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Posted: 13 years ago
❤️ liked de promo...want de update fast!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the promo shopau.. eagerly waiting :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Honey, i just read the whole ff in one go and tbh i found it so interesting and sweet.

Loved the whole concept and the fact that she's always loved him, whereas he is lost... or maybe doesn't wana admit his love.

And you did a great job at introducing the characters loved it, wow Shahi and Garima – second marriage... i like the thought of second marriage honey, gives the widows another chance in life.

Btw please get rid of that creep Snakeyy Shaym! I hate him!

Hmmm is there something comin for Nk and Payal? Cus you clearly didnt mentiion Payal and Akash?

Well it would be interesting to pair her up with Nk xxx

Loved it sugar plum, please update sooon <3 and sorry i didnt really read your updates before but i was just gettin around through more than 100 pm's.

Thanks for the pm xxx


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Posted: 13 years ago

Bawari Piya Ki

Love Beyond Commitment
Part 18

As all four of them proceeded towards the bar, La excused herself to go and change. The guys went in and ordered drinks.

After a long time drinking, chatting and making fun about La's dance, Arnav continued.

Arnav: I just don't know from where La gets all these ideas.

Akaash: No bhai, don't say that. That dance was really Hot!

NK and Arnav threw out the beer out of their mouth on to the bar table not able to control their laughter and burst out into fits; NK even coughing due to the sudden reaction.

La came back wearing a green formal dress with a white waist belt and her hair tied back into a pony. That was her look which she carried 7 days a week, 365 days a year; The look of a professional hardcore criminal lawyer. She wasn't a girl who loved pink or liked dressing up like s**ts and dance in nightclubs partying with her boyfriend. She was a lady who held her head high at all times. She didn't even remember the last time she was emotional about something. She knew what she was talking about when she spoke business. And her profession was bloody serious to her. She was a classy lady yet just another tom boy at heart. Maybe that's why she was the heart of her friend circle group.( NK, Arnav, Akaash and La)

La: Hi guys, what's up? She announced her entry as she reached the three men drinking as if there was no tomorrow.

Arnav and NK turned around towards her and seeing her come back to her Lavanya Kashyap the lawyer look, made them remember the scene some time back in the pub. They both exchanged a serious look; their lips sealed together and then burst out laughing making Lavanya give an expression of extreme irritation.

La: Okay fine! It's over now. She said as she slapped her purse on to the table and sat between Akaash and Arnav, opposite NK.

Akaash: By the way if Bhabhi would have come tonight and had seen you dancing with Donny like that, I really doubt if the wedding would have been taking place anytime soon.

La: I don't think she should have any problem. I mean if a girl can't trust HIM, someone who literally preaches commitment then I really doubt she can ever be secure in her relationship.

Arnav's expressions had become a lot harder with the discussion. Only he knew how he was trying to control himself from smashing the beer mug on to the ground. DESTINY! A guy who had wanted nothing in his life else then commitment from his would be wife was getting married to a girl who was least bothered about his take on relationship and marriage. Rather she was happier laughing and having fun with his male friends then to be even bothered if her fianc would be around looking for her. He fisted his hands on to the beer mug to cool himself down. NK noticed his change of behavior.

La: And I am sure even Donny wouldn't be jealous of any of her male friends? What say Donny? She said putting out her hand towards him for a high-five.

Arnav remembered the afternoon episode when she stood next to the banyan tree in the temple laughing and giggling with NK. He gritted his teeth together and murmured: She can do whatever she wants. I don't care! He said as if she was least important to him.

La: See, I knew it!

While La thought of it to be Arnav's understanding nature towards Khushi, NK could very well figure out that there was a major problem with that statement Arnav had just made.

NK: You don't CARE or you don't MIND Donny? He said with a slight sarcastic smile on his face.

The atmosphere on the table suddenly changed as even Akaash and Lavanya could make out that there was a point in what NK was saying.

Arnav chuckled in the most sarcastic manner ever as he took a sip of his beer. La looked down towards her fingers uncomfortably.

Arnav: I ..DON'T.. CARE.🤢 He said stressing each and every word looking straight in NK's eyes. His voice was hoarse and spoke death.🤢

NK maintained his slight serious smile as Arnav looked at him as if he'll kill him any moment. La kept her gaze on her neatly manicured nails not even daring to look up at her friends.

Akaash sensing the tension tried to calm Arnav down. Akaash: Bhai'

But before he could continue saying anything else Arnav suddenly smashed his beer mug on to the ground still looking at NK. La shivered as she least expected something so aggressive coming up.

As the people in the bar looked shocked towards their table, Arnav confidently got off his chair and started to walk out. He seemed completely unaffected with the fearful eyes on him when a firm voice made him stop in his tracks.

NK: Donny? Wait. He said with utmost seriousness.

Arnav didn't turn around but made an extremely irritated and frustrated expression. NK walked towards him made him face himself.

NK: you know you've never behaved in such a way before with me. But still I am not angry at you. His voice was calm and soft.

NK: In fact I pity you. Yes Mr. Arnav Singh Raizaada, I pity you.

Arnav smirked at him to which NK responded the same way.

Arnav: Pity? I think you should first think about your own wellbeing first before interfering in other's personal matters.

La: Akaash please stop them. She whispered to him, they both standing next to the table away from Arnav and NK.

NK: You are very lucky to have her in your life Donny. Don't let trivial issues ruin your beautiful relationship. Khushi is a'

But before he could continue Arnav grabbed hold of his collar and shouted.

Arnav: Don't you even dare take her name out of your filthy mouth. STAY AWAY FROM HER!!!

Lavanya couldn't take it anymore. She rushed to the two of them and pulled Arnav away.

La: Oh stop it Donny! And for god sake come out of your misconceptions.

Arnav: La you just stay out of it.

La: No I will NOT. She shouted at her highest pitch.

La: I thought you understood Khushi and her feelings. But I was wrong. I was so wrong. You don't even have the slightest of idea of what she's all about. Do you have any idea what all has she done for you not even once thinking about herself? And here you are insulting her in front of your friends by doubting her commitment towards your wishes? She said full of disgust towards her best friend.

Arnav looked away still not believing La.

La: Look at me when I am talking to you. She said angry 😡and irritated with his behavior.

La: It was Khushi who planned this Bachelor's party for you!

***

Next: the suspense to how Khushi organised the BP😲

please hit the like button and comment

Sorry for no ArHi but I wanted to bring the Jealous and possesive Donny out😃 Hope you enjoyed. the next one will have ArHi.
Okay so now I am adopting zee's funda and will not update till you all start commenting. 😡

So see you at pg 99😊

Any how will love you all always

Shopau

Edited by Shopau - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really Nice Update 😳 & I KNEWWW It That Khushi Arrnaged It . How Did She Do It ?! : O
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Posted: 13 years ago
arnav is acting like an ass. good thing lav spoke up.

oh and i have noticed you adopting my techneque..see you pg, lol.
its kool😉
xxx
Edited by Zeee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow owooo
all of this hatred just becoz shyam bloody sowed a seed in his head...
way to go...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update
How did Kushi managed to do that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hope arnav comes out of his misconception soon he is ruining khushi and his relationship thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff i just finished reading the last bit...continue soon plz add me to your pm list

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