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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii friends..how are u all..iam very sorry for the late update..
well coming to the update..iam introducing three characters who are just to provide comic relief in this ss...i hope u all like them and plz no offense guys..if i hurt any of the fans of the characters whom iam introducing now...

aaditya khurana:



he is maan's friend and cousin who came to mumbai to complete his MBA but failed and still failing to complete it since 4 years...he always becomes bakra...
he dont know english properly as he is from hoshiarpur village..

romeo and lucky:
they are friends of lucky who are with same attitude aadi have..so they could be able to form perfect gang..in college they are called as loosers gang but provides comic relief to evryone..they are also from village and cant speak english properly..

lucky:


romeo:



Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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DOSTI YA PYAAR
part-2


Finally the police man reaches them...he just stands infront of them and stares at them for a minute and he then says...

HAPPY NEW YEAR...

He smiles at them...and same did maan,geet and karan...

Mind it...don't ever repeat this again...iam leaving u because it is a new year...if u again...

Maan:no uncle never...thanks...

that's better maan warna mein tumhare papa ka number jaantha hoon...

Yes he knows them...he is the best child hood buddy to maan,geet and karan's dad...

Three of them gives a weak smile...

And ha geet and karan...it works to u too...

He again wishes them happy new year and leaves the place'..

Maan,geet and karan hugs each other and laughs loudly recollecting the whole incident and people who were just standing there like audience to a horror movie...

Maan:chale!!!!!!!!

Karan and geet smiles at him and nods as yes...

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Maan,geet and karan in car...maan is driving car where karan sat in front seat and geet in back seat.

Geet:maan sach mein tumne teek nahi kiya...sirf hume wish karne ke liye sabko pareshan kiya...road par itni hungama karne ki kya zaroorat thi...ye toh accha huwa police uncle tumhe chod diya warna kya hota...

Maan:geetu stop it ya...ab o sab chodo...party ke bhare mein socho...

Geet:party!maan raat bahut hogayi hai...muje lagtha hai ab humhe ghar chala jaana chahiye...hum wahi party karlenge...aur waise bhi mein ne maa ko bina bataye aagayi .o pareshan hojayegi...

Karan:ha maan...mein ne bhi kisi se kuch nahi kaha...

Maan:are yar kuch nahi hoga...geetu tum fikar mat karo maa ko mein samja doonga o muje kuch nahi kahegi...aur golu tu kyun ladkiyon ki tarah dar rahe ho...

Karan:maan...mein maa se nahi papa se dartha hoon...agar use pata chala na ki mein raat bhar party mein hoon...o toh muje maar hi dalenge...pehle o mujse naraz hai kyun ki mein law ko chod kar MBA padne jaa raha hoon...

Maan:are chill yar!jab maan ho toh dar kis baat ki hai...papa ko toh mein dekhlunga...

Geet:aur apne papa ko?

Maan:don't worry sweet heart I have already informed him...

Geet:kya??(shocked)party ke bhare mein...

Maan:no yar!mein ne kaha ki mein aadi ke kaam se bahar ja raha hoon aur raat ko aajaunga...

Geet:maan tum pagal hogaye ho kya...aadi chup kyun rahega o uncle ko sab kuch bata dega...

Maan:(smirks)geetu tu kitni innocent hai yar...ab tak muje samaj nahi paayi...ok sun mein ne aadi ko party mein bhula liya aur...

Karan:wait wait...mein samaj gaya...matlab bechara aadi phir se bakra bangaya...

Three of them giggles...finally they reach the destination...maaneet and karan enters the party hall where evryone were busy in enjoying and some of them dancing.

Geet:maan muje yaha nahi rehna hai...ye sab boring hai hum ghar chalthe hai na...

Karan:ha yar yaha toh sab despo lag rahe hai...sab boring hai...

Maan smirks at them...

Tum dono ko entertainment chahiye na...lo mil gaya

And he points his finger towards aadi who is standing at a corner with his regular confused expressions along with another two confused fellows lucky and romeo...

Maan winks at karan and geet and then three of them made their way towards aadi and his gang...

Aadi:are yar yaha toh sab apni duniya mein busy hai..hamara toh koi value hi nahi hai. koi hume dekh bhi nahi rahe hai...

Romeo:ha yar aadi ye sab ko kuch bhi nahi pata.hum yaha guests ban kar aaye hai and no one is paying attention to us...

Lucky:ha tum dono teek keh rahe ho...humare amritsar mein toh mehmano ko itna izzat dethe hai ki o kabhi nahi bhulthe hai...waise aadi tumhe kisne invite kiya is party mein...

Aadi:aur koun maan ne...

Romeo:are yar tu phir se bewakoof ban gaya..maan har baar tuje bewakoof banatha rehtha hai aut tu ban jaatha hai.tuje apni friend kehne mein bhi sharam aarahi hai..

