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Awesome update dear.. Loved it.. 😊

sorry for late comment I just read it...n its sooo wonderful...
I loved Geet's character n looking forward to how she will enlighten Maan's lonely life wid love
Update soon me waiting...!!

FREAKING BRILLIANT =D

Hi dear...
Sry fr being late and I hope u know the reason.

Nice updt dear... It was kind of a very practical update...
Like geet giving iformation about er career and Maan getting impressed... Exactly kind of arrange marriage setup... And a very formal talk...

But still I found there was kind of observation and admiration behind this formality.

Good pretty good ideals Geet's personality here.

Wow

Fabulous update

Beautiful

Maan taking interest in Geet's painting.. Good

Maan ko Geet Ke painting achach laga especially the Hope one..

Maan didnt hide anything from Geet... He is ready to become friends..

Geet started to understand him...

Liked this side of Geet..She is bubly, carefree but still matured ..

Wow di awesome part... Loved it... "Hope" what a thought di... This is a single word with deep meaning.. A word which is enough to turn one's life the other way round... Hope same happens with maan too... Waiting 4 next part di... Continue soon.. Sry 4 late cmnt di...

nice update like geet's maturity

Hi Buddies

Thanks for liking "Hope" so much. This painting has a very big role in this story so I am very glad you loved it.

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Chapter 6

Next Morning

Geet got up with a slight headache. She had spent better half of the night tossing and turning in bed trying to shut out the chocolate brown eyes from drowning her. But she could not shake the image of Maan's eyes from her head. Remaining night she had spent dreaming about the same man, just gazing at her painting and fantasizing what his face will look like while laughing.

After freshening up, she just stood at the window lost in his thoughts. She visualized the moment when he walked into her house, into her studio and maybe into her heart…into her life?

Rahul tapped her shoulder – "What are you thinking"

Geet sighed – "Is it possible to fall for someone deeply after just spending few minutes with them? Yesterday, I had no one in my thoughts and today I can not think without feeling his presence in my thoughts. Can someone leave their footprints in your life so fast?"

Rahul turned her to make her look at him – "I don't know the answers to your questions Geet. All I know is that sometime a single moment is enough to know who you want to spend your life with and sometime whole life goes by understanding if you made the right decision. In the end, do what your heart tells you. And if your heart is also confused, do what you will never regret. Ups and downs are part of life but they should be yours and not someone else's. If they are yours because you created them then it is worth living through them"

Geet smiled and went to bathroom to get ready.

Breakfast Table

Mohinder – "Mujhe to Khuranas bahut ache lage. Maan bhi bahut suljha hua hai lekin bahut serious lagta hai…nahi"

[I liked Khuranas a lot. Maan seems like a sorted person but very serious…no]

Rano –"Haan ji…bada beta hai…choti si umar mein itni zimmedari….lekin zindagi mein maturity to chahiye na. Waise bhi, abhi bechara kiske saath hase muskuraye. Koi jab zindagi mein aa jayega to muskuraana bhi aa jayega"

[Yes ji…he is the eldest son…so many responsibilities as such a young age….and in life maturity is also required. Moreover, with whom will the poor guy smile? When someone will be there in his life, he will also learn how to smile]

Mohinder – "Thik kehte ho Rano ji…waise puttar tujhe koi decision lene ki zaroorat nahi hai abhi…. kaise bhi koi pareshaani nahi hai…maine toh pehle hi keh diya tha Savitriji se"

[You are right Rano ji….darling you don't need to take any decision right away…there is no difficulty either way…I have already told Savitrji that]

Geet suddenly interrupted – "I am ready…meri taraf se haan hai"

[I am ready…it is yes from my side]

Mohinder and Rano looked at her surprisingly where as Rahul just stared at her with concern and uncertainty.

Geet let out her breath and continued – "Aap log aise mat dekho mujhe. I know it is very sudden but I really liked him. I don't know how and why but I feel this strange connection with him…I can somehow imagine my…my life with him"

[Why are you looking at me like this? I know it is very sudden but I really liked him. I don't know how and why but I feel this strange connection with him…I can somehow imagine my…my life with him]

By the end she was looking down and her cheeks were red with blush.

After the initial surprise or rather shock was over everyone beamed at the table.

A tear trickled Rano's face – "Meri laado kitni badi ho gayi hai ji"

[My princess has grown up so much]

Mohinder wiped her tear away as his own eyes filled up.

"Mummy…Papa".

All four hugged each other.

………….

Khuranas were equally happy and their happiness knew no bounds when finally Maan gave his nod of approval. Wedding was fixed in 6 weeks time and both houses got busy in doing the wedding preparation.

For Maan, it brought a sense of dj vu, and he immersed himself in work to avoid further inner turmoil. He tried hard not only to think about Geet but also about Poonam. But as much as he tried, sleep evaded him till he talked to Poonam's photograph. But he assumed and hoped this will also resolve when he will have Geet by his side.

Geet waited for Maan to call her but he did not seem to be in hurry to build any relationship with her. Initially she anticipated his calls and then longed for it. Her ego made her angry on him and her love made her yearn.

