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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updt mehak
loved mayur's progress in their friendship & their unexpected kiss
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok.. I so want to read the next part to know his feelings n to see his expressions.. (Ok read his expressions)...
Mehku.. OMG... it was amazingly brilliant.. shedding all their inhibitions and breaking all the walls... they listened to their hearts.. Beautiful Mehku 😊 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow,dis s a wonderful update..
In d begining liked d way nupur was getting restless to meet mayank, den their lovely n cute interaction inspite f d confusing emotion in their heart n mind..
D most unexpectd part was their KISS in d end of d update..
Hope dat mayank doesnt develop any guilt for kissing nupur back..
(d 12 chapter hs been writen very beautifuly.i just loved d way nupur tried to reduce mayank's sadness n sorrow through her heart meltng words..couldnt coment abt dat update before.i just loved dat chapter)
Thanx fr d pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
o re piya haaye - 3
udne laga kyon man baawla re, aaya kahaan se yeh hosla re
o re piya haaye - 2

taanaabaana taanaabaana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawaa
boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahaan haaye
sagish mein shaamil saara jahaan hai
har zarrein zarrein ki yeh iltiza hai
o re piya, (o re piya haaye - 2), o re piya

nazrein bolein duniya tolein, dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan
ishq maange, ishq chaahe koi toofaan haaye
chalna aahiste ishq naya hai, pehla yeh vaada humne kiya hai
o re piya haaye - 2, o re piya
piyaaa... yeh piyaaa...

nange pairo pe angaaro chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi
lagta hai ke gairo mein palti rahi haaye
le chal wahaan jo mulk tera hai, jaahil zamana dushman mera hai haaye
o re piya haaye...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u all for accepting the twist we had put in, and now i hope my update matches up to mehaku's extra ordinary writing!! 😳

Chapter # 15

She heard somewhere that a kiss is the most beautiful expression of love, because it is a silent gesture of love.

The heat emitting from her cheeks and his fingers gently gripping her hair, as an attempt to prolong the kiss made her greedy in front of every inhibition in her heart. She also raised her hand to his collar, and just when her nails scraped his neck, Mayank Sharma was jolted back to reality. He jerked his hand away from her hair and moved away with a sharp intake of breath, observing Nupur in a state of daze.

Their heavy breaths in synchronization and eyes fusing with each other with that feeling of being detached from something life dependent was enough for both of them to realize that they had actually moved past the line which minutely distinguished them as strangers.

For Nupur, this advancement was as beautiful and soothing as a butterfly sucking nectar from the most desirable flower of the earth, but for Mayank, this advancement was like the advancement of moon between the sun and earth, to cause a solar eclipse.

The overwhelmed butterfly lowered her eyes after the heavenly blissful contact with her desirable flower, whereas the guilty moon was still staring at the sun, which he was scared he had diilluminated.

Nupur was clenching her fists with uncontrolled blush and the slight shiver which suddenly started due to his constant intense gaze, whereas Mayank was still staring for any clue that what he was fearing was a part of his dream or imagination, but the growing pink blotches on nupur's cheeks made it clear that what happened was in reality and senses, and then Mayank was shocked, shocked because what happened was irreversible, unchangeable, and most of all un ignorable, and the way nupur's lips were trembling and curling up in a smile made him realize her feelings were quite opposite to his own, and this increased guilt. He had no right to do all this with such an innocent princess. He had to amend, although heart issued a warning that he would fail, but mind wanted to try.

"Nupur", he leaned in, and Nupur closed her eyes, completely frozen on her place, his voice was husky and his breath still displaced, "look at me", he added

His command worked as compulsion and slowly raising her head, she felt his hot breath again on her already warm cheeks.

"Look at me Nupur", he said again, this time the voice was laced with softness, and she took a deep breath, she felt the burden of world on her eyes lashes, in spite of all the efforts she could not make to look in those deep passionate eyes again.

Mayank felt as if he was reading every emotion evolving in her lowered eyes, and this made him more guilty, taking a deep breath himself, he placed his palm over her rosy white, cotton like cheek and slightly gripped her flesh, "meri taraf dekho Nupur", he whispered and after blinking them once, Nupur raised her eyes, inviting him to look in them, as deeply as he could.

Mayank felt every innocent desire of her heart pointing direction towards his heart, and no matter how much he wanted to surrender, he couldn't, "I am sorry Nupur",

Suddenly the twinkle in her eyes faded and amazement took its place, "listen to me Nupur, very carefully", he was staring in her eyes, "whatever happened was

"beautiful", she added stiffly. If he was reading her eyes then she also did the same.

"whatever happened was beautiful", she repeated and Mayank moved more close, "whatever happened was a mistake, and I want you to understand this very clearly, it was a mistake!"

"I am sorry I can't", she said honestly, "I do understand everything you explain me, but not this"

"and trust me this is more important from any of the things I explain you, you need to forget this moment, whatever happened was just a mistake, my mistake, I had no right to make such an advancement, I am ready for any punishment you announce except for any dreams you want to weave, just forget it nupur".

"can you forget it?", she asked helplessly and mayank fumbled a bit but then gained grip, "my forgetting is not important, YOU need to forget it"

"how can YOU decide everything?, you decided it was a mistake and now you are deciding that whose forgetting is important"?, she asked stiffly and mayank cupped her face, "try to understand, you are an innocent girl Nupur, your dreams can take their flight from any gesture of affection, and what we did was a powerful expression of belonging, we did kiss, but it was a mistake and ..

And before he could further present those weak arguments of his heart, Nupur placed her lips again and kissed for a moment, leaving Mayank in a daze this time, "it was not a mistake", she kissed again and the softly pulled back in a moment, "it was the most beautiful moment of my life", she whispered and looked up in his eyes , smiled a bit, and ran away from the drawing room, leaving Mayank with no option but to close his eyes and accept that indeed there was no way back now.

Chapter # 16 - Page 53 - mulan.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is sooo very beautifull
luvedd it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful story girls! love it sooo much!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice answer by nupur.
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
A very beautiful update..d way u compared nupur's feeling as a butterfly sucking nector frm flower n mayank's feeling as a moon causing solar eclipse s just so poetic..
Loved d update..
Thanx fr d pm.
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update
well portrayed emotions of both Mayur n i loved it
continue soon

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