Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 3 pt 47 pg130 - Page 39

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One thing continue soon
It was awesome
Maans reaction vl confuse him more..
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update update update... jaldi kar na re...
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Awesome update.
OMG what has maan done? He is a moron n a idiot.
Loved it.
Waiting for more.
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maan is so possessive he can hug anyone he wants and be with and geet should not feel bad he has his girl friend who he does thing with and he say he loves her yet when
geet hug or look at another he get angry he s not understanding that she too has a life and he has suziel
He s so obsessive and behaving like a jerk Sameer s such a good friend to geet he loves her why should geet all ways pine for something when he is the one who took he rights away thanks for the pm
loved it forgive the commentary wanted to vent

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Part 44



geet recollcted her all courage as she let out, "bcoz i like him.."

d moment passed..

n maan smacked his lips on hers...

her eyes widened in shock as she felt his lips being suddenly slammed on her and she stood dere frozen n numb...

it was not romantic kiss nor a loving 1...

he just sucked her lower lips aggressively as possible n she was too numb to even react..he felt dat restlessness decreasing as he touched her more n more..he once again held her wrists tighltly as he kissed her hardly..he didn't even realise wat d hell he was doing..he licked sucked on her lips from top to bottom until dere were bloody, wet n swolen...he wanted more..he wanted to take out all his damn frustartion..d frustration he was bearing from ystrday..he wanted his answer n her being close can onl answer him n he pulled her even closer wid d thought...

he rolled his tongue on her lowerlips n took her wet flesh into his teeth to give her d taste on his hard bite..she winced n parted her lips cuming back to her senses...

highly aroused wid her sudden closeness..maan moved in her mouth..

geet eyes widned in shock as d reality was resistered n she tried to free her hands desperately...

her denial just drove him creazy n he kissed her even roughly yet passionately creating d havoc inside her...

how could she not realise...

it was her 1st kiss..n dat too from maan.. could she ask for sumthing else..no never...her maan was touching her..d thought thrilled her heart but she felt selfish of herself..maan was not hers for god sake..why d hell is he making it even more difficult for her..just why...

she tried weak attempt to free herself which soon vanished as she held onto his fist tight..trying to control herself from getting lost...

maan digged his nails into her waist and she winced loudly..bringing maan back to his senses...

startled at his own action..he pulled himself away from her n snapped few steps back..

her eyes were close while he stared at her wid wide shocking eyes..just wat happened..just wat d hell he did...he looked at her n noticed her eyes closed...he knew he was frustrated but he shoudl hav done dat..wat vil geet think of him..he felt ashamed of himself...

"m sorry.." mumbled maan n walked away abruptally...

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geet gently opened her eyes when she felt her beat calm again...she could stop herself from smiling as she touched her lips..it was her kiss...maan kissed her..d mere thought thrilled her senses...

she didn't even realise dat maan had left..she felt lost in herself..her eyes twinkled wid unknown satisfaction...she rested back on d tree and a tear of happiness rolled out...she never knew..she woud get happiness all of a sudden aftr so much of pains...

but he alwz had dat magic in him...he kissed her..god he kissed her dat to so...oughh she couldn't voice to even herself...

but suzeil...

d thought stuck her mind n she came back to reality...

agar suzeil ko pata chala toh..nahi nahi...i dnt think maan vil tell her..he was just angry n dat was it..it has no existance as though it never happened...i hav to keep away from him...

wid dat geet lft her to her sleeping bag

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things were not easy wid maan around...geet kept herself busy wid all d way possible but aftr d kiss maan had not talked to her n it was more dan a week...he avoided her she knew..she was happy wid..dis was wat she wanted him to do..so finally he could look to suzeil...

but was he feelng guilty of himself..d thought of irritating her n she wanted to clear it soon as possible...

dadi maa alsoo getting back to normal in her health n was creebing to go back to delhi..but geet didn't want dadi maa too...

aftr long 2 yrs..she had got her family back ..every1..sam..dadi maa ..maan ..uttara..hameer.. n now suzeil too...she felt selfish..she wanted dem wid her for more time..she wanted to live wid dem for d last time...

once she vil strt destroying rajjender handa n his family..dere vil be no backing she knew..n d time was cuming closer..till den she wanted all things to settle in every1's life..uttara n hameer..maan n suzeil..n even sameer n sameera is good choice..she thought...

she wated everything sort out b4 she strt d real dangerous game of her life..

sighed, she closed her eyes n picked her cell

"hmm.."

