IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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jenshad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Hope To Get One Part Soon 😳

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Flame.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

When are you going to update this? 😔

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jenshad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

Need PARTTT ! 😳

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Gk1979123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Is there a specific reason why u r not updating this...

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starstuff

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

oh wow... just read all the 6 chapters in one go... beautifully written!! can't wait to read the next part though :)

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shaam91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#476

how did i miss this one??amazing!!lookin frwrd to the next update...this was so tastefully done.

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Hiruni

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Posted: 14 years ago

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THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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tina_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

yeyyy me first to comment

amazin part..soo beautifully written...tears r freely flowin from my eyes aftr readin dis

sooo mcuh of pain

i knw wat arnav did cannot b justified but seeing him in soo much of pain melts my heart for him nd want khushi to forgive him..not sooner though

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Marybarton

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thank God, you wrote again. I hope you didn't find my message pushy. It's just that I worried, after all the show criticisms you will stop writing on this controversial take on the marriage. But I am glad you did. These things happen and sometimes good people make bad judgments, so it is important to look at this side of the coin. Great piece of writing, again. I just loved that way Khushi was described in Arnav's point of view. That was so much affection and guilt. Especially the last line, it really moved me. Keep up the fantastic work!

Mary.

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Strawberry_pie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#480

Man Hiruni!!

How do u do it yaar?? I had been waiting so long for ur update... but it was worth every moment of the wait!!! Brilliant!! Arnav's anguish and pain at the realization of what he had done was so beautifully shown... Brilliant!!

As I said in my pm... Your FF may be the darkest and cruelest of all, but yet, it is the most heart-wrenching and gripping of all as well!! (consider this a compliment darling... not many can pull of such cruelty in such a tasteful manner that u make the reader end up feeling for the man who was the one to inflict such a heinous deed upon her)... the best part of it is that it remains closest to the true story and yet is different :) love it!!!

Brilliant!!

God Bless U!!