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Posted: 13 years ago
COngratulaions! wishing your little family, a very happy and a healthy life.:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
congratulations...
loved the update...
so this abhi has his own motives...
but maan just took her away...
well their affair has started now things will complex with their relationship...
will she take up the apartment that abhi is gonna show or will she take maan's help
waiting for the next
Edited by preethia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats to you and your family and all the best! may your little one be blessed with all the joys of the world !😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi all

I am these days busy and enjoying my new born and also my healing so will not be able to update my ffs for few days.

I may also be irregular in replying pms

Please don't mind.

Will update as soon as I get time

Congrats... I am so happy for you.. enjoy the tune... As you live it only once... I miss those days so much..
Lots of Love to your new born...
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats to you and ur family. take care and wish all the best for ur little one
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats di
well hope both of you are fine


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Posted: 13 years ago
anu di...
awesome updates right from part 7 to 9
well um sure the rough game played my maan will surely make him closer to geet
he is already geting posseesive for her
and has changed too

and geet i guess already looks her future with him

um loving that
well i wont say continue soon as i know ur busy with the new born kido
loads of love

god bless u both
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Posted: 13 years ago
many man congratulations to u and ur family dear

no problem we will wait for the updates but do update soon as possible ok

take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
Thanks to all of you for you wonderful wishes.
Hugs to all from bottom of my heart. I am so lucky to have found you all.
--Anu
part 10
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Next morning Geet was ready on time and took bus and train to reach the apartment place. Maan offered to drop but she quietly refused.

There was two reasons for that, first she did not want Maan or Abhi to feel uncomfortable and her work may suffer and second and most important was she did not prefer taking any favor from Maan as in their relation, they just shared equally and taking favor from him may anytime count as taking advantage of his wealth or comfort due too her relation to him.

She basically just wanted to have relation with Maan not Maan Singh Khurana. Thinking like being in any relation with Maan Singh Khurana, a big business Tycoon will give a entirely different angle to their relation so she wanted it with only Maan.

Abhi was super happy that she actually came and that Maan was not with her.

He showed her the apartment. It was small one bed room apartment but enough for her. She herself did not want the very costly apartment as at present she lended money from her family but she had planned to stay on her salary. It was on fourth floor with no lift and apartment was in the very busy middle class location but still it has charm of Mumbai' all kind of people staying there'. bachelors, student, small families, big families etc.

But as it was in Mumbai' an apartment renting in Mumbai was costly. But Geet had calculated that she could manage in the salary she was offered. Then when she will change her job she can rent better apartment. She met the landlord and finalized the deal but as it was Sunday she will be able to do the payment next day.

She then wanted to settle her things and waiting for Abhi to go as for no reason she did not want to involve anyone more than needed.

"Abhi Thank you so much for helping me with this. Now I will handle things myself as I don't want to trouble you more. I know in Mumbai everyone is so busy and you took your time off for me but I don't want to trouble you more"

But Abhi was in no mood to go' he was cherishing moments with Geet.

"No Geet, it's perfectly fine. I will be here with you and help you settle up properly. You see you are new to Mumbai."

Geet did not like this. She was not a weak girl who could not manage things on her own and she was here to lead her personal life and not want much interference.

Initially she had taken his help as she had enquired him about Mumbai and he had been all eager to help and she thought it was nice if anyone can look into the apartment but other than that'..

She remembered Maan's word and it seemed so true'" everyone does thing for their own selfish motive."

"Abhi I have habit to manage things on my own and I love to do things my way' please don't trouble yourself"

She somehow managed to get him go.

She was lost again in thought of Maan' how much shrewd and player he looked but he never lied'. He always made his intentions clear be it wrong or right he was open about it.

And in his own ways he always said something that was so true to real life.

Geet settled her cloth and was making the list as how to set it up and priority of things she needed most.

She went out and bought some very basic stuffs which were of urgent use.

