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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Congo for new ff... Concept is 'freaking' awesome n interesting too

And the starting was just superb.. really loved it.


Edited by love.mayurarti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur


red : Fiza CSI3 jaldi start kar😊 ... dekh sirf hum hi nahi hai line me😛😆


hum bhi hai line me😉 waise bhi CSI 2 mai complete padh nahi payi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
wow many congrats for the new ff...🤗
and wht a start and wht a topic...
loved it...
i must say u r awsome girl...
how can such type of unique ideas comes in ur mind...😉
and mackz uff wht a guy he is totally crack... but i liked it...
fiza u r too good...
pls. cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
awww congo congo congo!!!!
4 the new ff
omg this mayank ...
wat to say
just waiting to see my new nupur..
n this is totally new 4 me to see u r writing these types of ff
aww good going...
loved it
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
nice ff with new concept
and congo for ur new ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the whole atmosphere s new to me, dont know what to say except all the best of course!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
waiting for update
Plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
OMG another new story ...oh bhi itna different...Congo Cascade. kamal hogaya. aj do do new parne ko mila.. i m really very happy
maynk ki char bahut he interesting hai. pata nehi nupur kaise hogi. plz usko modern look dena - thik hai???
do cont it
love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Hey Guys..

Hmm so Mix reaction for this ff…if u have an query u can ask…

Mayank is a Casanova, rather a fun loving care free person but yes you will not see him too much like tht after previous update…I cant make a illegal street racer a boy of principles n goody good..

About CSI 3…let me finish this one after tht I will pakka try…

About urdu ff….i will try to cum with an ss..but need some time..

Nupur's entry have to wait for it….let the plot set..

Okay..NOS is a chemical gas tht give engine a very hig power for certain limit of time, a cylinder is fitted in the car to provide it, it can be use only one time

I hope u enjoy it..

For ur convince I have added a picture of track, its terrible I know hope u get a little hint

Love

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Chapter: 2

And Mayank press the accelerator and rushed the car…..and so does Addy

Rushing the cars it was just instant when Addy and mayank left the other two behind,

When mayank press the accelerator the car 2 was pressed to the corner until its side was rubbed and crashed…

Mayank: wao wao….one down…..two to go…hit it dude….hi haaa….

Benz: okay ladies ur hot dude Mackz has put one down, crashing his sides, bursting the his tiers ….so he is on..and where do I see mr Addy daddy….no where huh…where is Addy daddy, com on com on ….make it dude..

Addy: shut up ben all kick ur***, just wait n watch

Benz: I am waiting and watching…..

Mayank was hearing all this an all four cars are connected...he was cut with the car, and he went forward, mayank was smiling and humming the songs…..and took the left from the track making himself off the track….

Addy: hey look at ur sleeping baby, he is off the track…..is he off the race han, gon gone….

Mayank took the short cut from left to reach the tracks mid, he rushed his car checking the others in back mirror and GPRS LCD to be sure of his position...he knew Addy is a good competition and he loves being challenged…plus as per rule, u can't be off the track more than 10 mins, if more than that u r off the race

Addy: woo oh….Mackz wanna play, ok I will show u….he took a cut and took the other short cut

It was just seconds left and both were off the track…..

Benz: hello guys cum back to track r u off the race huh

Mayank: Addy is it true……

Cuming back on the track both of them, one from left and other from right they hit the track with a solid bang ..

Benz: okay so nobody has able to catch them, here is Addy and Mackz on the track back right on time…

Mayank and Addy looked at each other, making the track on fire, mayank was infornt yet Addy came from behind putting his car on top gear, he rushed infornt of mayank…crashing his car on the side,

Mack decrease the gear with jerk and from back crossed him and cum back from right and put he infornt….

Addy make himself at the left back edge of mayank and hit the car with full speed making it turned in wrong direction

Addy: hoo hoo…now wht Mackz….