Aadi:accha!mein bewakoof ho toh tum log bhi ho...isiliye har baar mere saath saath tum log bhi fool hojathe ho.

Maan geet and karan who were enjoying their conversation interrupts...

Maan:are aadi tu yaha kya kar raha hai...

Aadi:tum mujse baat hi matkaro.tum firse se muje ullu bana rahe ho na is party mein bhulakar...😆

Maan:are nahi aadi tu kesi baat kar rahe ho...tu toh mera dost hai aur saath hi saath mera relative...mein tuje kyun ullu banaunga jab tum already ho...😉😆

Aadi:ye hui na baat mein...ek minute kya kaha tumne...😆

Maan:kuch nahi o dekho o ladki...

He shows a girl who is sitting there and sobbing...

Aadi:ha bechari ro rahi hai...(makes worried face)

Maan:pata hai kyun?

Aadi nods as no...kyun ki o tumse pyar karthi hai...

Aadi:kya mujse bhi koi pyar kartha hai?

Geet:kyun nahi aadi tum itna handsome jo ho...

Karan:aur sabse zyada intelligent and senior bhi ho...

Aadi:nahi nahi tum sab jhoot bol rahe ho...says innocently😆

Romeo:wahi toh aadi...ye sab tuje intelligent keh rahe hai matlab jhoot hi huyi na😆...muje maan ne bataya ki intelligent usko kehthe hai jise kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aatha hai par tum toh sab samaj the ho...

Maan,geet and karan were trying to supress their laugh...

Geet:are wah! romeo tumhe toh sab pata hai...tum toh sabse bada fool nikla...😉[aur ek bhakra😛]

Romeo blushes at geet's compliment....he he thanx geet😆😳

Aadi:geet ye toh galat baat hai...tu muje bach pan se jaanthi hai par tum muje kabhi compliment nahi diya...

Karan:don't worry aadi mein hoon na tuje compliment karne...tum ho sabse bada despo aur loser ho...

Aadi:he he thanx karan tum mera sabse accha dost ho isiliye muje do baar compliment kiya...😲

Geet maan and karan smiles silently...

Maan:aur mein sabse accha dost hoon isiliye tuje apni partner se milwane ki koshish kar raha hoon...😉

Aadi:sach!!!toh tum muje intelligent kyun kaha...main toh sab samajtha hoon na...

Maan:ha..ladkiyon ke bhare mein tumse zyada koun jaantha hai...mein toh MBA ke bhare keh raha tha...tumne hi kaha na ki tumhe MBA ke subjects kuch samaj mein nahi aathe isiliye char saal se pass nahi ho paaya...

Aadi:ha woh toh hai...😆

Maan:ab o sab chodo dekho o ladki isliye ro raho hai kyun ki o tuje propose nahi kar paa rahi hai...use lagtha hai ki tum use pasand nahi karthe ho..aur o chahthi hai ki tum khud jaa kar use propose karo...

[bali dene se pehle bakri ko tayyar kar rahe hai😆]

Aadi:accha!ye baat hai...par tumhe ye sab kese pata...

Maan:kyun ki..kyun ki...kyun?

turns towards geet and karan and raises his eyebrows as is asking them for the bahana... Ha kyun ki mein ne use kehthe huye suna hai...👏

Aadi:accha!kisse...asks innocently😕

Maan:apni bhai se...darsal baat ye hai ki o ladki tujse pehle ek ladke se pyar ki thi par o toh intelligent tha isliye use chod diya aur fir use pata chala ki tum sabse bada loser ho aur tuj se pyar karnelagi...

Aadi smiles widely and gives a proud look to his friends...

Aadi:mein ek kaam kartha hoon use jaa kar keh detha hoon ki mein bhi usse pyar kartha hoon...

Karan:ha aadi gud idea...chalo all the best...

Aadi takes few steps forward and then turns back again...

Aadi:par maan mein use propose kese karu...😭[bechara mele bacche ko ye bhi nahi pata😆]

Maan:tu tension matle mein hoon na tumhe sikhane ke liye...tum us ladki ke paas ja and kneel down before her...then give a smile and say"tum bhi loser ho aur mein bhi...hum dono ki jodi perfect hogi...i love u loser"

[are maan ye kya kiya tune bechare ko fasa diya na😭]

Aadi smiles while imagining the scene...ha maan ye toh kamal ka idea hai yar...

Tu mera sab se accha dost hai...he hugs maan and moves towards the girl...

[ruk beta jald hi pata chal jayega o tera kitna accha dost hai😉]

Geet:arey romeo...lucky tum dono apne friend ko cheer up nahi karoge...jao jao jaakar use cheer up karo...

