Saathiya Love Times - Tum bin jaayoon kahaan

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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Love is when you look into someone's eyes and go all the way inside; to their soul and you both know... instantly!"

It took almost two years for a stone-hearted man to fall in love. For a person who had never put anything above his work has slowly, unknowingly put the love of his life above everything else. A person who used to forget his food and water while working today forgot work while thinking of her. Does it mean that she has become the life support system for him? Is she now the vital energy he needs to live and continue his existence? Yes I think so. Just a small reference made of his wife and he went to the dreamland thinking of her. And he didn't even realize that! He wasn't even embarrassed at what he did but just grasped the opportunity as suggested by his brother to go home and be with her as soon as possible. And with a smile, not hiding his pleasure from anyone.

He was so excited and happy when he reached home that he would see her smiling face which would free him from all the worries and tensions and relax him in a minute. He's so used to seeing her that the moment he comes home, his eyes search for her, only her...But...It is rightly said "Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation."

And when he realized that Gopi is not there...his heart plummeted! He's so used to see her smile and have the tea made by her that he just couldn't hide his disappointment at not being able to see her again. Since two days, she had been avoiding him and now he just could not take that she even left the house without informing him. She has brought out the love and fun part hidden in him and her not being there again took away all the cheer and excitement her from his voice.

He never gave her love forget respect...rather hated to even call or hear her name but today he called her name with full respect. It just reveals his inner feelings for her that now the respect and love he has for her is to stay. But when will he tell her this???? When will he tell her that he can't live without her? That his life has no meaning when she's not around!!!

"Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop."

Will he have to go through the tears as well????????? As in all love stories???Just the way Gopi has shed to finally bring him to this point! It is now be his turn to do his share of the deal. But how will he deal with it???And let his love overpower his ego??? Because the two can't stay together...so how will he fight his innerself to tell her that she is his?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliantly said shruti!!
ahem ji has fallen deeply in love but not sure if he's aware of his feeling...i jut hope he realizes it soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

Brilliantly said shruti!!

ahem ji has fallen deeply in love but not sure if he's aware of his feeling...i jut hope he realizes it soon!


Thank you Nihira😃Yeah he'll realize it very very soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much Ritika😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was Awesome Shruti and your written update too...👏
As for Ahem, the man now is in love, hook, line and sinker.

- Her name makes his heart beat faster
- Her sight or lack of it is affecting him. Ahemji is just now starting with the pangs of separation
- Not hearing her is giving him distress😳
Love it..

So something to note today

- Jigar was surprised that Ahem accepted to finish the meeting. I am sure the old Ahem would have made sure to complete the discussion be it 6'o clock or no. But this man in love wanted to get home as soon as possible.
- He is angry 😆 that she is not there and angry that she is not picking up the call.. Typical Ahem.. And that is where I want him to be.. Good the Cvs have not forgotten his basic character in this journey of love...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastically put...shruts...loved the way u put forth all his feelings and journey...one character which CVs did not forget the basics is ahem and showing him in gradual progression...slowly though..but still steady and good...love u ahemji...😳 many more intense scenes on our way...😍 angry young man in love...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome post shruti , I loved all the quotes u used . His lips curved in automatically thinking about her , and your right he wasnt embarrassed. He was quick to take the apportunity and run home to see the sight tat provides coolness to his heart but was he disappointed coz he wanted to see her and she wasnt there , or the fact tat she dint bother to inform him , or was he angry that she was with urmilla .
Munda has fallen in love 😃
Waiting to see him while gopi is unable to attend his call 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

That was Awesome Shruti and your written update too...👏
As for Ahem, the man now is in love, hook, line and sinker.

- Her name makes his heart beat faster

- Her sight or lack of it is affecting him. Ahemji is just now starting with the pangs of separation
- Not hearing her is giving him distress😳
Love it..

So something to note today

- Jigar was surprised that Ahem accepted to finish the meeting. I am sure the old Ahem would have made sure to complete the discussion be it 6'o clock or no. But this man in love wanted to get home as soon as possible.
- He is angry 😆 that she is not there and angry that she is not picking up the call.. Typical Ahem.. And that is where I want him to be.. Good the Cvs have not forgotten his basic character in this journey of love...😳

@bold yes yes 😛 la la music proves it.., the dissappointed look on his face when he is entering the room, he slowed down looking at meethi..and then asked for gopi specifically mentioning to tell her to bring his black tea..it is going to be better...he will burst his love out...and he will all be wet in his love shower...😍..so dreamy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

That was Awesome Shruti and your written update too...👏
As for Ahem, the man now is in love, hook, line and sinker.

- Her name makes his heart beat faster
- Her sight or lack of it is affecting him. Ahemji is just now starting with the pangs of separation
- Not hearing her is giving him distress😳
Love it..

So something to note today

- Jigar was surprised that Ahem accepted to finish the meeting. I am sure the old Ahem would have made sure to complete the discussion be it 6'o clock or no. But this man in love wanted to get home as soon as possible.
- He is angry 😆 that she is not there and angry that she is not picking up the call.. Typical Ahem.. And that is where I want him to be.. Good the Cvs have not forgotten his basic character in this journey of love...😳


Thank you harini so much for appreciation😃

Yeah what you said about the meeting and his character is very true and I liked it as well. I loved the two small Ahemoic scenes today😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: indu_shah

fantastically put...shruts...loved the way u put forth all his feelings and journey...one character which CVs did not forget the basics is ahem and showing him in gradual progression...slowly though..but still steady and good...love u ahemji...😳 many more intense scenes on our way...😍 angry young man in love...


Thank you so much Indu😊 it would be great to see the angry young man in love😊

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