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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethia

congrats on new thread


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Originally posted by: t_areeb

good to see geet enjoying with friends


thnxx dear...

thnx 😛 hey can i know ur name.. ?? i get confused wid ur name ..


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Originally posted by: dumas

congrats on the new thread awesome update that was so cute thanks for the pm



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Part 93



geet blushed as she gently mumbled , " me kehna chahti thi ke..."

" ke..." maa insisted..

" wo...me...kehna chahti thi...maan...TE AMO..." wid dat she cut d call as she made a run,feeling d blsuh creeping over her cheeks...

maan smiled as he heard her words b4 she cut of call.Gently hitting d cell forehead, he whispered , " TE AMO...GEET..."

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day couldn't be more boring as he heartly waited for d evening to take over so dat he could just run for her like a teenager n crush her in his arms, satisfying his restless heart beats. he never knew d people who usually scares him, could tease him ever..no wonder it was all planned by dadi maa...dats wat he experinced wen he was back home from office...

" arre dadi maa, aaj bhai bhabhi ke ghar ka rasta to nahi bhul gaye.." asked annie in her most teasing voice, sitting on d sofa along wid dadi, she completely ignored d confused maan b4 her...

dadi maa sumwhow supressed her laugh as she replied , " pata nahi beta...aaj shayad galati se humari bhi yaad aa gayi ho "

maan rolled his eyes at deir antics n d audiocity to tease him right in front of him wid his angry eyes..

" bechari humari bhabhi ne yaad dilaya hoga ke...suniye..aap ke ghar me bhi dadi dev aur annie hai...unhe bhi apna chehra dikha dijiye... " smirked dev as he placed himself near annie on sofa n instanly made baby face at dadi,noticing d fake anger flickering in maan's eyes

dadi continued , " ek humari bahu hai..jinhe humari etni chinta hai ke hume phone karke humara haal-chal puchh rahi thi aaj , aur ek humare pote hai jinke paas to humare liye waqt hi nahi..."

" geet ne phone kiya tha .. " asked maan n d next moment bite his lip for asking so, knowing dat vil simply increase d rage of tease...

annie chukled , " kya baat hai bhai...bhabhi ka naam sunte hi ..." n she trailed as d giggle followed..

maan gave up , " im paas.." n made his way towrds his room leaving d family in to d giggles...

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" so Mr.MAAN SINGH KHURANA...aapki shehzadi ne aapka wait kar rahi hogi...jaise ke aapne unse promise kiya tha ke aap unhe batayenge aap dono ke pyar ki kahani..taki wo aage jakar apne dosto ko bata sake..." informed maan himself ,checking himself out in mirror wid a cute smile..which vanished d next moment as he confused wat exactly to tell her...he is no way a poet who could easily put his feeling into words..no way he is sum great writter who vil write an article on deir lovestory...wat he suppose to do...god he had promised her thoughtlessly dat he vil answer her but now exactly wat he suppose to do...maan singh khurana n playing wid words..dat doesn't go together...

he instantly took out a pen and a notepad as he dashed towrds d studytable.writing never seemed dis difficult b4,sighed maan.

" love...love is a deal for ever between two heart..." wrote maan satisfied wid his words..wat d hell..im talking about love, so deal word doesn't suit and d next moment he tore d paper,crushing n throwing it away,concentrating on new one

think maan think,yun toh etni bakbak karta hai...aur ab jab kuchh likhne ki bari aayi..u r such a thoutless...godd...im feeling like i never learned a single word in school...y cnt i find a single proper word...try maan try...or geet with absolute ease vil eat u alive...

" dey say, dnt fall in LOVE but rise in it..." , he once again tore d paper frustarted thinking dat sounded way to typical n filmy...

as d time paased..a bunch of crushed paper filled his room n he was so ignorant to realize dadi maa n annie were standing by d door staring at him amused...

" just wat on d earth is he doing..." voiced annie amused of her brother's weird behaviour..

dadi maa stumbled dramatically , " kya ye LOVELETTER likh raha hai..."

" WATTT..." dat was all annie could utter in disbelief, maan singh khurana n loveletter, dadi maa got to be kidding,she thought.

maan stopped as he heard d word wat at his back n was starled to see annie n dadi standing right behind him wid deir so-called teasing looks.maan rolled his eyes n made a serious baby face at dadi pleading not to try tease now wen he is already in problem.dadi maa shook her head and asked annie to leave, n annie agreed unwillingly.

dadi maa rolled her eyes as she sat beside him n questioned, " aap batayenge aap kay karne ke koshish kar rahe hai..humne aapko kuchh likhte waqt etna confuse nahi dekha..."

maan showed his latest written 1..

