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Posted: 13 years ago


amazing FF...

I read both ur FF---My Jungle Girl and Tum Dena Sath Mera...

both have different concept and very interesting...

I have send buddy request to u...

please pm me when u update next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting...
update soon dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
meena was down with fever so ofcourse geet had to do all the works,sameera simply made an excuse ...actually she knew that meena was ill & from next day she had to do all the works..so previous day she asked dev to take her somewhere for a romantic dear in pretence of valentines day...😡🤢
in the house there were only namrata,maan meena,geet & nakul ...
pratham was out of town & meena retired to her room after doing the puja & havimg breakfast..
uff!..avi kitna kaam para hai...kab khatam karu...geet blabbered as she stirred the soup in the pot..
hai rabba!!!! ye ghar itna sannata kyu ho gaya..mujhe darr lag raha hai..babaji!!!😆
it was a rainy day..so inside km it was dark..
light vi nahi jala sakti..mammi ji uth jayegi...kya karu???? ...ha...idea...!!😲
geet inserted headphone in her ear & started a song in her mobile..(do u guys know that in this ff our geet has a very different taste in terms of songs...)😆
ek chatur naar kar ke singar
mere man ke dvar ye ghusat jaat
ham marat jaat, are he he he
yak chatur naarkar ke singar...

pa re sa, sa sa sa ni dh sa
sa re sa dha dha pa
pa dha sa re sa
sa re ga dha pa

yak chatur naarkar ke singaa... r
she was dusting things & in between she was nodding her head like a chicken 😆& moving her hands according to the lyrics..
it seemed like she wanted to do TANDAV bt being a chuimui..it turned out to be something else..😕
she was enjoying her song in a very weird way...singing it...oblivious of the fact that someone was watching her...
yes!!!u guys guessed it right..it was maan who actually came to km hall to watch tv for entertaiment..when he saw geet he first panicked that if she has gone mad..bt then noticed th headphones in her ear..& he did ot stop geet at all..her act seemed more entertaining than the tv!!😆
ki: umm dham
mah: ayyo !
ki: are dham, o dham, o dham dham dham ruk
um bru - 2
o a a i i u u e ai o au an a: (vowels)#
um nam nam nam nam nam nam
nam nam lama lama lama lama la
um bal bal bal bal re,
bal bal bal bal re, bal bal bal bal re
om

ek chatur naar badi hoshiyar - 2
apane hi jaal mein phasat jaat
ham hasat jaat are ho ho ho ho ho !
ek chatur naarbadi hoshiyar

su: tu kyon...
mah: chhi re
she now stood on the sofa..like a NETA giving BHASAN..
kare lakh lakh duniya chaturai
chhutti kar dunga main usaki
abake jo avaz lagai
chhutti kar dunga, a a aa...
ta jum, taka jum, taka num, yaka jum
tak tankidia...

ki: padh ke botan chir bi chakkar - 2 (?)
har bud khudi-budi khud kar - 2
chhitake to rere mon makhan - 2
sab chale gaye, sab chale gaye chidamudh chiting chitubud
chitubud gaay, chitubud gaay, chitubud haay haay haay

ja re, ja re kare kaga
ka ka ka kyon shor machaaye
us nari ka das na ban jo
rah chalat ko rah bulae

