OS: Shaadi ke baad ki Dastaan PART 20 UPDT PG166 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds interesting... cannot wait to read the next update :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
i cant wait! black? i thought arnav liked Red!
later would be too hard for us wait so NOW ! please :)
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awesome update
thnx 4 the pm dear
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interesting..i want it today..pretty plzz😃
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Hi guys, as promised for the committed and faithful readers, here is Part 3...I love you guys, your comments make me want to make the story more interesting and there will be shockers in the next part! Wait and Read!

Thanks for the wait, and I hope you like it.
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Part 3

Arnav is stuck between situations, between concepts, between theories, between his sister and his love..He clenches his teeth hard and bangs on the steering wheel in an aggressive way, not being able to justify his actions to even himself'His heart not letting his brain take over this time'"It was much easier before, I could think without my heart being in the way, Even after all has happened, why cant I stop my judgement being partially driven towards Khushi, why? Has Khushi changed me like Di said would happen? Is it true that when she wont be around, I wont be able to breathe? FLASHBACK of the time when she said she would leave Delhi to go back to LUCKNOW made him restless'" Arnav continues thinking about the past incidents and'a white light!!! He is blinded by white, sharp white light! Closing his eyes quickly!!! He suddenly gets flashed in the eyes by the coming truck in front of his car

Khushi who is also lost in conflicting thoughts about whats happened in the past few days' so fast that it has changed her life'white light!!! She also gets blinded by white light to which she raises her arm to block the light but when the sudden realisation hits her, screams'.The moment of realisation that there is a big truck coming towards them happens at the same time, in a span of 2 seconds, making her scream in fear, agony, fear of not losing herself, but if anything happened to HIM,'all in slow motion she holds Arnav's arm that's on the steering wheel trying to hard-steer with her right arm, and holds the car with her left arm'screaming "Arnavvv" and as Arnav whirls the car around the side to save themselves, the truck brushes past hitting the car on the side, breaking the glass in tiny little scattered pieces, in a blast, a sound so loud, Arnav looks slowly towards his lef while still steering and handling the car and pushes the Brake as fast as he can after witnessing what he did'

He looks'

And looks'

And keeps on looking'blank empty eyes, red empty eyes, no tears, just plain empty eyes and a gasp, as if his mouth looking for air to breathe

He slowly looks'The whole left side of car ruined, no glass on window screens left, the whole door twisted, and his eyes slowly move to look below seeing Khushi's yellow sari now stained with red..not the red he liked, not the color of love, but blood, the color he feared!! Reality strikes him, as he sees khushi drenched in blood that's continously coming out of her head tilted on her shoulder, dripping her light yellow sari in red, bloody red!'He sees that her whole figure is turned towards right, towards HIM, her hand still holding onto Arnav's seat where it moved from his arms to the chair when the truck hit her! "She approached me for help, yet I couldn't" he thinks and a tear drops from his eyes and another thought enters his mind "Why am I crying for this girl? She was about to ruin my di's life..) His brain wanting him to feel happy, NOT GUILTY that he was the reason for her condition today! But his heart still pulling him with the only so much passion left for his lady-love, towards the side where he feels bad for ruining her life even more and more.. (NO, this innocent face can never think about ruining anyones life, but how do I make myself believe that?.. )

Another reality hit, when he realises he has to get out and get help!!!

He checks his phone, but finds it nowhere and realises Khushi was playing with it so must have been swept out by the truck'he gets out Khushi's iPhone out from her bag.

He gets out of the car, calls an ambulance and asks them to come ASAP, in the meantime he tries to stop cars from sides to get a quicker transport but no-one stops!! Finally he calls Aman "Aman, listen carefully! Accident situation. Khushi is injured. I need a car..Pronto!", I am whatsapping you my exact location..Be here soon. otherwise'" and shuts the call'Aman not only gets a hint but realises that if he is late today, he will be more than sorry, quickly gets a move on'

Arnav meanwhile is unable to do anything. Seeing Khushi like a helpless person, in the much-destroyed car, he gets her out from the car'he was aware of the danger of petrol leakage ' he gets her out, while she is in his arms, he starts walking away from the car towards town in the middle of the road asking for help but no car being seen now'He keeps walking, tears dropping from his eyes, unable to say anything he just keeps walking. He is also weak from the accident and no-lunch, but his life, his love is injured, dying!!! - Finally his heart takes over after much Brain vs Heart, and he looks like the Suneil Shetty from Border when he went to put the land mine under the tank'The same intensity, the same passion, the same energy, the same tears, the only thing differentiating them was their love!!!!

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So, how was it?

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Let me know through comments and likes!

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Precap: Will Aman come on time? What will happen to Khushi-Arnav's relationship after this? Will Khushi live to complete Arnav or will she die leaving Arnav in a complete shell state? Will Arnav come to know of Khushi's innocence but will be unable to apologise to her?

Keep reading, commenting to know more...!!!

Edited by pkaur92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Lovely update, loved it xoxo







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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bebosallu4eva

Lovely update, loved it xoxo









Thanksss xoxo 😊


More shockers in store for next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Cheers 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
oh..poor khushi 😒
update soon..waiting & thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Come on sooo short... please continue !😍🤗

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