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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey just wanted to specially thank all our wonderful writers here... .coming up with wonderful writings which are helping us to survive rather than these depressing episodes. šŸ‘

Just came across a poem and felt its apt for our siddhi and kunal. So thought of sharing it with u all. 😊. Hope ull enjoy it as much as i did..😃


Ek pal mein wo has dete hai…
Duje hi pal mein khafa ho jaate hai…
Khatti-Meethi Nok Jhok se…
Hum ek duje ka dil behlate hai…
Kya iska hi naam Pyaar hai?

Unke saath yeh duniyaa bhari si lagti…
Unke bina ajeeb sa sunapan hai…
Durr sahi unka saath muje hai mehsoos hota…
Baat na hone se Virana hai..
Kya iska hi naam Pyaar hai?

Pal pal muje wo hai satate…
Muje hi yaad karte hai har pal..
Fir bhi hai kyu itna itraate…
Kabhi khushi ka to kabhi gum ka khumaar hai…
Kya iska hi naam Pyaar hai?

Pyaar hum dono ek duje se karte…
Ladai ke mamle mein bhi aage hai rehte..
Pyaar bhi aur ladai bhi hai…
Nazdikiyaan – Tanhai bhi hai..
Kya iska hi naam Pyaar hai?

Ek duje ke bina ek pal bhi na reh paate..
Fir bhi ladne ke baad dono hai itraate..
Ek duje ki galti maaf karna hai humne seekha
Haan isika naam to pyaar hai…

luv,
savi...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@savi- did you write it šŸ˜‰.. to answer hte question yes it is indeed !!!
And and, how can I resist myself from posting some here myself !!! šŸ˜‰..

I wonder, why, I want to share my dreams with you

I wonder why I don't want to see new dreams, maybe because life is more beautiful than the dreams

I wonder, how time just flies when I talk to you, how I can talk about the most inane of topics and yet keep laughing

I wonder, why, when I am happy, I want to run to you and share my joys with you

I wonder, why, when it rains/snows, I want to go about dancing on the roads with you

I wonder, why, when I see the rainbow, I see you smiling

I wonder, why people say what is in a name, when I feel the happiest when you call my name across the room

I wonder, why when I am sad, all I need to do is talk to you

I wonder, why people say that a smile is one crooked line that sets many things straight, I realize, that when I am sad, I just need to imagine you smiling at me across the room

I wonder why I smile a lot more, why my colleagues ask me if I am taking some energy boosting pills

I wonder, why there comes a smile on my face when I hear ur name...(this is for Simi )
I wonder, why LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL
(Need I answer the whys !!!)
great thread !!
Edited by poshah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Pooja... firstly...i did not write that poem...i just read it somewhere and wanted to share it with u all. There is no writer inside me .. just reading and admiring..šŸ˜›.

Well coming to ur lines... Goddd man ... u r such a piece of work...trust me u totally blow me out with every piece of ur writing. Alwayz coming out with such incredible lines which make me go bonkers imagining our lovely kunu n siddhi .

I specially liked the line on SMILE...
Can u tell me how do u write so beautifully... šŸ˜›.
And i would love it if u go ahead and answer the WHY's...šŸ˜‰. Hope im not troubling u.

u keep writing and keep making my day. Yesterday was stuck to bed as im down with fever..but reading ur writings helped getting my temperatures down.

savi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Savi, I really like the poem as it suites Siddhi's current Situation very well. You have dedicated such a beautiful poem to Sinal and you said that you are not romanticšŸ˜‰. Hope to see Sinal's nazadikiyan very soon as I am dying to see them in hopelessly in love with each-other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Savi...I have read previously too a post of u doing shayari...which websites do u visit...loved that sheyar and this poem too😊😊this poem suits Sinall so well...first para was soo true in pre-consummation scenes...still miss their nok 'jhok...those were the days...after that it is entirely on their present life...

And Pooja I am becomin monotoneous praising u..but still want to praise u ...u r really an amazing writeršŸ‘...everybody can relate to ur poem... I can definitely relate to ur poen...juss add one why...which I once felt...why there comes a smile on my face when I hear ur name...

Edited by Simi. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Savi I juss noticed u joined I-F three days before me...did u also come here for Kahin To Hoga???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi , the poem was beautiful..it suits sinal current sitauation beautifully.loved it lots..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I actually do not have any special shyaris or poetry to add, just giving two of my favorite quotes for the two lovely characters of parichay.

FOR Siddhi-
"Never close your lips to those whom you have already opened your heart." by Charles Dickens.

For KUNAL-

"In our time together, you claimed a special place in my heart, one I'll carry with me forever and that no one can ever replace." By Nicholas Sparks from the book Dear John.
Edited by pinkeye - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful poetry savi...it feels soo good to see soo much of creativity on our forum...this poetry suits sinal beautifully...loved reading it...
Edited by tanyashrivastav - 13 years ago

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