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Posted: 13 years ago

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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

lolz geet toh gaye aab maan ke smane he saab kuch dev boldiya and dint know that maan is her boss
loving it

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Part 41 Maaneet ff- kaisa ye pyaar hai

Na jane kismat me kya likha hai,
Milan ke jagah,
Bs judai ka alam likha hai.

Geet lay on bed and try to sleep.

In ankhon me ab neend kaha thi,
Tha to
Bs intzaar,
Intzaar apne pyaar ka
Koi chamatkar ka
Jo mila de , in bihchde dilo ko...

In hospital

Rajeev : naina ab try karu
Kya pata ab phone mil jaye
Naina: hmmm
In maaneet room
Tring tring...
Geet : is samay ab kiska phone aa gya
Geet : hello
Naina : hello
Mein kya geet se baat kr sakti hu
Geet : ji, mein geet bol rhi hu, pr aap kaun
Naina : geet tum mujhe nhi janti pr mein tumhe janti hu,
Mein naina hu,
Geet : naina
Naina : geet tum sbke sath hospital aa jayo
Geet : hospital
Naina : ha
geet maan yaha hai, mein tumhe address deti hu
Geet : maan

please listen this music

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EvDsMHCqls

Saans aati hai saans jaati hai
Sirf mujhko hai intezaar tera
Geet's heart skipped a beat. She was sweating badly.
Geet : maan

Aansuon ki ghataayen pee,pee ke
Ab to kehta hai yeh hi pyaar mera

Naina : tumne suna na geet,
mein tumse kuch kh rhi hu.
Geet : mein abhi aa rhi hu.
Naina : geet

Geet :
Rajiv : kya hua naina
Naina : pata nahi rajiv,
Usne bs itna kaha , wo abhi aa rhi hai,
Rajiv : hmmm

In khurana mension
She was losing her thinking ability, she was extremely worried.

Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam
Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam
Ek mulaaqaat zaroori hai sanam
Ek mulaaqaat zaroori hai sanam

Geet : pata nhi maan kaise honge,
Babaji, unke sath rhna.
Nakul : madam aap itni raat ko akele kaha ja rhi hai
Geet :

Teri chahaton ne yeh kya gum diya
Tere ishq ne yun deewana kya
Zamaane se mujhko begaana kya

Nakul : madam aap thik to hai na
She screamed his name and started running madly.
Nakul : chotte sahab
Madam meri baat to suniye.
Chli gyi
Her dupatta got stuck in the main door but she pulled it causing it to tear in the process, nothing mattered to her more than her love.

Deewane tere pyaar mein bada hi bura haal hai
Khadi hoon teri raah mein na hosh na khayaal hai
Ek mulaaqaat Zaroori hai sanam...

Geet : ganshyam bhaiya
Watchmen : madam ganshyam driver to ghar chale gaye,
Aapko khi jana hai, to mein taxi leke aayu.
Geet : nhi, mein khud chli jayungi.

Watchmen : madam
She doesn't listen any word and start searching for rickshaw.
She stopped a taxi and told him to go to the hospital. She just wanted to reach the hospital as soon as possible.

Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam
Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam

See below

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Geet : bhaisahab thoda tez chlaiye na
Taxi driver : ji
She held the mangalsutr close to her heart and was constantly praying for maan.

Ek mulaaqaat zaroori hai sanam
Ek mulaaqaat zaroori hai sanam

Flashback in
Maan dressed in a sexy black shirt and geet was wearing in mint green sari, both looked perfect.
Geet stand in front of the mirror.
Maan come and hugs her from the back, sliding his hand on her stomach.
She turned to face him.
Geet : maan mujhe tyaar hone dijiye na
Maan : maine kaha roka hai geet
Geet : maan aap chodenge to mein tyaar hongi na
Dekhiye mujhe abi baal(hair) bi bnane hai.
Maan looks at her wet looks naughtily. He tucked the wet hair falling on her face behind her ear and softly sucked the water droplets on the nape of her neck, it sent a burning sensation to her.
Geet : maan
Maan bought his lips near to her lips but geet put her palm to stop him.
He kissed on her palm.
Geet : maan aap shayad bhul rhe hai, apko meeting me jane ke liye late ho rha hai.
Aur ye sharart krna bnd kariye.
Maan : geet shararat tumse nhi karunga, to kya padosi ke sath karunga
Geet :maan
Maan : ha jaan
Geet : maan chodiye na
Maan : nhi
Geet jis meeting ki tum baat kr rhi ho, wo cancel ho gyi hai, to mere pass abi bhut waqt hai.
Geet puts her hand round his neck, brushing his hair, while maan strokes her bare back.
Geet : maan mujhe apki ankho me shararat nazar aa rhi hai,
Zara uspe control kriye.
Hume niche jane me der ho rhi hai.
He slowly brushes his lower lip with her upper lip and sucks it. Geet responds by sucking his lower lip. But they had to break apart, when they heard a knock on the door.
Maan : ab kaun aa gya.
She laughs.
Maan : haslo tum
Tumhe to abi btata hu,
Geet : maan mujhe baad me btana , phle jake dekhiye, kaun hai
Jb tk mein tyaar hoti hu.
She kissed on his cheek.
Geet : maan
Jaiye na
Maan : hmm
He opened the door.
Nakul : sahab
Daadimaa aap dono ko breakfast ke liye niche bula rhi hai
Maan : hmm
Geet : nakul chaliye
Maan : geet mujhe tumse ek jaruri baat krni thi
Geet : maan baatein hoti rhengi.
She goes.
Maan : is nakul ki wajah se
Flashback out
She smiles and suddenly the taxi stopped. Geet opened her eyes.

please click below link

imp. note

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

thread one

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1703085&loggedin=1

Shafoo

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Direct LinkPosted: 26 January 2012 at 8:01pm | IP Logged

i really your ff on maan and geet kaisa ye pyar hai thread 1 and 2

aapke liye

thread one

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1703085/maaneet-if-kaisa-ye-pyaar-hai

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

gosh, where are you sweetie ??????

i mean it has been ages to see this FF's update (mind it, the another FF too)
but loved it (although very small part)
awesome, indeed

do cont soon & do PM me

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aali

@18mypride

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

nice part..

me bit confused...hope everything is fine.

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

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tia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

nice part ...👏
hope maan is fine...😊
maaneet ko jldi mila yaar... 😳
see na scnd thread b shuru ho gya bt ye maaneet kab milege???😕

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

original posted by sara sachi

gosh, where are you sweetie ??????

i mean it has been ages to see this FF's update (mind it, the another FF too)
but loved it (although very small part)
awesome, indeed

do cont soon & do PM me

sorry dear, i am busy in my job plus study, but it doesnt mean i forget our maaneet, aaj bhi mein unhe utna hi pyaar karti hu, jb maine ye ff unke pyaar meion start kiya tha