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Posted: 13 years ago
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nicee update dear!!!:)
i luv ur concept!!:)
update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4:




Swayam and Kria knew that Rey would not talk to her easily, and they would have to do something that will make him come to her, so that she could talk to him.




When Rey and Vicky arrived at the place mentioned by Swayam, they were shocked at what they saw, rather he was shocked as he was all alone. Vicky was gone. And when he turned back to go out, the door closed. This made him surprised and then the realization.




Outside:




"Mmm" Vicky tried to speak.




"What is it yaar? Speak clearly" he said frustrated.




Vicky indicated his hand towards his mouth where he was holding him.




As soon as he let go of his mouth, Vicky started, "What is it Swayam? Were you trying to kidnap me? No, please don't do that. Otherwise what will happen to my babu. She can't live without me and even I can't live without seeing her in front of me," he said with a dreamy tone.




Swayam just hit his head with his hand. When he was about to reply to Vicky, he again started to speak, "And where is Kria? I thought we were here to look for her. And then why did you lock Rey there?"




Swayam has had enough of this, he calmly replied, "Vicky, Vicky, just relax, first hear me out."




Vicky nodded his head indicating him to continue.



Inside:




As he realized what it was, he decided not to turn and stood there, near the door, looking for a way to go out, yet he couldn't bring himself to knock and let people know he was in there. Maybe he did want to stay there and talk to her, ask her why is she doing this, why she is leaving him, he wanted to ask so many questions, yet words were not coming from his mouth.




"Rey" she said in her soft voice.




He rested his head on the door and took a deep breath. Her voice was enough to make his heart miss a beat.




Outside:




"Actually Vicky, I found Kria." Swayam said.




"Oh, that is good. Then what are you doing here? You should be spending time with her" he said with a wink.




Swayam was thinking what is wrong with him and why the he** is he winking at him. He shook his head and said, "I will, but first they need to sort some things."




"They? You mean Rey and Kria," he asked bewildered and said to himself, "but why would he lock the one he loves with Rey?"




"Yes, Rey and Kria. Actually there is some misunderstanding and they need to clear it out."




"Okay," he said still not believing that he locked them alone, and thought, "I would never think of locking my babu with anyone. No way."




Swayam broke his chain of thoughts ans spoke, "Come on, lets go now."




"But how will they come out?" Vicky asked.




"Don't worry. They will come out. I have taken care of it. And one more thing, don't tell anyone about this, otherwise you know..." Swayam said.




Vicky did not let him finish and said, "Don't worry I know." He then thought to himself, "Of course, who would want this kind of rumor for their gf." smiling to himself.




Swayam looked at him smiling, but he let it go and took him away from there as his work was done.




Inside:




"Aap kuch bolenge nahi" Kria asked, her voice low.




"Is there anything to ask Kria?" Rey asked smiling, still noot looking at her. "I think I know enough."




"Rey, please, once look at me. Please once..." she said in a pleading voice.




He could not deny her. He let out a breath and turned around slowly.




As he turned around, he saw her smiling face, but with a pain in her eyes. And when he looked at her fully, he saw her dressed in the same attire, the same dress that she wore when he first met her at the masquerade dance.




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thanks for all the likes and comments...
u all are the best...
again sorry for the short part...but i had typed full n as soon as i pressed to post...my net ditched me...n i lost it all...😭
but since i said i will post the next part on monday...i typed and this is the best i could do...
hope you like it...
n dont worry...i will finish it tomorrow...with a large update...
wishing u all a HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY...

love
Jyoti
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Nice update yaar.Short thi but cute thi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: nebu

Nice update yaar.Short thi but cute thi.


thank u...
i know it was short...but i couldnt help it.....
hope i will be able to write long last part...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
awww its a short but sweeet one...n hehehehe vicky will never change...thnxxx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
awesome...loved it very much
viyam conversation was superb and vicky still not over with kriyam track🤣
please pm me for the next update please
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part
Edited by luv_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: lovely7010

awww its a short but sweeet one...n hehehehe vicky will never change...thnxxx for the pm


thank u...
vicky is vicky after all...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome...loved it very much

viyam conversation was superb and vicky still not over with kriyam track🤣
please pm me for the next update please
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part


thank u...
i wanted to write something light b4 the emotional part...n i love the way they think abt kriyam...🤣...they need to get over it...
will PM u...n next part or the last part will be up tomorrow...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
aweosme ss Jyoti...🤗 plzzz continue nd pm me plzz😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
I Love Vicky 🤣
Cute Update 😊

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