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Posted: 13 years ago
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At work Aham began to wonder, the whole seemed to be chaotic first his beloved mom told him he could not go to work becuase he was involved in family affairs, he was shocked why could he not help with the family was his life not just about work work n work, what about play when was he going to enjoy his life his world his family.
The day he spend ironing then gopi became sick all of a sudden she came upstairs n had fever he attended to her then he went down to get some medicine from his kaki who showed concerned by saying she thought gopi was not well earlier. kokila heard this n rolled her eyes, Aham went upstairs to attend to his wife which displeased kokila she was even more angry n told him to go to work she will attend to gopi vahu.
As soon as he was gone kokila went to gopi instead of seeing to her she started shouting stop this nautanki you want my son to become your gulam well i am not having it you are ruining my son how dare you? Gopi could barely move she got up she looked at kokila who was shouting away n got out of bed n went downstairs, hetal sees gopi and touches her forehead it was burning dikra why are you here? you should be resting, mota bhabi marf karna but gopi vahu has some chores to do leave her be, but kokila gopi nu then kokila cuts her off dont come between me and my dil mota bhabi i have told you many times before. Gopi continues working until evening, she cooks but is weak so hetal comes n helps her. That even when the men came from work Rashi makes the tea n serves them Aham looks round, kokila looks at him n says are you looking for anyone he shakes his head.
From that day either Gopi is busy with her work, or he is with his, he barely sees her. she goes to sleep late n wakes up early his mom comes in the morning n gives his clothes to him but he does not like what she picks outs for him. He missed her, her smell, her bringing tea to him now its as if she is avoiding him but why then he thinks back at how he shouted at her when he burnt his hand on the iron it was not her fault he was frustrated at the situation.
He calls Chirag n asks him if they could have lunch at home as he was hungry so chirag calls hetal to cook lunch for them, as kokila was away with baa at the mandir she told gopi to cook, Gopi does n then tells hetal that she has some work to do upstairs she was not going to stay whilst aham was there, she was missing him so but still she was not going to get maji naraz.
kokila comes home and asks meetha where is gopi vahu, Gopi is upstairs in her room, kokila goes up n asks gopi what she is doing? Gopi was looking out the window staring into space, kokila starts to rant that gopi should forget having a relationship with her son because he only abides her rules and would never break them ever again by listening to gopi nonsense, but what kokila did not know was Aham was behind her listening by the door, kokila tells Gopi just like she brought into this house she can also throw her out, Gopi has tears she puts her head down. Kokila also tells her that her son could never be Gopis as she can get many like her n still her aham will not be interested.
Aham looks at his mother in disgust, he says mom, kokila turns round n sees Aham standing there, n she looks at Gopi, Aham dikra you are home why, Mom why did you say all those things to Gopi? kokila looks at Aham, she is not worthy of you dikra i am your mother i know you best, worthy of me mom but your the one who told me to get married to her so how can you say shes not worthy of me, kokila just stares Aham you are making me naraz again you dont want me naraz, now Aham shouts you are not a child mother that i should have to keep you happy because things are not going your way. Gopi says to Aham Aham ji maji is saying the truth i am not worthy of you, Aham now gets angry, chup bikul chup.
parag and the family are upstairs now hearing the commotion, and they listen to everything Aham says then Aham goes over to Gopi n lifts her head you have been avoiding me why have i done something wrong why have you been avoiding me, Gopi damn it speak gopi looks at him so that maji doesnt get upset with her for speaking to him, Aham looks at his mother in disgust, kokila shouts at gopi see what you are doing my son never spoke to me in this way before its all because of you, you are trying to break my relationship with my son you are jealous of me and my sons relationship i thought i brought a diamond for a dil but now i know i brought a gold digger a mosquito, Aham looks at his mother mom shut up just shut up. Parag now intervenes kokila how could you do all of this, kokila totally ignores him, and thats when baa says kokila vahu its time you went to your mothers house i will explain to dravthi until you dont mend your ways you will not be welcomed here and that is my command.
Aham spent the whole afternoon with Gopi they talked gopi explained she did not want mother n son fighting because of her, but aham assured her it wasnt because of her that his mom has her own issues to deal with n then gopi layed her head on his shoulder n fell asleep. They woke up in time for dinner and then jigar dropped the bombshell he has been trying to get over what rashi had done to get married to him but he couldnt, he needs time he cannot forgive rashi just yet and he would like to have his own space, he looks at gopi n says bhabi i know rashi is your sister but i am not ready to accept her in my life just yet i dont want you to feel sad about this i will get rashi back in my own time not yours or rashis or your uncle aunt it will be in my own time so i have spoken to mum n dad n they both agree with me. Rashi you need to pack your bag n leave Rashi looked shocked one of the reasons jigar wanted rashi out because she never learned her lesson she was still selfish manipulative n he found out when baas friend from the states came n gave gopi the money he found that rashi was not happy for her sister but was jealous n she made a snide comment about it.
In coming weeks Aham n gopi did come together even more, they finally had their suhaag rath, that night Aham woke up n screamed mom he had a nightmare where his mother says hai krishan bhawan chi chi Aham tu na menu naraz kar thiya 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh dear😕 I screamed reading the last part...Koki poking her nose again where it does not belong😆

A very nice os and very well written. I had a good laugh. I wish the CV's would come to this forum and read the FF's and all and get better ideas of how to really write a story😡 They are writing like they themselves are teenagers..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely os , adored the last bit of da os.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Suk, This is brilliant!👏

Loved it 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks after todays episode we needed some fun
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Suk that was such an interesting OS with a hilarious twist.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love os suk loved readin it and the last part was great...

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