Maaneet FF- Twisty Deewangi - Link to THREAD 2 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing dear do add me in u r pm list and pm me when ever u update the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg i love this ff yaar
happy to get back our deewangi on the form
me loving it
im waiting for maan reaction yaar
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys anyone up for the next update???😆
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thank you for your overwhelming support sweeties!!!!!😳

here's the next update'
hope you guys like it!!!
please buddy me for PMs'.😳

PART - 3 (part 80)

Maan was gob smacked. He froze on the spot. He couldn't believe it. He felt multitude of emotions coursing through his body. He looked at the doctor and understood that she was expecting some reaction from him. He shielded all his emotions with his usual cold look.

"Doctor, you told that she is weak. I hope that there are no complications."

He tried to sound indifferent but the slight sliver of anxiousness and worry was not missed by the well-experienced doctor.

"Mr. Khurana, right now I cant say anything with surety. I will have to run some tests and then only I can tell anything. Tomorrow you bring her to my clinic at 9 A.M. otherwise everything seems OK right now. Just make sure she eats well and doesn't stress herself."

Maan nodded and promised to bring her to the clinic tomorrow. He escorted doctor till the entrance and thanked her. The moment he closed the door, he rushed back to the bedroom. He saw Geet in a new light. He sat beside her and gently touched her still flat tummy as if afraid to harm the baby. He was overjoyed at the prospect of becoming a father. He felt an extreme urge of protectiveness for the girl in front of him as well as his baby cocooned in her womb.

HIS BABY' he still felt it like a dream. He promised himself to be the best father in the world and give his child all the happiness in the world unlike his own father. He froze. What if he became like his own father. His thoughts were interrupted when he felt Geet stirring.

She slowly opened her eyes adjusting to the light. She saw Maan in front of her looking at her with a strange expression. She smiled at him but her smile was immediately replaced by concern when she saw the tears in his eyes.

"Maan kya hua aap ro kyon rahe hain?"

That is when Maan realized that he had been crying. MAAN SINGH KHURANA and TEARS. He immediately wiped them and gently helped Geet in sitting up with the support of the bed rest. She winced when she accidently put a little more pressure on her hand.

"sambhal kar jaan'"

She was thoroughly confused. First of all she had seen Maan crying and even now he seemed a little flustered. She was feeling really concerned. Then she realized that maybe it is related to her fainting. She noticed the doctor's prescription on the side table.

"Maan kya baat hai? Please mujhe bataiye na. Mujhe aapki chuppi se ghabrahat ho rahi hai."

Maan realized that unknowingly he was giving Geet stress. He held Geet's right hand and gently and carcasses her cheek. He knew he had to tell her this. He was never good with words but somehow he knew, his Meet will understand him.

"Jaan'"

He fumbled with words. While Geet was in seventh heaven when he called her Jaan second time in a row. She was still lost in the moment when words started flowing from his mouth.

"I' we' you are pregnant. Tum mere bachche ki maa ban ne waali ho."

He finished and looked up to see Geet's reaction.

While Geet was totally stunned with this revelation. She slowly kept her left hand on her stomach. Tears welled up in her eyes. She took Maan's hand and kept it on her stomach. She looked up in his eyes and could see the happiness and contentment mirror in his eyes. She gave him a watery smile.

"Hamara bachcha'"

PRECAP

TWIST!!😉😆

PREV - PART 2 NEXT - PART 4

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye yaar no saparation please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome but plz don't show any separation in the twist
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update ... BUT the twist better be a pleasant one ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
kahi seperetion ka twist dalne ka irada to nahi hai na????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm…..

so who wants to know the twist???😉

anyone wants another update today???😆
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okkk
hospital main koun milega abbb

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