ArHi OS | Miles to go before I sleep

Aww that was so lovely... The poem you used for ur inspiration aslo happens to be my fav poem as well... :D very lovely indeed!

Another brilliant post 👏. Really loved the flow, the comparison of her situation with the leaf, her reflections on the happy memories and the contrast with the recent events. Keep up d good work 👍🏼.

awww!!!! i loved it!!! awesome 😊

tht was AMAZING & beautifully written👏

Originally posted by: brevity

Another brilliant post👏. Really loved the flow, the comparison of her situation with the leaf, her reflections on the happy memories and the contrast with the recent events. Keep up d good work👍🏼.

The title of your OS inspired me to pen down these lines to describe her situation:

The whole misunderstanding created by the creep,

inflicted, in her life, wounds so deep.

Accusations hurled at her by the heap,

She could do nothing, but weep.

The path to regain the love and trust being so steep,

she has miles to go before she sleeps.

^^ firstly the poem was very brilliant indeed :) seems like you read my lame poetry😆Yours is way better!! And thankyou so much for the comment,glad to know that I managed to convey what I wanted to😳 PS-thankyou all others for the uh-mazing comments!🤗You keep me going =) Thankyou!

the analogy of a leaf in ripples of water is just MIND BLOWING !!!

nyc beautifully written 👏