" Love is love, love it wid ur heart n deal it wid ur life.."

dat was it n maan pouted as he heard dadi laughing.

" dadi maa...i need help..SERIOUSLY"

dadi shook her head as she took d pen n paper from his hand n threw it randomly on d table nearby.maan watched patiently,n saw dadi taking his hand into hers as she looked at him wid her understanding looks.

dadi maa uttered as she read his eyes, " maan..pyar koi competition nahi hai..jitna achha likhoge utna achha...pyar bas pyar hai..uske liye aise practice ki koi jarurat nahi hoti...jisse tum pyar karte ho..us insaan ke samne aate hi..jo tumhare dil me aaye..bas keh do.." maan tried to understand d depth of dadi words but still needed a demo..

dadi maa smiled, " ab dekho..jab hum kisi insan se bahot din baad milte hai..to hum usse kya kehte hai..I MISSED U...hum yahi pehle kyu kehte hai..kyunki jab hum us insaan se bahot din baad milte hai..to usse dekhkar yahi pehla khayal humare man me aata hai..aur hum usse shabdo me bayan kar dete hai...ab samajhe.."

maan expression turned to understanding as he nodded his head wid a face of relaxation...

" agar tumhe geet se kuchh kehna hai..to bas uski ankhon me dekho..uske chehre ko padho..usse mehssos karo..aur jo tumhe kehna hai..wo tum apne aap samajh jaoge..." concluded dadi, showing d experience of her life...

how simple yet amazing it is..she said wat she hav experienced..just 1 look at maan and she understand wat bothered him...dis is d way we understand people..when eyes speak more dan words...wen dere is no need of words to understand eachother, den we conclude it to be long-last.like a mother who look at her chidren and knew wats wid him.like a husband who understand her wife wid d single diffarace in her touch wen she hugs him.like a frnd who sits by ur side for hrs without a question coz he knew u needed him and his silent support..dis is how d relationship blossoms...

maan couldn't speak a word as alwz once again dadi had left speechless..how simply she understand things.he seriously wondered wat wud hav happened to him if dadi wud not hav been dere in his life.

he just nodded wid a small peck on dadi forehad n left..

dadi maa simply shook her head at her sweet grandson...SWEET..she wonder how angry he vil be if any1 called him sweet...

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Part 94



he just nodded wid a small peck on dadi forehad n left..

dadi maa simply shook her head at her sweet grandson...SWEET..she wonder how angry he vil be if any1 called him sweet...

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" ab aaye ho tum.." exclaimed rano as she opened d door n found maan.maan simply smiled n hugged her gently..

rano hugged him back as she chided, " is ladki ne pichhle 1 ghante se mera dimag kharab kar diya...maan abhi tak nahi aaye..maan abhi tak nahi...ek hi baat baar baar..aur fir muh fulakar kamre me baith gayi..."

maan rolled his eyes at his stubborn sweetheart while listened to maa patiently..rano smiled at his calm nature.his anger on d wedding day had left her scared as she knew how childish geet.for a second she had been worried about her daughter wen his anger is corncerned..but his love for geet had meaningly left her speechless.

" maa..me usse mana lunga...aap pareshan mat ho" assured maan as he instantly made his way upstairs.

d door wasn't locked dat was a relief.maan opened door without making any noise and got in only to find his cutest angel sleeping on d bed on stomach and her up in d air as she was continuously blabbering sumthing..he had never seen her getting angry on him and he wondered how good it vil feel if she vil scold him wid her fake pout for stuff nothing. he moved litle closer n listened wid surprised expressions.

" dekh rahe hai babaji aap...etni der ho gayi..par abhi tak nahi aaye...abhi ye haal hai...to shadi ke baad to wo mujhe bhav bhi nahi denge.."

her commenting about deir wedding life made him look at her in amuse..god he was dying to see her facial expressions but he couldn't do dat..he just stood rooted on his place n enjoyed her sulkings..

