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Posted: 14 years ago
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Want a romantic Kriyansh episode wherein Kria's B'day is celebrated just by the two of them ...
Something like .. Kria tells Rey that next week is her B'day and asks him what will u do for my B'day ... He is confused as to what does she want ...Kria reminds him of her B'day everyday for the week ...Rey gets nervous as to what is expected from him ...

Finally on the B'day at 12 am Kria is waiting for Rey's call ..She wanted him to wish her first ...But call doesn't come ... Weaklings gang come with cake ...

Still Kria is waiting for call .. goes off to sleep ...

Next day in college everyone from Dazzler's group also wish her ... But Rey hasn't come to college ...Kria asks Swayam where is Rey .. he says he doesn't know .. His phone is also switched off ..
Whole day Kria is restless .. waiting for Rey's call .. trying to call him .. but his phone is switched off ...

Finally in the night .. lights are off ...Kria is in her bedroom .. angry because Rey didn't wish her .. worried as to why his phone is switched off .. She is staring at their dance fest pic and a tear rolls down ...

Rey enters thru the window .. He has a cupcake in his hand and a candle which he lights .. he wishes her .. Kria is relieved to see him .. but gets very angry as to why he didn't wish her the whole day and he is the last one to wish her .,..
He says he wanted to her to remember this B'day forever so he was trying to do something very special for her .. but he was not able to think what to do ...
She just blows the candle and is still angry .. and tells him to stand on 1 leg and hold his ears ...
Rey does that and she tries to tickle him still he stands perfectly still ... finally he says am going to fall .. Pls sorry ... She holds his hand .. and says where is my gift ...

He takes out the cupcake again and lights the candle and asks her to cut it ...
she cuts it and he feeds a piece to her and she to him ...
He takes out a rose from his shirt and is on his knees and gives her that ...
Then he takes out a beautiful pack of chocolates .. she unwraps the chocolate and her name is written on the chocolate ...
Then he gives her a cute teddy bear ...
Then he gives her a box all wrapped up beautifully and says its a dress for her .. Hope she likes it and its not like the dress which he gave her for the party ...
She opens it and its a gown .. white coloured ,.. with small sequence on it .. simple but elegant ..
Then he gives her a card .. wherein there is just 1 line .. When u smile at me .. u make me feel special ...
With all this .. she says .. Is there still some gift left ?
He tells her to open her laptop and check her email ...
He has sent her a collage of their photos from the dance fest ...

Kria blushes and smiles and then the clock turns 12 ...
Kria sees that and says even though you are the last the wish me .. but this B'day was very very special for me ...
And they hug ...











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Posted: 14 years ago
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YAAA IT WOULD BE SUPER COOL ND CUTEEE
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww... this is so sweet!!!! Very very sweet indeed!!! just loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
OMG that was amazing ,cuteee yar she waiting Rey hole day awww Rey comes at night he wanted to her remember this B'day forever aw so cuteee ahha she cut d cupcake ohh awww i loved this line too When u smile at me .. u make me feel special ... awww collage of their photos from the dance fest very swett cuteee thay yar Plz coon i wanna read more update soon n dont forget to Pm me :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved your take on kria's birthday... thank you... write more.. you really have good skill.. great work
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Posted: 14 years ago
#6
Awwee its sooo sweet n lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i wish that rey would forget kriya's b-day and then wanna see what he does to make it up i think along the lines of that to make it up but just loads more

if this happens what i think then we get more kriyansh lol

but love ur version as well
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
would love to see such cute scenes
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
it's awsum,really want to see this.hope cvs read all the FFs and try to implement that

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