"Dusht Danav kahin ke…ek phone bhi nahi kar sakte. Hey Babaaji kahin woh unmein se toh nahi jo bas dikhte hi macho hein lekin kuch dum nahi hota…chi chi Geet, tub hi kaisi batein kar rahi hai aur woh bhi Babaji ke saath…sharam kar

Are mein waise thodayi keh rahi thi mein to taakat wale dum ki baat kar rahi thi….

Waise usmein bhi taakat lagti hai…chado mera toh dimaag hi kharaab ho gaya hai"

[He is such a devil demon…first he can't call. Oh God, I hope he not like those men, who just look macho but in reality they have no power…chi chi Geet, what are you saying and that too God…have some shame.

Come on, I didn't mean it that way….I was talking about strength type power

But, even in that you need strength no….leave it….I have gone mad]

"Waise agar unhone phone nahi kiya toh tu kar le...ab ismein itna ego kyon badha rahi hai...par unhe karna chahiye tha na…

are lekin unke paas toh mera phone number hi nahi hai aur Daadima se maangne mein sharma rahe honge…nahi…Na…Maan aur sharmana kuch jamta nahi….zaroor Daadi ma ke saamne akad dikha rahe honge"

[But if he hasn't called, then you call him. Why are you increasing your own ego…but he should have called no…

But he doesn't even have your number and he must be feeling shy in asking Daadima….no…never….Maan and shyness don't go together….must be showing off his attitude in front of daadima]

"Ab mein toh normal si painter hoon but woh toh KC ke MD hain…Khurana construction phone karke unka number le leti hoon…nahi nahi woh thik nahi hai…pata nahi unke office mein log kaise react karenge…kuch gadbad na ho jaaye…Haan Rahul se puch leti hoon…mujhe thodai akad ki problem hai"

[Now I am just a normal painter and he is after all MD of KC…..let me call up Khurana Construction and get his number…no no that won't be ok….who knows hoe people in his office will react…what if something goes wrong….hmmm let me ask Rahul….after all I don't have any attitude issues like him….right]

………..

"Number toh mil gaya….lekin main kahoongi kya…yes…I know what to say"

[Now I got the number….but what will I say…. yes…I know what to say]

Maan was sitting in a blue print review meeting when his phone went off. He frowned seeing an unknown number but then for some reason he felt compelled to pick it up.

He walked outside and picked up the phone just to hear muttering on the side before he could even say hello.

"Gadhi….Ullu ki pathi…ab unko kaise pata chalega kaun phone kar raha hai….badi aayi call karne wali…Mr Maan Singh Khurana, kyon aapka phone uthaiyenge...ek toh khud call karte nahi aur pata nahi kahan ke prince hai jo unknown number uthane ki meharbaani kar sakte nahin"

[Duffer….stupid…how the hell will he know it is your number….who are you to call him….why will Mr Maan Singh Khurana pick up your phone…firstly he doesn't call himself and God knows, he is prince of where that he will take pain to pick up an unknown number]

Maan didn't even realize when his lips twitched slightly. It was not a smile, not even a half smile just a twitch – "Agar, tumhaari khud se baatein khatam ho gayi ho toh mujhse bhi baat karlo ya phir tumne apni meethi aawaz mein galiyaan sunane ke liye call kiya hai"

[Talk to me also if you have finished talking to yourself, or you have called to just make me hear abusive words in your sweet voice]

Two things fell. Geet dropped her phone as she realized Maan has actually picked her phone and heard her ranting and on the other side Sasha dropped the files when she heard Maan talking so jokingly.

Geet immediately picked up her phone to talk and Maan went back to his hard emotionless mask

Geet – "Woh actually Maan I wasn't sure app phone uthayenge ya nahi. Yeh mera number hai. Aap store kar lijiyega."

[Actually Maan, I wasn't sure if you will pick up the phone or not. This is my number. Please store it]

Maan – "Hmmm"

Geet – "Haan woh maine is liye phone kiya tha ki kal meri paintings ki exhibition hai. Koi bahut badi baat nahi hai but if you want and if you can…toh…aap aayenge?"

[Yes, I called to let you know that tomorrow I have exhibition of my paintings. It is no big deal but if you can…will…will you come?]

Maan – "I will try but can't promise anything"

Geet – "Thik hai"

[Ok]

Maan – "Bye"

Geet – "Ya…bye"

Maan kept down the phone and rushed to the washroom. Memory of his first phone call to Poonam fresh in his mind as if it was just yesterday - his enthusiasm, his restlessness…his trip to Japan…his nervousness, everything came back crashing on him.

Geet kept down the phone and made a face imitating his voice – "I will try but can't promise anything"

"Sadu kahin ke…shaadi ho jane do phir batati hoon….janaab hawa mein toh aise udte hain jaise pata nahi sach ke prince ho…Dusht Daanav"

[He is so uptight….let me get married once, then I will tell him….he flies in the air as if he is a real prince…devil demon]

Next day Maan came to the gallery but remained aloof. He somewhere was scared of her expectations and his own inhibitions.

Geet was just happy that he came and admired her work.

After that day, Maan called her once in a while to talk to her. Though he did like to talk to her but he kept the calls short convincing himself that he was just trying to fulfill the obligation and her expectations.

Precap - Wedding