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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan's love

part 3

How can I say u geet….how can I say u that I m married….

Soon maan fell asleep and the time flew by. Its just half an hour left to reach London. Soon the flight landed and maan stood up and made his way to the door. He completely forgot about the girl who came with him.

As he got down the flight he remembered about the girl and turned back. There she is making her way through the crowd trying her best not to touch any men. He sighed and waited for her. as soon as she came towards him he walked ahead and she followed quietly.

Maan switched on his phone and called the driver asking his whereabouts. As the car came to a halt before them at the exit maan hopped into the passenger seat. This is the first time he sat in the passenger seat when driver was there. he looked at the girl and the girl sat in the back seat. Driver gave them a confused look but maan's single glare and he started the car.

Soon they reached maan's flat….yes maan stays in a small flat which he bought for himself and geet. He call it as their home.

I don't want to take this girl to our home but where else can I keep her. geet doesn't like this.

He pressed the door bell and nakul came and opened the door. He looked at both maan and then the girl confused. Never ever brought maan a girl here before not even if it is related to work except geet maam. Yes nakul knows geet. Geet used to frequently come here and she is even so nice to nakul. Nakul likes geet a lot and thinks that she is perfect for maan.. he knows both loves each other a lot.

Maan entered in the flat but the girl stood there. He turned around and shouted at her

Do u want any invitation to get in….well then don't expect such thing…..this is my home….mine and my dear's home….i hate to bring u here but I m left with no option….so u better come in before I literally push u out.

Maan turned to nakul and said show her the guest room and left.

Nakul understood the situation and silently took her to the guest room.

Maan went to his room….well according to him…its their room…his and geet's room….she even had her cloths over here. He threw the bag on the bed and went to the cupboard to pick his cloths….he badly need a shower after a long journey. He opened the cupboard and saw geet's cloths. He caressed them and took his jeans and a casual shirt and went in to shower.

Maan came out of the shower picked his phone and literally ran out of the flat.

I again tried calling geet but her phone was coming switched off.

Geet what happened why is ur cell switched off….

I drove to her flat. I rang the doorbell and meera opened the door.

Geet geeet….

I went in pushing her…..

Maan….maan listen to me

No meera I want to see geet….i should speak to her…..geeet

Maan she is not home.

What!!!

Yeah actually she went to paris for her friends marriage. Its all so sudden. Her friend eloped with a girl and called her to help and she went there today morning. She tried to call u but ur mobile is switched off. so she asked me to inform u as soon as u come back.

Ohhh no meera…I should speak to her now….its really urgent.

Don't worry maan she will be back by tomorrow morning.

Then why is her cell switched off

How will I know maan….may be battery down.

Okay…but plz ask her to take care of her and plz meera say her to come back soon.

Okay maan.

I left from there….why should everything in the world happen at the same time. I just want to meet and her and say. I dunno how she will react….she is always unpredictable. I don't want to go home….i cant ……when I know that there is another girl in there in my geet's position.

I drove to office…..its nearly 6 now….one by one started leaving the office. I directly went in and sat in my cabin. I kept my head on the table and again stated thinking of my geet. Where ever I see in this town I remember my moment with my geet. This office…..this cabin….this chair….when she sat on my lap and hold her by waist……the kisses we had……the laugh we had…..the food we shared…..the time when she is mad at me and literally threw the things on me…her cute little blush when I teased her……

My moment was disturbed by the knock on the door.

Yes

Sir

Yes adi

When did u come sir

Just 5 mins ago adi

Sir why did u come to office u would've taken rest…that's a long journey

No adi I feel like coming here

But sir geet ma'am like this….u should better go home sir….if she comes to know she will kill me first.

I smiled…yes he is right….if she is here now she will drag me home.

That's okay adi I will deal with her….u can leave

As u wish sir…good night sir

Good night adi.

I stood and dragged me to the room attached to my cabin…well this is again geet's plan so that I can take rest if I m tried working……how much she cribs we I work more… its really a tiring day……

I fell on the bed and my eyes are drooping but then the noise of my phone woke me up. I ran back to my cabin as I left my phone there anticipating geet's call…..but its dadima…..why is she calling me now…isn't it enough what she did to me. I don't want to pick the call but I did….

Yes dadi

Maan u r so irresponsible….dont u know to inform after u reach London

I never did that

That before….but now u r married and u have a responsibility….we all will be worried here…don't u know to give us a call. Its good that she called us and informed ur safe reach.

Ok now where are u….she said u r not at home.

I m at office dadi

Maan…that's enough…what are u doing at office…she is waiting for u maan go home.

I will dadi…..i came becoz of some work.

Now I don't want to listen anything more. Stop whatever u r doing and go home.

Ji dadi

I hanged up the call….but she least knows that I gonna stay here tonight. I went back to my room and I know if I not switchoff my phone now the calls will not stop. I threw the phone aside and went to sleep.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Loved it a lot..
i think ds s geet...
crossing fingers and praying..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
part 3
poor Maan...
who is the girl?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
where is geet???
Who is dat grl??
Poor maan...
Nyc update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
amazing prt ...updt sooon eagerlyyy waitin ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
beautiful update...

something fishy is dere...

i really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
I feel bad 4 dat girl!!!!btw who is she???
Geet ko bhe jaldi se lao na!!!!
Agr maan ki dadi ne shadi krwani hi thi tw maan geet ka bta deta he would marry her na!!but y dat girl hidin her face??lagta ha wo mayb geet ki twin hogi!!lol haha
Achw ahw...update sooon waitin
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

awesome part dear...😛

hope ki wo girl geet hi ho...

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesome update...
i think the girl who married maan is geet...
hmmm lets see what is going to happen next...
very well written...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Awesome
Loved it
I just hope Geet understands his situation and doesn't leave him !!!
Update soon

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