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Posted: 13 years ago
Going for " game or love:
hope I will enjoy it just like ur other ff😃😊😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
Sorry for delay dears but please bear with me. I will try my best to give sooner updates.
--Anu
Part 48
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She came back when Maan was still upset and angry' on himself and Annie both.

Geet came close and kept her hand on his shoulder'

"Humse behtar kaun janta hai Maan' how unpredictable love is "

Seeing her Maan's mind again went on her'. He pulled her towards him

"And you know how unpredictable your Maan is' umm" he nuzzled his nose on her shoulder.

"Maan chodriye na'."

"No way' tomorrow anyways we are leaving for Delhi'" he brought her closer o him.

His hands roaming all around her, his lips capturing hers'. Geet holding his shirt tightly, then her hands roaming on his back'. Feeling his well toned body making her loosing her own sense.

There hands slowly moving over each other' getting lost in each other. Maan madly nibbling her everywhere

Geet suddeny slipped from him suddenly and ran away'.

But Maan was Maan, he did not like her slipping away like this but it took him just few minutes to get her

"Maan please na'. I want to go out, we will be leaving this place."

"hmm-mm'. anyway this is our place, you can come here anytime" He was not liking this going out idea but Geet really wanted to enjoy the place which has given her so much.

"This place will be closest to my heart'. I got my life here, I got you here Maan, my dream"

Maan was still upset with her for running away from him at right time.

"Doesn't seem am your dream anymore" Geet looked at him, held his arms and smiled.

"Naraz hain'" he didn't say anything and went along with her for the final tour of the place which has given them both their life'.

Geet was happy from inside and she was loving everything. Maan was with her and everything looked beautiful to her. Maan after a while got lost in her' she was watching the view and Maan was lost watching her'.

After a while Geet felt his intense gaze on her'.. She turned red and looked down when their eyes met and he was looking so deeply at her eyes'.

"Maa-aan' please don't look like this" she said in low voice.

It was then Maan realized he was supposed to be upset with her'.

"Achcha, so now you don't even like me looking at you'. Fine then" he turned other side.

Geet smiled to herself, she was now confident of his love and him and knew he cannot be angry with her in real but she also knew she will have to please him later'..

Slight tears came o her eyes realizing their sweet and strong relation.

At night they were tired and time passed by packing and they slept early to catch the flight in the morning.

Next Morning in KM:

Dadima:"Maan bete, Geet '. Nice you guys are back"

Maan and Geet took blessings of Dadima

Annie:"Hi Geet, Hi Bhai"

Geet hugged Annie and when Annie went to Maan, he without even looking to her forwarded himself to his room.

"Geet I need you at our room for unpacking.. make it fast here'." And he rushed to his room.

Geet had thought with Maan's behaviour with her that he was now in light mood with Annie and he would let things go easily but here things were different with him'. He really was unpredictable.

Annie and Dadima wanted to talk to Geet , especially Annie needed Geet at this moment.

Geet did not know what to do, one side Annie and Dadima was expecting at least her to talk as Maan they knew would not be easy to bring into talk at this moment and on other side Geet had thought she will please Maan's anger on her when she reach home and also he was expecting her'. she did not know where to go.

Also before they left for Darjeeling, Maan never cared how much time Geet spent with family as couple themselves did not spend the time together before but now the situation was different but Dadima and Annie did not know that things has changed so much between the two.

Annie:"Geet we really need to talk to you'. We know bhai does not listen to you too but together we can do something to pacify him'."

"Pacify him'. Abhi yahan rukee to unkee narazkee itnee bad jayegee mujhse' how will I pacify him'.. " she thought.

"Woo Annie, Dadima'. I will just see what Maan needs and I will be back"

She escaped from there'.

She entered the room and closed the door.

"Maan, you did not even talk to Annie"

"Geet, I don't want to talk about it now'. You know why I called you" and he got up and started walking towards her..

He held her and jerked her towards him' "We need to settle yesterdays score'. You ran away, right??? " he gave her the smile

"Maan abhi nahi' woo niche dadima'.Actually I told her"

Maan came closer

"Mere alawa sabkee fikar hain na tumhe'. Mallom hai deewana hoon tumhara to aise sataoogee' hmm"

He nuzzled his face on her shoulder accepting his restlessness for her. Geet knew with dadima and Annie waiting down stairs for her she will not be able to give her full attention to Maan.

"He doesn't understand' what will they think abhi abhi to Darjeeling se aaye hain aur phir itnee der kerna'" she thought.

"Maan main aatee hoon na.. bas thordee der me."

He smirked "It's upto you'. If you go now be ready to pay big for it." Geet took him lightly and smiled and ran away from there.

Next to be continued.

Part 49
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
sunshine94 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
after such a long time u updated...

nice update./././././././././././././././././././
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan want geet for himself and dadi aanie was her to pacify him



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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was a superb update..
maan always wants geet with him 24x7..
wat a change.. he dint even talk to annie..!
Nw when vl dey cum to noe dat geet s his life..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome but i hope ki inke beech main ab koi probl na aaye
ninand thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
There is a new tension in this story now.. isnt it. Makes it all the more exciting. eager to see how Geet discovers and handles this unpredictable Maan.

There sure will be a lot of conflict in her, as she understands how Maan wants her undivided attention huh..

great update. continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update. Like button is not working. Sorry dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum dear
lobrd it
pls update often dear
wsitimg fr next prt dear

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