[ab geet bhi😲]

Both nods and follows aadi...

three of them shares hi-5 and laughs loudly imagining aadi's situation...

geet:waise maan kya o ladki sach mein aadi se pyar karthi hai...

maan:huh!pyar tum dekhna o ladki aadi ki band baja degi...

geet looks at him confusingly...

Karan:are geetu kuch nahi yar...jab hum dono car park karke aarahe the tab is ladki ko apne boy friend ke saath ladthe huye dekha hai...o is ladki ko loser keh raha tha aur pata nahi kya kya kaha...o jo ladka khada hai jinhe hum ladki ka bhai banadiya o asal mein uska boy friend jisse uski abhi abhi ladayi huyi hai...

[are ye kya karan ko sab pata hai 😲phir bhi fasaya aadi ko😭]

Geet:ahh kya????😲bechara aadi gaya kaam se...maan poor aadi kyun kiya aisa...

Maan:kyun????bhool gayi ...uski wajah muje kitni baar papa se daat sunni padi...ab dekhna kya hotha hai iska...

Three of them laughs again...there aadi did the same what maan said..as soon as she listens his words she slaps him..."u stupid how dare u?" tumne muje looser kaha..and how dare u to propose me in front of my would be...

Aadi makes crying face and says...stupid toh tum ho isliye apne bhai ko would be keh rahe ho..agar tumhe yes nahi kehna hai hai toh mat kaho par apne bhai ko boy friend mat banao...

Then her boyfriend who listens this comes to him fuming and he then takes nice care of three of them...(I think u can understand what would have happened😉)

Maan,geet and karan burst out laughing while witnessing the whole incident...

Aadi comes to them with crying face...maan mein toh tuje chodunga nahi uncle se kehkar teri band bajadoonga...party karne ka bahuth shouk haina tuje...

Maan:accha!

Mein bhi jaa kar kedoonga papa se o bhi sach sach ki tum ek shaadi shuda ladki se pyar karthe ho aur use propose karne ke liye mujse suggestion mang rahe ho...

Aadi:he... he... he...uncle teri baat par trust nahi karega'kyun ki tu har baar joot bolthe ho...

Maan:he he he mere paas witness hai...geetu aur golu...geetu aur golu toh hamesha sach kehthe hai na...kyun geetu...

Geet:ha mein toh uncle ko sab kuch sach sach batadungi...

Karan:ha mein bhi...

Three of them smiles at shocked face of aadi...

Aadi makes crying face and he's almost to cry...but then maan comes to him and encircles his arm around his shoulder.."sorry mera dost mein toh mazak kar raha tha...muje pata hai tu papa se kuch nahi kahega aur mein bhi...kyun mein ne sahi kaha na aadi...

Aadi:ha...laughs he...he... he...and rubs his palm on his cheek where that girl slapped him.

Geet:chalo aadi ab party enjoy karthe hai...o dekho music bhi start ho raha hai...

Maan grabs geet and karan to dancing floor..and aadi,romeo and lucky follows them...

plz check the link for original song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5L6m08_ae8&feature=related

All I wanna say is turn the volume up on your speakers
Pump up the bass like this


first maan joins the girls on the dance floor then geet and karan also joins him...



geet joins the another team of boys...




Aaj hai Friday night mein chalun apne friends ke saath
Random spinning wheels meri boom boom car
Laga ke CD player hum toh chale hain tayaar
Speaker maare bass karde sab ke kaan faadh, say what
Hello Mr. DJ, mera gaane please play


karan also joins another team...






Aaj no wine, aaj no lager, aaj peeyenge champagne

Ba ba ba boozing dancing and we cruzing
Bouncer panga leta hai toh, gotta keep it moving


maan signals karan and geet to join him...
Char baj gaye lekin party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba .., with the booze ae
Taare ghir gaye lekin party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba .., just loose there, just loose it
Mere daddy hain naraaz lekin party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba .., with the booze ae
Party ho gayi toh after party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba ..


Aa aa aa aggey kya karenge mitro

Saari bottles pee gaye hum toh in the disco
Arrey booze lagi hain, bottle do
Arrey booze lagi hain, bottle do
Bam booze lagi hai drinking to be trap

Arrey pivado ne bapa (in Gujarati), what the fa fa fa ..

Vailati pee gaye par desi abhi baaki hai
Hello Mr. DJ, mera gaane please play
Aaj no wine, aaj no lager, aaj peeyenge champagne
Ba ba ba boozing dancing and we cruzing





karan,romeo,aadi lucky also joins them and every one enjoy dancing on the floor..






Bouncer panga leta hai toh, gotta keep it moving
Char baj gaye lekin
Char baj gaye lekin party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba .., with the booze ae
Talli ghir gaye lekin party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba .., just loose there, just loose it
I want all the drinks
Thulle aa jaan ge lekin party abhi baaki hai
Ba ba ba .., with the booze ae
We lost all our money lekin party abhi baaki hai
Can I get oo ..


