster a response back to Aashi. "Hey!" Aashi shook her shoulder, "What happened to you'"

"I don't know'" Was all she managed to say and for the rest of the evening, every time Aashi asked her if she was coming down with something.

That night she had the strangest feverish dreams making her sweat and scream. Sometimes from panic and at other times owing to a seeping pleasure from the blood being drawn out of her veins; a silver pain, whole and coarse emptying her of all feeling within her.

There was hardly anything left to guess when she woke up to find her hands instantly flying to touch her neck and lips. And that she'd been his prey and he the hunter...
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hasini was this from the flshback or what ? 😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes...very much a flashback...


She felt the anger of those early days come alive, like the wind in the kitchen she was standing in, uncoiling itself from the pit of her stomach. Arrogant bas***d that he was at the time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhi and Geet's story was sweet.
Looks like aashi had a big part to play in getting them together.
Good that geet didnt tell her about knowing Maan.
I cant imagine Geet being requested to play match maker by aashi.
In a way her decision not to disclose her relation with Maan was wise.
The forced twilight movie date was too good.
The best part was geet's nightmares 😆 and checking her neck and lips.
Thanks for updating
Waiting for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 23
nice...
this is getting interesting...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.I always felt that there had to have been a strong attraction to Abhinav for Geet, the way she broke down for a month. I loved the Twilight reference and the scene you mentioned coinciding with what they were going thru. Seems like he was resisting being forced more than resisting her. The atmosphere that you created for the movie from her reaction and his was totally gripping; she was so totally in tune with him, the tension was palpable."Tight-lipped American children", sometimes they come up with such weird things for this generation who lives with people on two different continents. Thanks for the update Hasini. 😊
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
*** Edit...


Forget it Folks...I take it back...You are all free to do whatever it is that you want.
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was.. really.. you made my heart race for geet and ..and someone other than Maan.😳
you made my heart race !

could feel the thick tension and awareness that surrounded them.. man, how badly was he taken that he avoided her like the plague, was soo rude and brash, but roamed around like that;) in front of her.. that arrogance , that adamant denial, reeked so strongly of defense , self-preservation..

but seriously, that hide-and-wont-seek-you game , for 6 months(!), would have been the height of inexplicable excitement.. the kind where every cell of your entire body, soul and thoughts rioted to rush towards what your eyes and only eyes would be able to refrain from.. the scene in the theater, the tension was just so palpable.. god!

Such power.. Geet couldn't for the life of her have stayed unaffected by it..

super, .. super part. Continue soon :)
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Girl, I didn't even know you updated! Partly because of the time difference but also because of PM's. Also, all authors are now shifting their stories to the GHSP forum...you'll get much much more views there, so ask a mod to make a shift :)

Now, don't you dissappear again Missy!

Lord, I sound like your mother
😆

If not anything else, a very strong sense of attraction was certainly there. And the fact they both knew the families wanted them together...they were forced to be together many months added to the fuel. Sort of like a placebo effect...when you think someone thing will have a certain effect you believe it does even if it has no reaction.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Nina, If reading this made our hearts race (mine still is even after reading the third time) imagine the state of the fellow viewers next to them...they must of had a heart attack from the obvious sexual tension lingering heavily in the air and not to mention the kiss ;)
Edited by .-Moksha-. - 13 years ago

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