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WAITING FOR AN UPDATE!!!

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE...

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Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Friends,
Thanks for your patience and sry for Delays. But dears its really hard for me to get out the time, still I am trying.
I will give little short updates as long updates take alot of time. Atleast giving small updates are better than no update, right.
Putting Yeh Rishtoon kee Uljhan on hold for few days. Coping with three FF is tuff at present scenario.
--Anu
Part 47
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He placed soft kiss on her fore head and with a teasing smile.

"I just wanted to warn you"

"Good'. Now take your shower and be ready for breakfast"

Maan again came closer and pulled her from waist' "I said I can't stay away from you for a minute' you expect me to go there alone"

Geet got all red with shyness; she did not know how to react'. Geet felt the old Maan is getting back though this time they both were clear it was his love.

She also knew the real Maan very well'. How harsh and rough he can be and thus he had warned her'. but he loved her and loved her madly was all she cared. She had always submitted her self to him and now knowing how much he loved her she was all again ready to submit herself to his love, in whatever way he brings it. She very well knew her Maan was different.

She just kept looking down' knowing very well how intensely he was looking at her.

"Chalo aaj chor diya'" and he left from there.

After he was back from shower they had their break fast and on the breakfast table Maan's intense look was all the while on Geet and Geet who could feel his gaze had her eyes continuously looking at her plate. But she knew there was no escape after this.

She was loving his attention and his love which were all devoted to her but she was also feeling a little scared'

Maan then got some call from office and he got busy with it and when he was done Geet was standing all ready in pretty saari in front of him'

He raised his brow'.

"Woo.. I was thinking' lets go somewhere out today' weather looks so pleasant today."

Maan knew she was trying to escape'. he pulled her close to him from her waist but his hold was not that soft'. he was rubbing her waist with his strong long fingers'. Geet shivered under his touch and closed her eyes'

"aaj bahar jane kee badee jaldi hai'. Kyun mere saath akele dar lagta hai" he whispered in her ears leaving his warm breath all over her neck.

Geet was shivering from inside' his touch' the way his fingers were playing with her waist' claiming her' she suddenly hugged him'. unable to voice what she wanted to say.

There fast heart beat matching.

His hands went on her back and his fingers started making patterns on her bare back' Geet just kept hugging him tight' he bent down to place a kiss on her bare part of her shoulder but the moments his lips touched her skin he started placing wet kisses on it and then the kiss went deep turning into nibbling and biting' Maan was not know how to get enough of her' the more he took her the more he wanted' Geet was just holding his shirt tightly at back'. his every love kiss or bite was sending shiver down her spine but it all felt like heaven.

They were in standing position and Maan was now going madly all over her' he pulled her saari down while kissing her from top her waist madly'

How would Geet say that they could atleast go on bed' Maan was all so lost in her. his hands went to her curves above her blouse and his mouth tasting her waist'. Geet tightly held his hair.

He separated himself from her to stand up and place his intense gaze on her beautiful body on bouse and skirt which were tightly holding her curves' Geet was completely embarrassed by the way he was looking at her'.

He was about to reach his hand to the blouse dori when his phone rang' It was call from dadima.

"Hello Dadima'. How are you"

"We are fine here Maan.. aaplog kaise hain wahan'"

"Everything is fine here Dadima'" he looked at Geet and smiled. Geet turned red with just that smile.

"Maan hume aapse kuch khas baat kernee hai' regarding Annie"

Maan got scared, Annie was like his child to him. He

"Annie' what happened to her'." Geet got alert hearing this too.

"Nahi aisee koi baat nahi jo aap samajh rahe hai'. Woo Annie ka rishta aaya hai'."

"What' I don't even know anything aur mere piche yeh sab'."

"No Maan, it's not like that' Rathor's hain na' Jaipur wale, unke bete Arjun ke saath hum Annie ka rishta jornachate hain"

"What dadima' how can you suddenly decide this' Main aise ek baar me yes nahi bolne wala' It's Annie's life and I will look into it in detail' Aapne bhi mujhse puchne ke jarrorat nahi samjhi"

"Maan phone kyun kiya hai humne' you know son, without your yes nothing is yes, phir naraz kyun ho rahe hain'. Darasal.. Annie aur Arjun ek dusre ko pasand kerte hain'."

"What' now what is this all this all of sudden' Annie never mentioned it to me' how can this happen'.. I will call you after a while Dadi"

Maan was really upset now' Annie had a BF and he did not knew' he felt irresponsible and now she did not tell him made him furious on Annie too and on the top of it how dare anyone try to trap his sister'. How did anyone try to put eyes on his sister' he will have to find out everything.

He called Annie who was sitting with Dadima'. The moment she saw Maan's number she got scared''

"Bhai hello' how are you"

"What's all this cooking up Annie'.. I want everything very straight and true"

"Bhai.. we know each other from 6 months.. and we did not our self know how we fell for each other'. Appse chupane ka irada nahi tha Bhai.. sacchi"

"I am really upset with you' got it' and yes, unless I find out everything you are not allowed to meet him or talk to him'. And you know if you do any' you know that right'"

"Bhai but aisa kyun" "Kyunki main bol raha hoon'"

Then Geet took phone from Maan and went aside and talked to Annie and consoled her that everything will be fine' Maan was upset that time with all of sudden news and thus he was getting strict.

She came back when Maan was still upset and angry' on himself and Annie both.

Geet came close and kept her hand on his shoulder'

"Humse behtar kaun janta hai Maan' how unpredictable love is "

Next to be continued

Precap: Geet streched between Maan and Family

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dadima ki timing bhi great hai door se he kabaab main haddi...
wonderfulupdate.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved your update dear...i am loving the direction you are taking with this
Maan has realised his love for her but now she will slowly make him come out of his dark and lonely life and make him accept all the relationships and social life...
let's see how much she is able to influence him and bring him back out from the shadows of his parent's death trully...
Anu, you need to concentrate on your health and on your kids...so take your time...we are not going anywhere so take it sow and easy
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Posted: 13 years ago
its really awesome dear...
m sooo happy ki maan n geet together...maan n his romance...m enjoying it...happy fr geet also...
loved it...
thank u very much fr dis lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
I loved it.
Dadi & annie kabab mai haddiya.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update
short update chalega
babby ko mama ka time chayie
afterall he is vey chotu

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