Please Read: A poem by a teen with cancer

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys,

I want you all to read this poem that's written by a teenager with cancer. She wants to see how many people receive this poem and wants to as many people as possible to get the message. I would really appreciate if you took the time to read the following Poem. Comments and your thoughts on the message of the poem are always welcomed.

SLOW DANCE

Have you ever watched kids

On a merry-go-round?

Or listened to the rain

Slapping on the ground?


Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?

Or gazed at the sun into the fading light?

You better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.


Do you run through each day
on the fly?

When you ask how are you??Do you hear the reply?

When the day is done
Do you lie in your bed

With the next hundred chores

Running through your head?


You'd better slow down


Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.


Ever told your child,

We''ll do it tomorrow

And in your haste,

Not see his sorrow?


Ever lost touch,

Let a good friendship die

Cause you never had time

To call and say,"Hi"


You'd better slow down.


Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.


When you run so fast to get somewhere

You miss half the fun of getting there.
When you worry and hurry through your day,
It is like an unopened gift....

Thrown away.


Life is not a race.

Do take it slower

Hear the music

Before the song is over

Do write your thoughts and opinions and maybe if in life sometimes you can relate to it. And please convey in your own words what the dying child is trying to convey.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwn tats so true... ppl should slow down and enjoy lyfe..cause who knoes if there goin to be alive the next several minutes, day, months or years.

Hopefully...he/she would survive, so they would b able to c the world..hav kids and hopefully grandchildrens 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww its so great....hope she gets better!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very good and i pray tht god does some miracle and she stays alive
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats such a sweet poem... I had recieved it through a fwd last year i believe.. i dont remember exactly one but it is indeed beautiful... one should slow down the pace of life a bit... just enough to be able to enjoy every moment... but then again it isnt always possible
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg that was touching...hope she feels better
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really touching!!!
aweosme poem
hope she get well soooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its a very nice poem!!
I hope she will be better soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it is a very good poem....
jeg pray for her too
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that poem really touched the most emotional part of my heart and me 😭 now i'm crying 😭 i hope she gets well soon 😭 😭 😭

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