OS:VIRMAN-our bonding _deticated to MIA

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi friends, after long days I am back with new OS on VIRMAN. This one I am specially detecating it to Mia, by whose writing I am going crazy!!!

Hope Mia, u like it.

It was late night Maanvi gulped a glass of water and she reached the terrace. Viraat had fought with her for no reason, he screamed at her badly that Maanvi instantly left the place with tears , she did not come for lunch nor dinner , she locked herself in a room . At mid night she managed herself to come out and she immediately reached the terrace.

Viraat in room was thinking what he had done to Maanvi, He realized the he had always wanted Maanvi to smile and laugh never wanted to see tear in her eyes but now he solely is responsible for her tears . He was equally broken for hurting her. His eyes became teary and for a moment those scenes flashed before his sight .

Maanvi entered his room for casual talks , but he had fight with Maya before Maanvi entered . Maanvi taaped slowly behind him , Virrat gave an annoying look .

Maanvi questioned " aarey issey kya dekh rahe ho ' chal mere saath ' bahut boring ho rahi hey tho mene soocha ki bahar chalungi tumari saath '"

Viraat replied " dekho Maanvi mujey kuch kam hai so pls mujey aakley chud do ".Maanvi asked " issey kaisi kam hai tume din bar room me gus kar rahtey ho aur bolthey ho koi kam hai'...chal mere saath . "

Viraat did not hear what Maanvi told his eye sight was just filled with Maya's picture. Maanvi tried to pull Viraat's hand. Viraat got angry and replied "Maanvi don't get over smart with you don't know anything about me '. Hare tum ladkiya samjthey kya ho , tu, log ladke ko koi importance nahi dete ho , shothey ho ki tumhi itteligent ho ."

Maanvi really dint understand what Viraat was talking . She said " lekin Viraat tum yeh sab bolthey kyun ho , hare mene sirf tumari majak udai hey , aur tum issey itney serious kyun le rahe ho."

Viraat said " Maanvi chali jaa yahan se, don't make me tell any more ."Viraat just closed his eyes.

Maanvi could not believe what had happened. She was simply questioning herself was it Viraat who was so angry. She left the room with tearful eyes.

This was what happened between Viraat and Maanvi after which both dint meet each other but remind in their respective rooms. Viraat opened his to get back from his past. He slowly moved towards Maanvi's room wiping his tears but saw her missing. He knew she might be in terrace, so quickly ran towards the terrace.

Maanvi was still watching the moon. Viraat came near her and sat beside her. Maanvi tried her best not to notice him and slowly she moved from him. Viraat started coming closer to her and said "Deko Maanvi aaj nahi tho kya kal ham shopping jayengey , tume yad hai jab tum pehli ber Chandigarh aayi thi tab ek badi se maal pe gaaye they usi maal par jayengey , mujey abhi bi yaad tum kaisi uss dukhan se rudhrash mala karid kar layi thi aur yaad hai tumey tum escalator pe chad bhi nahi sakthi thi . " Hearing each sentence Maanvi's lips moved to a smile,

Viraat said " I am sorry Maanvi , I know I have broken your smiles into pieces when you came to me , I feel very bad for having done that , but sorry yar I was in some other land that I forgot that that your were talking to me , chal yar aapne jaisi pagal ladke ko ek bar chance de de aur maaf kar ley , mein tumey hamesha hamesha ke liye kush dehney chahtha hoon , thu kya mujsey ek aur bar dosthi karoege ."He let out his hand towards her, Maanvi slowly gave out her hand. Both shacked their hands. She laid her head on his shoulder.

Friends pls do leave your valuable comments!!!!!!!!!

Edited by jessiekarthik - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome OS ,just loved it👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww...it was shoo cute!!! 😳 VirMan manaofying scene..❤️ loved it sis!!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!! This one's for me???!!!!! *rubs my eyes* How can I describe what I feel now in words?!!! Hun, You made my day!!! I'm speechless, honestly!!! And what an OS! O god I'm gonna cry now...Such a sweet gesture!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unbelievable!!! This one's for ..ME?!!!! *swoons* O god, what an OS!!! Am speechless now...awww...I think i'm gonna cry...Such a sweet gesture!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow I loved the play of emotions the fight the tears that Maanvi has everyting about this OS...it shows that how deeply they care ofr each other... i love it i just love it!!!!

Kudos to you a fantastic piece of writing!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was an awesome update
And the last part where virat is manaoifying manvi was to tooo good .
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I loved it awesome os especially their friendship cute bond of yaar so cute thanx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushnav

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!! This one's for me???!!!!! *rubs my eyes* How can I describe what I feel now in words?!!! Hun, You made my day!!! I'm speechless, honestly!!! And what an OS! O god I'm gonna cry now...Such a sweet gesture!!!



mia !! glad that u liked it !!!!!!
more r coming from my side for u dear😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hs7071

I loved it awesome os especially their friendship cute bond of yaar so cute thanx


wow its very nice that u got the point what i actually meant

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