" jaan me sham ka milne aaunga..." geet mocked his voice making him wide his eyes n she continued unaware of it, " aur abhi tak inki shaam nahi huyi..me keh rahi hun babaji...agar ye 15 min me nahi aaye na..toh toh...toh haan..me unse 30 min baat hi nahi karungi..." maan smirked at her time limit knowing she cnt keep up to it.geet continued wid sum thoughts, " ok..30 min thode jyada ho gaye na...umm..15 min thk hai..ok me na 15 min unse baat nahi karungi..wo manayenge to bhi nahi manungi.." maan giggled d way she reduced d time limit. geet frowned, "babaji..aap has kyu rahe hai..me sach me naraz hun..."

geet felt sudden weightt on her back as maan practically dropped himself on top of her back,inviting a surprising gasp from her

" maan aap kab aaye..."

maan adjusted himself over her n rested his head on her hairs as his hands went into hers n deir hands glued in each other

" jab tum babaji se meri complains kar rahi thi.."

geet blushed slightly at d feel on his entire body resting on hers but she decided to ignore it for a min n frowned, " me koi complain nahi kar rahi thi...sach bol rahi thi...Mr.KHURANA U R LATE.."

maan's fingers gently carrased her fingers as he mumbled sweetly, "sorry baby.."

ohh god,how can any1 on d earth be so cute,or rather say so smart.he alwz knowz how to vanish her anger.now aftr dose cute words how m i to stay angry wid him.dis is not fair.geet made baby face.dis is so not fair babaji.

" aap humesha aise hi karte hai ?.." geet mumbled trying to bring her anger back

maan rolled over her n thupped right beside her as he giggled, "tum kabhi mujhse naraz nahi ho sakti..tumhe pata hai na.."

geet rolled her eyes,giving up n moved closer,resting her head on his arm as she adjusted herself into his embrace..

maan adjusted her wid same possessiveness as he grabbed her into his strong body, longing to feel every inch of her..

" agar me kabhi sach me gussa ho gayi..toh aap kya karenge.."

" agar tum sach me gussa ho gayi" maan moved closer to her ear n continued huskily, " toh..me..yun tumhare kareeb aake.." nibbling her earlobe, tickling her as he continued, "yun tumhe satake.." he kissed earlobe possessively as he finished d sentence, " fir tumhe pyar karunga...aur tum maan jaogi..mujhe pata hai.."

geet was long lost to even hear wat he said n mumbled, " maan mat kijiyena..aise.."

maan was about to continue but d knock on d door startled dem both as dey instantly got up from deir odd position..

" jiju..aap roz di se hi milenge ke kabhi sali ki taraf bhi dekhenge.." asked rajji cheekily as she made her way in..

maan smiled but geet looked at her annoyed..

" tu yahan kya kar rahi hai...tujhe padhai nahi karni.." asked geet annoyed at rajji for disturbing deir moment..

maan shook his head n replied, "geet kya kar rahi ho...meri saali se aise baat mat karo.."

geet rolled her eyes while rajji got excited, "thnqq jiju.." wid dat she thupped on d bed..

" btw jiju..me abhi se bol rahi hun..fir mat kehna mene warn nahi kiya.." smirked rajji only to get glares from geet and she continued, " aap ko insaan se nahi..shaitan se pyar huva hai..to zara sambhalke rehna..."

maan giggled while geet's eyes widened as she stared at rajji.ready to eat, " u r so gone..u know dat " threatened geet as she got from bed aftr rajji..rajji showed her tongue n ran from deir d very moment...

geet shook her head and sat on bed deside maan.., " maan me aapko bata rahi hun..shaitan me nahi..shaitan ye hai...aap isse dur hi rehna..warna ye aapko pagal kar degi..."

maan pulled her closer as geet wilingly sat on his lap wid a bright smile,n maan confessed, "i missed u jaan..."

geet pouted her lips cutely, " awehi miss u bolte hai..me apko call kar rahi thi..par aapka phone bhi nahi lag raha tha..."

"me ab aa gaya hun na tumhare paas..wo sab chhodo..aur batao..tumhara din kaisa tha.." maan's question reminded geet of maan's promise n she questioned quickly,encircling her arms around his neck, "din se yaad aaya...aap mujhe kuchh batane wale the...wo story ke bare me..chaliye batayiye..."

maan smiled and d next moment geet found herself tangled in his arms,as maan took her to d balcony.maan made her stand on her feet,he hugged her from back as both looked further..dey watched d reddish color shade spread along d sky line,reminding dem d sun had long dipped.d cold fresh air passed through dem and dem cuddled more into each other like deir bodies just needed a reason to do so..geet closed her eyes as she moved her head litle back, resting into d crook of his neck while maan watched her pure n seren face so close to his for limitless time..

n unknown to himself d words slipped from his lips...