kaala re ja re ja re
are nale mein jaake tu munh dhoke a
kaala re ga re ga re
suddenly she felt her stomach grumbleling..maan heard it too..oh yeah!!she did forgot to have her breakfast..she ran to the kitchen still singing
mah: ye gadabad ji
ki: o ga re ga re
mah: ye sur badala
ki: o ga re ga re
mah: ye hamako mataka bola
ki : o ga re ga re
when she turned muching her paratha she saw maan & immidiately stopped the song..she was hell embareced..while maan was laughing..he managed to say in between his laugh..
ruke kyun geet accha to tha..
a..aa..aap ne sab dekhliya??she asked innocently..
ha..dekha..actually u were VERY good in dancing,,,
SACHI!!!!she happily asked
ha TANDAV me..he started to laugh again..
geet got angry & made a big fat rad angry face...
hmmp..mujhe apse baat nahi karni..maija rahi hu..she stomped her feet & weny away..
are geet ...geeet ruko ruko baba..main ti sirf mazak kar raha tha..
karte rahiye mazak..main apse baat nahi kar rahi hu...
lekin baat to kar rahi ho...dekho tumhara muh to khula hai..hum muh band kar ke baat kar sakte hai kya...nahi na...he naughtily said..
app mera kaha muhpe hi ajma rahe hai...!!!she said making a baby face..
ale mela baccha guccha ho gaya..he teased her more..
maina apko...😡
ahhh!!
geet :kya hua maan apko..geet panicked..
wo geet mera saar bahut dard kar raha hai..main tumhare paas hi aa raha tha..
hmm..tabto ap bahut sahi insaan ke paas aye hai..pata hai hosiyaarpur mein sab kehte the ki mere haat ke champi me jadu hai ..unki sardard yu chuki me gayab ho jata hai mere malish se...she went on & on
maan st: iske malish se mera sar dard kam hoga ya nahi ye to pata nahi..lekin lagta hai iski bato se mera sardard aur bar jayega..
appne kuch kaha..??
n..nn nahi bilkul nahi...he made a innocent face
accha maan main soch rahi thi ki ap mere saath khelenge??
KYA???
ha wo apka sar dard kar raha hai aur main bore ho rahi hu..to hum tel malish ka game khel rahe hai..jisme main dukandar aur app mere pass customer bankar CHAMPI ke liye ayenge..

GEET CHAMPI CENTER
main mana karunga to sunogi kya??
nahi..she said smiling..
maan sighed..chalo..
she again started her song..
sar Jo Tera Chakraaye, Ya Dil Dooba Jaaye
Aaja Pyaare Paas Hamaare, Kaahe Ghabraaye.. Kaahe Ghabraaye
tel Mera Hai Muski, Ganj Rahe Na Khuski
Jis Ke Sar Par Haath Phira Doon Chamke Kismat Uski
Sun Sun Sun, Are Beta Sun, Is Champi Mein Bade Bade Gun
Laakh Dukhon Ki Ek Dava Hai Kyoon Na Aazmaaye
Kaahe Ghabraaye, Kaahe Ghabraaye
Sar Jo Tera Chakraaye..
pyar Ka Hove Jhagda, Ya Business Ka Ho Ragda
Sab Lafdon Ka Bojh Hate Jab Pade Haath Ik Tagda
Sun Sun Sun, Are Babu Sun, Is Champi Mein Bade Bade Gun
Laakh Dukhon Ki Ek Dava Hai Kyoon Na Aazmaaye
Kaahe Ghabraaye, Kaahe Ghabraaye
Sar Jo Tera Chakraaye..
naukar Ho Ya Maalik, Leader Ho Ya Public
Apne Aage Sabhi Jhuke Hain, Kya Raja Kya Sainik
Sun Sun Sun, Are Babu Sun, Is Champi Mein Bade Bade Gun
Sun Sun Sun, Are Raja Sun, Is Champi Mein Bade Bade Gun
Laakh Dukhon Ki Ek Dava Hai Kyoon Na Aazmaaye
Kaahe Ghabraaye, Kaahe Ghabraaye
Sar Jo Tera Chakraaye..
precap- same
Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
i really really loved it...
hw can any human being can do dis to other...whn maan will become well...plz god plz make him well soon...
its amazing...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan saw her dancing singing love it maan teasing geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Damn lol
Geet is so funny haha
Poor maan tau Gaya
Cont soon dear :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣
I guess you can probably imagine my state!
rolfing dear! oh gosh, Geet is a very jolly type person which I like very much and Maan, he too was funny thinking Geet went mad but noticed the headset! And teasing her! I was laughing off my head especially at the tandav dancing!!! and dusting the house! lovely update dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
part
2 hmm so maaneet meeting not bad llolzzz
first meeting and clean bold thats impressive maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
part3
gosh i hate that meena aunty she is doing something yaar evil women
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Posted: 13 years ago
han devil family yaar rahul idiot and sam and her mom lossers

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