Naksh OS: Chaliye bhulate hai dukh bhare baatein

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys this is my first os focusing on the present track. It may not be good.
Anywayzzz... Happy reading😊



Akshara was in a pool of tears after the harsh words of g3 was sunken in. 😭

"Mai toh Naksh ko Naitik ke paas chodke gayi, phir kyon itna tamasha? Naitik ne hi bacche ko maa ko de di. Ab samajh mein aya. Unka problem kya hai? Pehle tika ke vakth absent the aur ab. Maa bekaar mein naraaz ho gayi. Kya Naksh ko sambhalna sirf mera kaam hai, unka nahi?" she said in a shivering, sad voice. 😡

She turned to Duggu. "Dekho na Duggu, tumhare Papa ne kya kiya, tum bhi badmash ho thodi der chup nahi reh sakte the kya?" Duggu let out a cry again as if he wasn't happy with her words. Akshi laughed, "Bilkul apne papa pe gaye hai aap, jhat se naraaz ho jate hai. Mera pyaara sa Duggu. Mwaaah." Duggu smiled. " Mera Duggu ne mera mood ekdum thik kar diya" She was playing and talking like this. "Kya baate ho rahi hai?" 😊😊

"Vo hum dono...", she stopped when she remembered what happened.😭
"Vo hum dono kya?"
(Ab mai precap change karoongi.)
Naitik understood her khamoshi. He hugged her from back.
"Mujhse naraaz hai? I am sorry Akshara. Duggu ko itna rota dekh mai ghabra gaya aur Maa aate hi unhe de diya. Aur vaise bhi itni badi baat thodi hai, jo aap itna naraaz ho gayi? Aur aapko toh pata hai, mujhe ye sab seekhne mein time lagega."😊
Akshi became a tomato out of rage when she heard this.
" Badi baat nahi hai? Aap ka kya matlab? Aapko pata bhi hai, ki Maa mujhse kitni naraaz hogayi? Aur kya sirf mai hi poora zindagi Duggu ko sambhaloongi. Aur aap khare hokaar dekhte rahenge. Aisa kab tak chalega? Delivery ki baat mai samajhti hoon. Aap ko kaam tha. Par tika ke vakth? Aur aajkal jab mai aapko Duggu ko godh mein lene ki baat karti hoon, tab bhi aap koi na koi bahana dhoondte hai. Kya aap bhi Rituraj jaisa pati banna chahte hai?"(Akshi would never say this. It just blurted out of her mouth) 😡
Her eyes were filled with tears.Akshi said this in one go. Naitik was blank. The last part hit him the most.😭
"Akshara maine kaha na I am sorry. Aur possible toh nahi hai na ki har vakth main aapko time de pau. Aap zara sochiye, Maine kitni baar Duggu ko lene se mana kiya. Zyaada se zyaada do ya tin baar.Phir kabhi mana kiya kya? Mera aur bhi kaam ho sakte hai. Aur Akshara, aapko pata hai na, Ye sab hamare liye naya hai. Mai janti hoon aap soch rahi hai ki mujhe adjust karne mein kyu itna vakth lag raha hai. Vo isiliye, kyonki zyaada se zyaada samay aap usske sath rehte hai. Mai office main subh subha jaata hoon. Shaam ko laut ta hoon. Aadha din toh aap hi rehte hai Duggu ke sath. Aap usse mujhse zyaada jante hai. Ussko bhook laga tha. Isiliye ro raha tha. Aap ka rehna zaroori tha. Aur main koshish kar raha hoon na, aap dono ko time dene ka. Aur phir tika ke baat. Mai valentines day ke liye preps kar raha tha. Aap dono ke liye din special banane ka. Kabhi aisa ho sakta hai kya ki mai apna bacche ki pehle tika mein jaan bhuj kar na jau. Main bas in taiyaariyon mein bhool gaya. Aur aapne abhi kya kaha? Riruraj, aur main? Aap mujhe itna hi samajh payi kya?" Naitik almost had tears in his eyes while saying out the last line. He said all this in one round, with the most upset voice.😡😡

Akshara was feeling so guilty. " I am sorry Naitik, Mujhe bhi samajhni chahiye. mai bhi na. Naitik I am so sorry. Aur maine jo bhi kaha bina soch samajhke kaha. Plzz Naitik mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Plzz." She said tearfully.😭

Naitik wasn't convinced. Akshi went and closed the door. She hugged him from the back.
"Naitik, aapko pata hai, mai kisse baat kar raha hoon?
He remained silent.
" Nahi pata, main batati hoon. Mai world ki sabse pyaar karne vala pati aur sabse adorable papa se baat kar raha hoon. Jo ab mujh jaisi buddhu se naraaz hai."(sob)😭

Naitik half melted in this and let out a smile. He couldn't stop it from flowering in his face. Akshi understood this. She got a feeling. Vo try karti rahi.😊

She softly kissed on his back. U know Naitik na. Iss act se toh hi forgave her completely.😳
I m soo soly. Soo soly.

He laughed out hearing this.(loudly)
Akshi felt load get off her back.😆
"Aap man gaye na?"
"Nahi." (he held her closely)"Abhi toh aapko best patni banke dikhana hai"😉

"Naitik aap bhi na. Chodiye, Duggu dekh raha hai."
(Akshi turned and saw him asleep)😳

" Dekhiye, hamaare boring argument se vo bhi so gaya."🥱 (He bent down to kiss her. Tabhi duggu let out a cry)😭

" Akshi took him in her godh. Aapka baccha hai na, bilkul aap pe gaya hai. Vo apni Mamma ko kisi ki sath share nahi karegi." (Duggu smiled as if he agreed)😊

Naksh laughed seeing this.
"Naitik I m sorr..." he stopped her,
" sshh.. dukh bhare baate nahi. Ab sirf hum tino."
He kissed her on the cheek. She did the same.
They spent the whole night cuddling as the nxt day, akshi would leave for mayka.😭
The End...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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aweasome OS sumaiya its ur first attempt na very very good👏👏⭐️
patchup toh bohat acha tha but aksh ko myka na jana pade😭
once again aweasome work 😃do write more...
Edited by mahaayub8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry if I forgot to pm any1. Kuch prblems ho rahi hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahaayub8

aweasome OS sumaiya its ur first attempt na very very good👏👏⭐️
patchup toh bohat acha tha but aksh ko myka na jana pade😭
once again aweasome work 😃do write more...

Thanku so much yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mention not😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kuch toh kehna padega na.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS👏.Thanks for sharing😊.kash aisaa hi show ami bhi dhekne ko mile.😍,tired of naksh cat fight.😲
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AWESOMEE...hope aisaa hi ho...😳
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Originally posted by: shruthi.sweety

Awesome OS👏.Thanks for sharing😊.kash aisaa hi show ami bhi dhekne ko mile.😍,tired of naksh cat fight.😲

thanks for the reading and liking it yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadia_naksh

AWESOMEE...hope aisaa hi ho...😳

thanks a lot for the lovely comment.

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