Everyone of them becomes busy in their dancing,singing then aadi who came out for drink bumps accidently with a guy who looked arrogant with his appearance...and drink spilled on his coat.

Aadi:sorry...mein jaan bhooj kar nahi kiya...

But that guy slaps aadi and holds him by collar...karan notices this and comes to them...

Karan:look he said sorry na then y are u beating him...

Guy:abe oye tu koun hota hai beech mein tang adane aane wale...

Karan:mein uska dost hoon...

Guy:accha!dost hain na toh tuje bhi do tappad doonga new year gift mein...

He then holds karan's collar and karan also starts fighting with him...

Geet:maan...maan dekho o log karan ko maar rahe hai...

Maan immediately runs to them and gives a nice punch on that guy's face...for which he fell on ground...

Maan:kesa laga new year gift...smirks...

Guy:teri itni himmat pata hai mein koun hoon...

Maan:ha hai koi bas***d jise tameez se baat karna bhi nahi jaantha..aur waise bhi tuje maarne ke liye muje tumhari biodata ki zaroorat nahi hai reason kaafi hai...

That guy fumes with maan's words and assaults on maan with his two more friends...but maan is maan...he easily made them fall on ground with blooding oozing out from the corner of his mouth...handling such idiots is like drinking water in one go for him as he was trained in marshal arts and taichi...

Finally that guy gives up and asks for mercy...

Maan smiles politely at him and places his arm on his shoulder...beta ek baat yaad rakhna kisi ko maarne se pehle uski dost koun hai aur kesa hai ye sab jaanlo...aur ha ye apna short temper hai na...ispar control karo...zindagi mein success milega...samje...aur sab mere jaise acche log nahi honge...mein bahuth dayalu hoon isiliye mere dost par haat utane ke baad bhi tuje chod raha hoon par agli baar o haat thodunga samje...smiles again...

Chalo karan...he places his arm around karan's shoulder and moves and starts moving forward and then turns back...he first smiles at that guy and then says....happy new year...

Then they all come out and karan goes to bring the car which is parked...geet just stands besides maan silently without saying anything but glares at him...maan understands that she is angry on him and the reason is the incident just happened few minutes ago...


Maan:geetu sorry yar..muje pata hai tu mujse naraz hai par main kya kartha o log karan ko maar rahe the...mein kuch bhi tolerate kar saktha hoon lekin koi meri dosto ko spcly mere golu aur geetu ko trouble kare ye mein tolerate nahi kar saktha hoon...muje itna gussa aata hai ki mein kuch na kuch kar baittha hoon...

Geet:bas...hogaya!tu pagal hai kya?kisi se bhi lad lethe ho...agar tuje kuch hojaatha tho...hum sorry keh kar bhi situation ko handle kar sakthe the par tum kabhi nahi sudroge...




She turns her face away from him...

Maan smiles at his chweet concerned geetu...

Maan:tu pagal hai... mein nahi...o idiot kuch bhi kare aur hum chup chap suntha rahe..chalo o sab chodo ab jaldi se smile karo...mein jaantha hoon meri geetu mujse zyada der naaraz nahi reh sakthi...ab chalo jaldi se smile karo...

Geet's heart melts with his little smile and sweet talks... and a smile crept on her lips...




Karan:ha geetu chodo wo sab...waise maan ne andar bilkul teek kiya...

Geet:golu tu use support mat kar warna...

Warna kya...karan and maan says in unison...

She smiles at her two sweet monsters who always tease her but at the same time pampers her like a princess..she hugs both of them...

Geet:ab chale...

Maan and karan smiles and nods...then all of them drove to home wishing happy new year once again...


precap:

Karan kaha the tum?raat bhar gayab the?

Maan:(crying)ab kya kahe uncle'.hamare professor ki patni mar gayi thi'tho humne unhe console karne gaye the'.(starts pretending as if he's crying'..)

precap2:

maan:geetu plz muje us pagal sam se bachalo...

hope u all like it...

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Love u all..

-mona

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
aww so sweet and awesome update thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear want to know more i love the song part
romeo and gang was funny
continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update monaa... loved it veryy much... Poor aadi felt sry 4 him... but bahut maza aaya... acha kiya maan nee us ladke ko maarkar...
plzzz cont soon
waiting!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
its awsem poor aadimaan fight for friends



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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!loved deir dosti...
Aadi toh bhakhra bangaya..😆
Nw who s ds sam????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aawesome dear and sweet update
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loved it... awesome... can you translate the conversation in English also. it will be helpfull...
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superb...lovely updt
Loved it
Waiting for next
cont soon

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