"When i fall in LOVE ,
i want to be wid HER alwayz..."

maan watched how her eyes crinkled at d corners and a gentle curve got created over her lips and he knew..she was smiling...a feel of satisfaction ran through his body wid dat smile..

"in happiness ,
to smile wid her and to be d one to hug her near..."

geet took a deep breath,filling her lungs by his scent, though she didn't open her eyes..maan slipped his 1 hand around her neck possessively like he would want o let go of her even in his worst dream and his arm aroun her acted like a dupatta for her..

"in sadness ,
to cry wid her and be d one to wipe her tears..."

maan bent his head a litle closer as his stuble brushed her jaw line...heat passed through her heart as she felt his possessive touch..his calm warmth..his loving closeness..over her body..

"When i fall in LOVE ,
i want to spend my every walking n sleeping moment wid her...
and catch each moment in its iternaly lovely form..."

geet raised her hands as dey automatically went backwords to snake his neck while her body sticked his. as a reaction, his hands went around her tummy sensuously like she felt a cotton of silk teasing her skin...and a pure memorable moment was created..

"When i fall in LOVE ,
i miss her d every moment i say BYE...
and my heart yearns for d every moment i say HELLO..."

maan placed a layer of sensuous n wet kisses on d smooth inner skin of her arms which were snaked around his neck..she nuzled into him feeling tickled of his lips around her delicate skin..

"When i fall in LOVE ,
all my old HURTS N PAIN seem lost n daded away...
and feel STRONG N BRAVE once again..."

geet turned into his embrace..resting her head on his pure heart, she waited for d heart to beat her name loudly..smiling, maan gave into her as he pekced her forehead endlessly..while his hands carrased her skin assuring her wid his faithfull touch..

"When i fall in LOVE ,
i want her to be happy alwayz , ever...
and feel like d HAPPIEST person of dem all..."

she blushed gently as she smiled into d crook of his neck and her lips rubbed his nape...maan let out a breath of contentment and his fingers carrased d scap of her smooth curls...

"Bcoz ,
dat's wat i feel...
wen every moment of my life
falls in LOVE...
with U ...!!!!!! "

maan gently grabbed her hairs as he pulled her litle out to face her.geet gently opened her eyes only to find blissfull eyes of maan filled wid imense love for her,upto d extent dat made her shiver..
as maan let out dose meaningfull last words,his eyes spoke d honesty in dose words as his eyes dripped into hers..

geet waited for maan's next move but it only surprised her like anything as he fished his pocket n took out dat same diamond ring he had gifted her on d wedding day...

her eyes filled wid tears of happiness having d ring back in front of her eyes.maan smiled as he rubbed his thumb over her cheek n wiped d tears.he commanded her not to cry and she nodded like listening to him is d most importnt truth for her...

geet's heart filled wid love as maan gently inserted d RING in her ring finger and kissed her finger for atleast million times wid his eyes closed and his lips lost in her finger..

she knew..his each n every kiss over her finger gave a promise to her...
promise dat he vil never let anything happen to her again..
promise dan he vil never let any tear reach her eyes...
promise dat he vil fill her life wid all d happiness of d world...
promise to kill every bad eyes dat vil dare to look at her
promise to look aftr her for till his last breath and even aftr dat..
promise to love her more dan anything possible..
every single promise dat exist in d world of maan singh khurana...

she smiled as she inserted her free hand into his hairs and carrased dem gently, bringing him back to his senses...opening his eyes gently, maan smiled, parting her fingers from his lips, he stared at her fingers for a while and den finaly looking at her beautifull hazels dat were longing for his single look..

"i need to kiss u madly..."

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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awesome..😊
wow ...
Edited by mannu1988 - 13 years ago
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thnqq mannu

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Love it...a lot...Just osame...My w
ord is always small to prise LBL...this beyond any limit...dear...Its always make me feel Happy...Gove imense pleasure to read it...I love this LBL...in my limits...so thanks a lot...for 2 part...ak sath...daene k liye...Love you...Mishhh
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Originally posted by: Mayamaan

Love it...a lot...Just osame...My w

ord is always small to prise LBL...this beyond any limit...dear...Its always make me feel Happy...Gove imense pleasure to read it...I love this LBL...in my limits...so thanks a lot...for 2 part...ak sath...daene k liye...Love you...Mishhh
hhh




thnqqq umme


thnx so so so so much...

ur comment alwz put a smile on m face...

love u sweets


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Wow!!!!!
Just gr8 dear!!cant resist ma self 2 read again and again!!
Awsome!!!!!!
Just eagerly...desperatly waitin 4 da next update on FB!!!

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