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Posted: 13 years ago
Did you folks check him out first? 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you for the update , remind me of the this song- I would do anything for love but I won't do that - men can't stand rejection
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 18: Awesome! Maan going to Geet's place and their spending time together, getting to know each other... loved it.

Part 19: Abhinav's a changed man now... after she is no longer a part of his life. Seems he has fallen for her and with their families trying to get them back together, it will be interesting to see what awaits the three of them.

Do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

You can't make us sympathise with Abhinav...that my Lady, is just not fair 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
And here I thought we all have a thing for love sick puppies...😆

By god, did you have a look at him? I can't seem to tear my eyes off him. But that's just me I guess.
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey you've written another SS... i'm quite late i suppose on finding it..
You have started in during Christmas time.. & i'm gonna read it now post Valentine's... 😆😆
I've just read the 1st part & it does seem to be an interesting concept as all your works do... I see I'm still 18 parts behind... never mind will read them & comment about them...in few days..
I really like the way you bring in the curiosity factor about all your characters each 1 different from the other...
Anyways off to read some parts for now...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -nirvana-



If I can bypass all that excessive hair then maybe I can check him out...😆


R for love, for everything and anything, if not for nothing! :)



You gotta be kidding me Aarya...😆He has a stubble in some pics and beard in others for God sakes...
Let's not even start with the amount of waxing Mr. Maan goes through for a month...😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 20: The goodness of Gossip

She willed her ears to unhear those words; the realization wreaking havoc inside here.

"I'm talking about Maan...Who else?" The timelessly aging Daadi she'd just met a few minutes ago assured.

Of course, she didn't want to believe in coincidences that one moment. It seemed that they had lived within two blocks of each other for all this time without being aware of the other's existence only to begin running into each other - or their families - in every turn of the street corner after their train trip.

The women sitting around the sectional were engaged in a manner of speedy chitter chatter - that she would later concede could have put a racy auction to shame.

"Oh! I'm sure he can talk himself out of going to Amsterdam" Sweety anuty chimed, "After all he is the regional head here - they won't be able to find a replacement soon"

Good god! She still didn't know to which company he was the regional head of and she found herself wincing and walking away towards the table that was overflowing with food.

"It's not that easy" She heard Daadi add, her tone sounding all the more wistful ever since she'd begun talking about her 'only adorable pota' who was garnering too much attention from the aunties for all the wrong reasons she could think of.

"You know the whole Sam disaster ladies...and not that you need reminding of that. But what he'd forgotten was the request he'd put in those initial months to move to Europe. Now they have worked everything out for his move. But he doesn't seem to be interested. I can't imagine why though?" Daadi sighed aloud when she turned back to join them in the living room, "He was talking about wanting to get away from that empty apartment only a week ago"

Right about then, she felt an involuntary release come over her, sensing the tight grips of something - an unforeseen ire perhaps - being eased off her chest from the time she'd first come to hear of his possible leaving to Europe. Oddly, she was grateful that he didn't have to deliver his situation himself. Despite wanting to believe she'd never expected anything of him, another voice told her that it would have been the end of all that easy repose they had impelled into what they were starting to share. That elementary awkwardness was almost fading, beginning to slip through the seams of the pressing kisses, which filled all of their time together.

"So...you should ask him not to go..." It was Sweety aunty again and she couldn't help the smile that was tugging at her lips.

"Keep him here...we don't have another man who can indulge us in our small talks the way Maan does" Rashmi aunty offered, painting pained look on her face.

"You should let him go Savitri...He still has a long way to go and explore...Let him see the world for me" Geet found herself wrinkling her nose lightly, quite disconcerted at the statement made by another older woman in a wheelchair.

"Tell him yourself...He must be coming to pick me up in another hour or so..." And her heart dropped to her stomach having her choke on the spoonful of dal she'd just taken in. Over three women came running to her, one offering to slap on her head as she pictured stealing looks at him while he would be here. Her eyes filled from the incessant coughing fit and a nervous jitter traveled down the length of her body almost causing her to drop the paper plate she held then.

If that hadn't been enough to knock all control she held over herself, she thought she was going to faint the next moment her eyes shifted to the door. Another racing of her heart filled her ears as she saw her Ritu aunty step into the living room.

Please god! She prayed involuntarily as her eyes widened ever so slightly at the hint of surprise that was ripping through her mind.

Let it not be him, she urged to the gods as she saw the long silhouette of a shadow on the hallway wall...anyone but him.

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your full of surprises 2 updates what more can us readers ask from you.

Please let it be Mann - chapter 19 - lol typical old ladies wanting more, mind you so do I 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Who do you think does that silhouette belongs to? 😛
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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