Mayank got the grip back and made her car back into position, coming beside Addy hit it again and again to side lock it, just than mayank eyes want on the GPRS and track…

But Addy pulled himself out of it and was now in front, and was laughing at mayank

He still has a smile on his face, and was taping the his fingers on gear….he put his car on top, there was a sharp turn on the road, and mayank n Addy where in same place, Addy hit the NOS launcher, mayank put his car down a gear, and make him self back

The turn appear and due to being the car in NOS, his car went ahead but straight, he turned his car to left to control it,

Cuming from the right were the turn was in mayank make way towards the cut, and went infornt….

Addy quickly got the control of his car and rushed to catch mayank and he was able to do so

Benz: wht r u upto…

Mayank: wait n wait…

Addy came beside him , and mayank was smiling, he looked at him and looked back to where his finger was, Addy grinded his teeth in frustration and than mayank hit the button launching the NOS, hitting the car on fire, his car rushed at an speed touching 200m/hr..and he was far gone, Addy as already used NOS, he hited his hand on his stirring yet he kept going hiting his accelerator as much as he can….

And here cums Mackz….and he hit the line…the whole public shouted on top

He stoped his car turning it to breaks with a sharp noise…and the girls and boys get towards him…

He tagged and n hit his shoulder with benji

Benz: u did it man u did it….

The girls got on him hugging and kissing him, he moved out of the car as Addy camed and stoped there..

Mayank: so Addy what happened han…u slept on the track..where were u im waitng for u from so long….

Addy: ur gonna pay for it mayank….i am telling u ur so gonna pay for it… just wait..

Mayank: ya ya ya…every one say tht, but u put a strong bet dear…u will not be seen on this track never tht is so…this was the bet na..u remember or not….

Addy: ya dude it's just this track not every track…..i ll se u soon..and tht so in a terrible way

Mayank: ben get him out man, he is making my nerves ach…get out..u stings….

Benz: hey hey,…give me the car and go to home on ur feet's, bye bye dude….

Diya: common Addy, we will see them…cam baby…

Mayank: go do wht ur nice on , sleep….bye baby….

Benz: here u goo, ur money

Mayank: aha gr8 man, so Addy is out of the track now, not good who will make me win such huge amounts…

Benz: get ur car repaired, and mark his words u know Addy he will not stay at peace,,

Mayank: I even donor want him even to be at peace benji, u know I love to race with some one challenging and he is a dam good racer, but today he wasn't at 100%...

Girl: hey mayank… sweetie, she came and placed her hand on his shoulder giving him kiss..

Mayank: hey ria….looking good

Girl: so wht r the plans of celebration

Mayank: ahh…thinking of having a good morning ..he said checking her….

Girl: so … the whats the venue,..n r v invited han…she trace his finger on his cheeks

Mayank: see….today I am feeling like make it a private party, so it will just me and my love…

Ria: I thought u must be feeling charged

Mayank: nahh…im feeling loo…so will plan som day other…bye beautiful

Benz: woo…girls getting on u and ur making them go,.wht this man…altleast u should have given her my house no…hey ria….i am on..

Ria: get ur engines shut down…

Mayank: lol…give urself a break amigo….mayank has rule he never celebrate with fake pleasure…..

Benz: common girls are fake pleasure

Mayank: kind of….atleast a pretty temporary pleasure,…till whn im rich and winner..they r there….

Benz: n u don't wanna make fullest of it

Mayank: r u nuts….i am gonna make huge out of it…but right now…I need to sleep…and thts literally…

Benz: oki…

Mayank: when is next

He was driving back to his home…

Benz: when u want to have it…

Mayank: the car will take a day….

Benz: why donot u did Miami….its huge there

Mayank: there weird rules there, and I hate rules u know that…plus I donot need to…common this much amount is pretty well enough for me….and my chicks too

Benz: actually ur chikies need more than u….

Mayank: aha…so here we r home sweet home

Throwing a bottle of bear to him, he was sipping one himself too

Mayank: wht do u thing Addy can do

Benz: gonna put u in a weird bet race…I am telling u…

Mayank: u mean he is gonna make me fool

Benz: he can …donot be over confident mayank…he is a f***** son *****….so he will play something big..this the first time he lost

Mayank: he will get use to to it,….donot worry and don't make me think when im going for my dreamy sleep….good morning…..(it was7 am )

Benji: lock my word amigo…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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