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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 14

Maan just left from there.. SR.. he can't even think of going near her ..until he knows wat she wants. He would do anything to see her happy. Waisen yeh serni mujhe kacha kha jayegi.. he laughed at himself..for only he knows how emotional & angry she could get.

Now the older ladies came to take to Geet. She took a deep breath when anni winked at her teasingly. She couldn't even think of Maan & herself getting close. But wat if he is thinking in those lines.. no no.. she tried to convince herself. How ever modern & fun loving he could be..he definitely not force her. Oh..god her heart shivered thinking abt how SR's in arranged marriages literally forced on the girls..no no.. he is not like that.. she just hoped as they made her sit in his room. She didn't even dare to look around. She was already getting scared & all this flowers..the decoration was only adding to her nervousness.

Maan was really anxious finally he had her to himself. He can now clearly tell her..he is ok..with how ever she wants to carry on the relation. Her happiness always meant the most to him & now meant every thing to him. He was so sure he could clearly explain to her .. he understands..her condition.. together they could probably ..he was not even hoping ...but couldn't help beyond hopes to hope !!
After all the gimmick at the door.. where anni was fighting for more ransom to let Maan in..
only making Geet more & more nervous in there.. why is he so eager to come in.. she has never seen him so impatient..not even when she is 30mins late.. then she did a reality check waisen tunhe unhe kabhi ladkiyon ke saat nachthe huen bhi nahi dehka tha... then those pics flashed in her mind.. one after the other...
then the taunt of Dev.. she is not ur type
mid of all this she didn't realize he was standing right next to her.. gaping at her ' he was bit not sure wat he felt at that moment.. the ambiance.. she looking heavenly.. the fact it is there first night.. he was like glued to his position...for a brief moment.. his mouth went dry
she jumped back..pushing him away ...yelling... u don't even like me.. then wat r u doing?
How dare u? Chi main ne tum se yah expect nahi kiya tha
Main tum se freely baat karti rahin aur tum iska yeh sab matlab nikal the rahen ho
I was so wrong abt u
she cried in frustration giving him a disgusting look.
That just pushed Maan to the worst level.. he almost raised his hand.. instead pulled the whole garland hanging around the bed down & walked away angrily. He went into the side room .. & took out his frustration on the wall.

Geet was taken a back with his anger... wat was he even thinking.. she will just give in to his will. How dare he!!! she can't believe.. she likes him.. she had a big round fight with babaji for doing this to her. Did he actually think they would... her heart just broke into million pieces.. after her temper faded...she broke down into tears. Whole dream & wishes just came crashing down. Even then she couldn't understand wat she did was right or wrong... had it been someone else.. he would have expected the same.. then why was she feeling so hurt with him. Why was she expecting him to act differently. Why is she expecting anything from him at the first place.
He doesn't like her. .. she knew that fact.. but then.. all this with out any feelings... why she is not able to behave herself... why she always lands up being herself infront of him.
Maan got really furious.. that look in her eyes.. how could she.. how could she think so low of him. She always understood him ..his silence..then why she is behaving like this. Mana she is been forced into this marriage lekin she can't forget wat they shared all this years.
He angrily dashed his head on the wall.. blacking out a bit with impact... he sat down.. removing his sherwani. He remembered every moment starting from they first day he saw her... her non stop talks.. that he fell for..
he closed his eyes & dipped it back ward how could she think he would ever think bad about her that too her chattering.. how much he loved it... her making faces.. he smiled at himself..
her tears.. something he could never bear & today those beautiful eyes had tears because of him. How could those eyes look at him in disgust..when all the while they only looked at him with respect...

he calmed himself realizing this was her usual reaction to a situation especially around him.. she usually takes out all her compressed emotion at once. He caressed his forehead..instead of explaining to her.. he just blew it further. He shouldn't have reacted like that.. when he knows her very well.
Dam.. but he was hurt himself deep with her hurting words. Her words really hurt him ...questioning his integrity, his intention.. if he had any such things in mind why would he wait so long.. 3yrs would have been long enough!!!
he couldn't even dare to look into her eyes all this years ' because he was scared..his eyes would give away wat he is been hiding in them all this years.

After a long dark night he just dragged himself to the room only to see her a sleep in her night dress. He changed his dress & slipped in the other side of the bed. He sighed deeply feeling his heart burden with her tears now.
Precap
naughty Maan
-PREV PART 13 NEXT PART 15-
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first for the very first time i m so dead
Edited by zeeenu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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edited!
awesome update!
loved it!
OMG Poor Geet was too nervous because of all things that anni, dev spoke about!
and his intention thing i think it was due to her experience with Tanmay perhaps!!
awww he was drooling over her and waiting to explain and she just blasted on him! grrr! She has borrowed a lil of MU phobia from puchki ROFL!
Poor Maan was so angry and hurt due to her outburst but Phew! he realized her mental state and he behaved so matured types then!
omg precap oye hoyyee naughty Maan!
Edited by Anu-Ananya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
uh oh oh
the MU seems to be deepening further.
Neither did they enjoy their marriage nor the SR.
The silent drives were much better i suppose.
Though Geet spilled a little bit of her agony out it only pushed their MU further.
Precap seems to be a little ray of sunshine.
Hope Maan's naughtiness is not mis understood
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
sob sob…😭

me crying….😭

lovely update di… you explained the emotions so well i could really feel them…👏

waiting eagerly for naughty maaan..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
damm these MU
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tension khatam karo, naugthy maan hyeee
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome just loved it
precap is interesting
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. I'll have to say.. this part was brilliant.

the way they both reacted .. all her doubts and confusion bottled up inside had to find a let-out , and she being she, just burst into that tirade..

and of course , Maan has been undergoing the same .. no wonder he too felt so hurt at her assumption.. but glad to see he realized that mistake after a while..

tch tch.. feeling bad for them.. I can see their start of this journey is not going to be smooth by any measure..
💔

continue soon muskan ..

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