"how many..."

"offer him 10 crores.."

"do as i say..n i want NO MISTAKE.."

wid dat she cut d call and her eyes became dark n cold !!

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it was a thurseday n all were having dinner in silence...

geet knew dis was d time, "dadi maa...i need to talk sumthing important.."

maan looked up but couldn't meer her eyes..

dadi maa confused, "kya huva beta..."

"umm..its about sameer.."

dat caught every1 attension while maan looked at geet curiously and d anger started to build up..

geet cleared her throat, "i like sameer.."

WATT ..came a shock from every1..uttara n hameer looked at geet dumbfounded while suzeil looked at geet confused n den to maan who looked at geet angrily..frustrated n painfully..it was a misture of emotions she couldn't understand..but dat redness d way he started at geet..said it all..

maan snapped threw his spoon n walked out leaving every1 confused...

geet closed her eyes n followed hm...

"maan we need to talk.."

said geet as she followed maan in his room n locked d door behind...

"wat is left to talk geet...seems like u hav already taken d decisions.."

geet tried to hold his hand but he snapped away, "dnt geet..leave from here.."

"maan cum on..stop over reacting..its fine alright..just calm down.." geet tried to ease him..

maan turned around n held her wrist into his fist n pulled her closer to meet hs red blasting eyes, "wat did u say..its fine..how can it be fine geet...for god sake..tumne ek baar mujhse puchhna bhi jaruri nahi samajha..just wat d hell were u thinking ?.."

"jab tumne suzeil se pyar kiya to mujhse puchhke kiya tha.." geet let out coldly..

maan left her hand instantly..d pain was visible in his eyes, "ohh..im so sorry geet..well den u did right.."

wid dat he turned away from her not wanting to show his hurt..

geet closed her eyes knowing she hurt him..she hold his hand gently, "maan its not dat..i just want to say..he is a nice guy..why dnt u think dat way..he is ur frnd right.."

maan looked at her wid emotion n pain, "he can be a nice guy..but he not good for u..he..he.." he had no abd words for sameer...

geet finished his lines, "he wat..u cnt say na..bcoz u know he is good..den wats d problem.."

maan let our frustarted, "bcoz i dnt like him near u..im best frnd..im want to be d 1 who is closest to u..not any1 else.."

geet smiled wid tears, "u vil alwz be my best frnd maan..but d way u hav a life wid suzeil..i also need sum1 who vil be my side alwz.."

maan made baby face, "so u think i vil not be at ur side alwz ? u dnt trust me.."

geet shook her head, "mana try n understand..i need sum as my life partner..n d way u hav suzeil..u vil marry suzeil...kya tum nahi chahte ke meri shadi ho..?"

maan had no answer..he himself didn't know wat he wnated..wat was bothering him..ofcorse he is not idiot dat he vil not understand wat she meant by sum1 she want..she want sum1 who..ough..why he could accpet it..exactly wat he wanted..why d hell was he feeling so restless thinking about her being close to sum1 else..

CLOSENESS !!

dat word hit him !!

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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😆😆yapeee Me first...

OMG Maan kiss geet...😳😳
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So lovely to fell it
year...n & Geet making Jodi sammer with sammera...love it the thought then geet like sammer ...Maan bachra ...😆 kyu nahi samj ta he love geet...per koi baad nahi samj jaye ge..bohot jaid...hai na.. Mishty...
waiting for next part...2 day intejar kar na pare ga...😆😆😆

I love it very very much...Thanks my sweet mishty for this lovely part...😊😊














































Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me loved the update...!!!!!!

Awww... Yaar I m feeling sad for geet...!!!!!

Grrhhh Why This maan dnt understand...!!!

Is he sooo dumb or what...!!!!

I wish He recognize it jaldi jaldi...!!!

Continue sooon...!!!!!

Luv ya...!!!!!!!
Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago
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Maan is an Idiot
I so nt like him

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