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Posted: 13 years ago
di can't wait anymore…

good night!!!!

see you tomorrow!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 15
He just dragged himself to the room only to see her a sleep in her night dress. He changed his dress & slipped in the other side of the bed. He sighed deeply feeling his heart burden with her tears now.
He woke up early morning seeing his beautiful wife lying next to him.
How he wished the time just froze their..& he could just lye there & keep watching her for ever. ..not very long lived wish... he just heard his mom knocking the door
jhanvi ' Maan.. Geet.. utto.. litne der hogayen hain
Maan looked at the time.. it was 7...he rolled his eyes 7.. der.. r they out of their mind.. don't they know we were married only last night... kamse kam aaj tho
he irritatedly pulled the spread over his head
then he heard his maasi commenting something abt Geet.
Maasi ' yeh kaisen bahu doond ke layen ho? Abhi taak so rahi hain
Maan got really irritated.. he looked at his cute sweet wife.. still lost in her deep sleep.. no wonder she hated this all marriage bandishein.
Jhanvi got really conscious herself & knocked the door again
Maan got really frustrated now.. he rubbed his droopy eyes & opened the door slightly
immediately his maasi was trying to peep in.. Maan pretended to be not dressed properly .. & only partly opened the door.
Jhanvi was bit embaressed
Maan tried to open his eyes ' ji mama
maasi ' Geet abhi bhi so rahi hain kya?
Maan looked ta his mom
jhanvi ' wo Geet
Maan ' she is in the shower mama .. he said still yarning
jhanvi was so proud
maasi's face was worth a watch.
Jhanvi gave a saari to Maan ' yeh Geet ko de dena, she needs to wear it for the puja
Maan ' umm..he took it closing the door

he looked at his sweetheart.. still fast a sleep like a baby. He didn't want to disturb her... he just left the saree in the dressing table & went to shower.
While he was in the shower.. jhanvi came back again trying to tell them to hurry up. Well this time Maan was not around to safe his wife.. but lucky her...jhanvi just knocked couple of times & left.
It was around 8am .. Maan had changed into kurta & pyjama for the puja wiping his hair.
Jhanvi came again... getting really tensed now. Anni too joined her
anni ' maasi aapke paas tho key hain na
Maans eyes widen in horror
anni was in super masti mood to catch the newly wed in action...
jhanvi ' nahi nahi..she just called out Geet again before anni does something naughty
Geet got up once unsure where she was & wat happened ' she was terrified to see the room & some strange voices not her mama or raji... & Maan standing giving her equally terrified look.
Before anni could succeed in her plan.. Maan pounced on Geet...making her fall flat on the bed... covering them with the spread. Geet looked at him in shock... clutching her hand on her chest..
Maan aap yeh kya kar rahen ho..
umm he said sensuously.. making weird noises..
she closed her eyes tight & turned her face away...
she could hear the door's knob turn... she got really worried
wo..she said
umm..umm umm he made kissing sound moving under the spread...
she could clearly hear him kissing.. but whom... he was not even touching her.. he was balancing on his arms & legs. He was not touching her at all.. lying flat just above her.
she slowly opened her one eyes & looked at him from side.. his lips were inches away from hers.. his breath was falling on her.. with every time he made that smooching sound..
she gulped when anni charged in.. Maan immediately dipped closer to her neck...
mama ko pata hain ..kal hi humari shaadi huween hain
koi nahi disturb karega
umm.. umm
he continued with his sensuous noises with actions that looked very obvious to anyone seeing them above the sheet
Geet hands pressed against his chest.. sending shivers down both of them..
he was still not touching her.. but his wet hair had a different plan.. it slowly caressed her side of her cheek.. her hands clutched his kurta. Wat was he doing to her.. she never felt so tickled.. tantalized.. his aftershave scent was engulfing her. Her mouth went dry every time he made that sound

Tum nahen ke aisen avogi tho.. his voice faded with another virtual kiss of his

Anni screamed sorry sorry sorry ..giggling
jhanvi was really feeling bad to have disturbed them.. & Maan saying mom would understand..oh.. that did the trick.. jhanvi.. dragged.. anni & locked the door.
Maan waited for them to leave.. & tried to rise.. he was sweetly held by his soft grip on his kurta.. it felt more binding than shakles.

he patiently waited for her to open her eyes ..& leave him
tum mujhe chod sakti ho.. sab chalen gayen..
she opened her eyes at once & looked at him
his eyes looked so mischievous .. she had never seen before..it send a strange feel in her stomach. Their eyes caught in that moment lost .. at in each other.

Precap
bechari confused geet
-PREV PART 14 NEXT PART 16-
hope u like it
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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st march (today) is my first board (XII) . . . . . . . . . . . .
That too english


di please update fast . . . . . . need to study

EDITED


OMG . . . . . After ages . . . . . . . . i am first to comment . . . . . . . . . . Kya timing hai . . . . .
Btw thanks for update . . .
😃
Edited by Swaatii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

I wish their misunderstanding gets cleared up soon... and Geet realizes how selflessly Maan loves her... and Maan too realizes Geet does have feelings for him... 😳
Edited by Azmatazz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
you made my day muski :) can you imagine I woke up at 1am to read the udpdates, firstly got DA now bandishein !! great updates dear, but I'm greedy , yeh dil maange more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved naughty Maan..
Awesome..
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG can't stop laughing at maan's tricks 😆 😆
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swaatii

1st march (today) is my first board (XII) . . . . . . . . . . . .
That too english


di please update fast . . . . . . need to study

EDITED


OMG . . . . . After ages . . . . . . . . i am first to comment . . . . . . . . . . Kya timing hai . . . . .
Btw thanks for update . . .
😃

all the very best sweets
thanku so much
yeppy u first
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Posted: 13 years ago
naughty is nice in my books! too cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an awesome update muskan...

Loved it.,... Uff... i love this maan... i loved the sweet gestures of him on seeing his wife... haayeee.. actually you really make all maan characters unique from ur other stories and make me fall for them... they are so different each time and i just cant stop falling for maan character

The way he tried to cover up for Geet and the virtual kisses,,, omg,,, 😆

and now both are just too close and lost in each other

and i seriously cant wait for the next update...

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