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Posted: 13 years ago
love it dear
to the core
superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n indblowing update...

its amazing...

i loved it a lot...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read it all in one go !
update soon
and do pm me !
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.
maan n geet on the stage or ligh chali gayi,bechari geet dar gayi.
ahem ahem precap.
waiting for nxt pm.
for u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

BOTH PAST N PRESENT IS AWESOME. U RRROOOCCCKKK DEAR.

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great part...
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hey amazing...read it all in one go...
do continue soon 😊
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lovely parti likeed it you banced it so well ,past and present both..very well
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So, here s the next part'

Ok dol isten to the song here'its my favourite one'

And I will make you all listen to it a bit more often!!!

RECAP: He excused himself and asked for the way to changing room'.

As he was about to knock the door'he noticed that the door was a little ajar'

He peeped inside and saw a boy standing there who was

Smiling and gave a rose to geet'saying I like you geet'

geet took the rose'

And spoke..that s so sweet of you dev'.

On seeing this sight maan clenched his fists and stormed out to the lunch area'.

**PART 13**

Geet was having a word with dev when she heard someone's footsteps'

She ran to look out who it was'when she noticed maan s retreating form!!

MSK sir'she called aloud'but no response!!!

Geet what happened???...dev asked a he came after her to know what the matter was??

But before he could ask anything else'geet ran after maan

Leaving a baffled dev behind'..

MSK sir'.MSK sir'please wait sir'.

Maan heard geet calling him'as he turned around, geet dashed into his rock solid chest'

Before she could loose balance, maan held her waist to balance her'

Geet who was busy calling maan'didn't notice when all of a sudden he stopped

And took a turn all of a sudden'.and thus she dashed into him'

She was about to fall back'when she felt him holding her waist firmly'.

She fluttered her eyelashes'and looked into the eyes of her savior!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ay-PeMWQj1o

{pls pls...listen to the song...you ll actually get the feel of what i want to depict😍}

haay tora saajan aayo tore des

badali badara badala saawan, badala jag ne bhes re

tora saajan aayo tore des

maan was indeed looking into her eyes!!!!

Both were lost in an eyelock!!!


Maan s hand involuntarily moved to tuck the loosely hanging strand of hers!!!

Both were lost in the moment'when geet heard dev calling for her!!!!

She came back to her senses'.both straightened themselves!!!

You are great MSK sir!!!

She came forward tiptoed and pecked on his cheek'.

It was nice meeting you sir!!! Thanx for coming to our annual function sir'

And also for saving me from the fall'.and she ran off''

nindein windein rehati hai aajkal, bas usako hi khaabon ke libaas mein

jaane kab tham gaye yeh kadam, ik usake hi ghar ke paas mein

raasta bhula main apana raasta

bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali baar ve

bahaara bahaara ke chain toh huwa faraar we

bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali, pehali baar ve

it took him a bit time to realize what actually transpired!!!! She actually kissed him!!!

His hand automatically moved to the cheek where she had actually kissed'.☺️

It might be a gesture for her to show her thanx but for him it was new!!!

Like something out of this world!!!😍

He smiled'even he didn't realize that he was smiling'

He shook his head and started moving toward the parking lot'..

woh... jo labj the bandhe huye, labon pe khul gaye

main... use mila toh ranj se hai mujhame ghul gaye kuchh iss tarah

mujhame main abb hoon kidhar

main hoon kidhar kya bataau, sirf usako hai pata

bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali baar ve

bahaara bahaara ke chain toh huwa faraar we

bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali, pehali baar ve

as he entered the parking lot he actually forgot where his car was standing'he

looked at both the sides'

oh god ye mujhe kya ho raha hai!!!!

I will be mad!!!! Or have I gone mad'what am I thinking!!!

As he started moving'his driver called from back'..

He looked towards him and entered the car'..

ho tora saajan aayo tore des

badali badara badala saawan, badala jag ne bhes re

tora saajan aayo tore des

on his way back home'he was lost in their first meet'.

Her antics'

Her todays performance'

Her flawless movements'.

He was so lost thinking thst he didn't realize when they reached khuranna mansion!!!

Saab'we have reached!!!

Maan who busy in his thoughts'came back'

Hun'and then nodded his head and got down from the car!!!

nindein windein rehati hai aajkal, bas usako hi khaabon ke libaas mein

jaane kab tham gaye yeh kadam, ik usake hi ghar ke paas mein

raasta bhula main apana raasta

bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali baar ve

bahaara bahaara ke chain toh huwa faraar we

bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali, pehali baar ve

once he entered mansion'.

