Kripa--reflecting her deep feelings!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey guys,

Earlier I wrote what Angad was feeling deep down, but now kripa is the one who is suffering immense pain by being humiliated by Angad everytime for loving him with her whole heart. Here goes what I think Kripa might be feeling as of now:

Kiya sirf tumse hi pyar

Aur jane kyun kiya tumne dil pe vaar

Mere jigar mein hai sirf teri surat

Sajaye mann mein teri ek sundar murat

Mehakaya tumne mera jiven ke saaz

Par kya nazar na aaya mere dil ka ehsaas

Tori tumne meri arzoo

Kya nikaal diye tumne woh lamhe jinme basi thi kitni khushboo?

Intezaar basi hai mere naino mein

Chain chupa hai tumhare saason mein

Khwab toote mere armaano bhare

Zindagi roothi mere pyar ke safar se

Tune dukhaya en dharkano ki awaz ko

Rulaya mere vishwas ke raaho ko

Thukraya mere chahat ke aangan ko

Barsaya zilat ke sawan ko

Guzar rahi hoon nafrat ke raste pe

Jaane kis mor pe milenge rahat ke lamhe

Dil mein hai bekarari ka aalam

En aankhon mein dekte hai sirf tumhare diye huye gum

Bahati hoon aasuyo ki nadiya

Lagta hai hai pal jaise sadiya

Tumne toh kaha bhi nahi ki maine aisa kya kiya

Phir bhi chamakta hai mann tumhara hi chehra

Tumse hi toh basaya maine sapno bhara aashiya

Aur tumne dikhaya khauf se bhara ek akela jaha

Dil mein kitne shikwe or shikayat

Par kya karu jab basi rag rag mein tumhari chahat

I hope you guys like it. Let me know if you guys agree with what I think.

-Love4ever!

P.S: Thanks Deepey for liking my poem and I hope you like this one as well. It was so sweet of you for liking my style---and I was thinking of your kind words that you wrote ealier! Thanks hun!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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This is really nice, u r really good
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey love(rinku),

I was waiting to read ur lovely poems. i've said it before and I'll say it again. You're a great writer. It was absolutely amazing.👏👏 Keep on posting the lovely poems. Ur da best and a really sweet person. Your writings reflect ur personality.😊

luv ya raman.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Its really nice,make me so sad 😭.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 ur sooo brill

i totally agree wid radio (deepey)!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏darlin i just luved it......
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ya me too totally agree with radio tooo.....

lovely poem....i alwys luv ur writing style...not just the poems....ur posts too are simply brillliant....👏👏👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Rinku, lovely poem yaar. Keep it up
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey rinku ur poem is too gud,aur tumharee poem to waqee kripa kay dil kee feelings ko reflect kartee hai!!!!😳brilliant work!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Great Job!!! That was awesome!!!👏👏👏

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