Hello daadima'.he smiled

Hello maa'he smiled and pecked her at cheek!!!

Both sawitri and nandini's eyes popped out!!! They were shocked out of their wits!!!

Is it their maan!!!

He smiled'he actually smiled!!!

He actually smiled!!!! They both spoke in unison!!!

Maan turned around and again gave a smile to them!!!

Nakul kaka aj khan amt banaega'I already had it!!!

Am tired'need to take rest!!!

And yes my mobile is switched off'so if anyone calls at landline
kindly don't disturb me!!!
He smiled '

And rushed to his room!!!

This time nakul kaka. Sawitri and nandini all three said in unison'

DO NOT DISRURB ME!!!

Something was weird'all three of them thought!!!

And then got busy with their own work!!

As geet reached back home'.

Tudu you were great today'

What a performance'.you know what???

Everyone appreciated your performance there!!!

Geet smiled and retired to her room'

Di am very tired'won't have dinner!!! You guys have it!!

Good night!!! She wished all of them before falling on bed!!!

~~PRESENT~~

Geet was busy playing with parth but her mind was occupied with maan only!!!

Itni der ho gai!!! Abhi tk room se bahar nai ae!!!

Shayad jyada gussa ho gae mujhse'..

Mujhe unhe honeymoon ke liye aise mana nai karna chaiye tha'

Wo to mere liye hi ye sb kr rae the!!! Mai bhi na!!!

Ab wo maa ko kaise manaenge!!!! Ab mai kya karu!!!

Uss time to gusse me room ka door band krkr chale gae!!!! Ab mujhe tension ho rai hai!!!

Ab mai kya karu??? Babajee help karo!!!{ MAY BE IS UPSET FROM ME...

I SHOULDN'T HAVE ASKED HIM TO SAY NO...I SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THIS!!}

She kept parth in crib and went towards his room'the door was shut!!!

She knocked n the door'.

Maan 'Maan'.

Suniye'.am sorry'.ap please bahar aa jaiye!!!

Ap jo kehenge'mai wo karungi!!!

Please mujhse naraz mt hoiye!!!{MAAN AM SORRY...PLS COME OUT...}

''''''no response''''''''

Maan pleae jawab to dijiye!!

But again there was no response!!!

Lagta hai so gae honge!!!

Mai bhi subah uthke sabse pehle unse maafi maang lungi!!

She went to parth '.made him to sleep'

She didn't go to change as she was already tired from the entire day's activities'

She didn't realize when she felt asleep!!!!

Geet'geet utho geet!!! Mujhe tumse bat krni hai!!!

Geet who was in deep slumber felt someone caressing her hair!!!

She tried opening her droopy eyes'.when she saw maan sitting at

her bed's edge'and calling her name!!!

She opened her eyes and quickly got up in sitting position!!!

Maan ap itni raat ko!! Wo mai apko bulane ai thi but apka door closed tha!!

Geet'he smiled'its 11 only'.

Tum jaldi so gai!!! Waise I was in washroom when you called'so I couldn't reply!!!

But when I came out I noticed that you were asleep'

But as usual the lights were switched on'so I know tum tension me hogi'

And you wont be able to sleep properly and would be feeling guilty'

So I thought its better to wake you up!!! He smiled'

Geet checked time on her mobile and then smiled'

She felt a weird smell coming out from maan'but before she could say anything'.

Maan spoke'

Geet we should not discuss anything here'parth will wake up'

Come to my room'with this he got up and moved towards his room'.

Geet also got up'she straightened her saree and followed maan to his room'

As she entered the room'.she looked around for maan'

All of a sudden maan closed the the door shut and

Pinned her to the door'

Before geet could comprehend what was happening'he slammed his lips on her!!!

P RECAP: he held her saree's pallu'. As she tried moving moving'.

it came down exposing her front area!!!

Maan ye ap kya kr rah hai'ye sahi nai hai'. She spoke

Geet it was never this right before'he whispered moving ahead

and grabbing her bare waist and squeezing it lightly'.

So how was it'now I need a lot of comments

And likes if you want an update tomorrow!!!!

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Mdworld Corner

NEXT PART:PART 14

PREVIOUS PART:PART 12

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow !! me first to like it 😃what a lovely part👏eye lock (ahem ahem )wonderful..continue soon

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