It was evening and Abhi really wanted to meet Geet' It was Sunday and he could give her his time and see how he can help her. He knew she was alone here and they could be friends.

While Geet was setteling few stuffs that she had bought there was knock on the door.

Geet was shocked to see Abhi there'. Most unexpected.

She gave a weak smile and let him in.

"I just wanted to check if everything is going fine"

Geet definitely did not like this much of interference but she cannot be rude to him'. He had looked for apartment for her'..

"Biggest mistake to take anyone's help' it's always better to do your own work"

She definitely was regretting taking his help.

"I am perfectly fine' come have your seat" Actually there was nothing to sit so she offered him the window to sit.

Abhi was really happy and was about to start his friendly conversation when his happiness was interrupted by call on Geet's phone. Geet saw "Player" flashing on her mobile and her eyes lit up.

She immediately picked it up'

"Hello, Mr. Player" Abhi got confused with that but she was lost with the call.

"Hey' all set" "Kind of' getting just started actually' tomorrow is my final interview so doesn't want to take too much stress now"

Abhi was waiting eagerly for the call to end but it went on and on. He tried to pour water and drink, moving from here to there to get her attention so that she can end the call and they can talk.

It was getting late too and he also had almost an hour of journey to cover and it will be Monday tomorrow.

But ending call was far away when she was so lost in her talk that she almost forgot Abhi. Above all he was more confused with her code word talking. She was laughing, sometimes taunting' whatever it definitely was different kind of talk.

Abhi was loosing his patience but what could he do, she did not call him and she can take her calls, but he had took out his Sunday for this.

Then finally her an hour long call ended' he breathed with relief but his relief was very short lived. There was knock on the door.

To both Geet's and Abhi's surprise Maan was there.

Geet was like on high' she pointed at him

"You.. you were on your way while talking'. Hmm tabhi main sonchu, how do you get such free time'. Actually you were using the driving time"

So Geet was busy talking with this man'. Abhi thought

"Will you let me in or not"

"off course come in" But seeing him Geet had forgotten that Abhi was inside.

Maan saw Abhi, did not like his presence at all but did not show it'

He forwarded his hand to Abhi and smile at him.

But the smile had something that burned Abhi' maybe kind of complex with Maan's personality or Maan's way of making anyone feel low without even speaking a word.

But soon Maan started sneezing with the dust in the Apartment.

Geet's all concentration went on Maan and she ran to bring a fresh towel for him'. He calmed down after a while.

Then her eyes went on Abhi' ohh he was still there. She smiled at him "Abhi you will really be late' please do not trouble yourself"

Now Abhi too thought it's better to leave now then witness all that he had been witnessing since he came.

Maan was now actually not liking her idea of staying in this apartment.

He tried to discourage her but she said'

"Its Ok Maan' you are looking at it from your standard, for me it's fine and once I change my job or my salary increases I will change to little better one."

"As you wish'.. 4 floor without lift and see all this" he showed everywhere

"Per abhi ke liye, I have to compromise with this. I will find out something good' where else can I go now"

"That' not a big problem' shift with me" What ???? Maan really invited someone to staty with him. His privacy was one of his top priorities for which he preferred to stay in Mumbai and here he was inviting her to stay with him.

"With you'. No Maan I am fine"

"Kyun dar gayee mujhse"

"Its not that Maan, I don't want to take favor from you coz we share the relation."

Maan thought for a while'.

"Ok don't take favor' whatever you are paying here, pay me that rent and stay there'. Does that sound good"

At present Maan was not thinking if what he was doing goes by his norms or not, only that he did not like Geet staying at this place.

This place may not be safe for her was all he was thinking. Without realizing he was only concerned about her at this moment. What if something misshapens with her, she was new to this place, knew nothing about it and her outgoing nature can add fuel.

So what' how safe was she with him' but she did it with her consent and here'.

Maybe here too she can do it with her own consent'. No this was even more fearful' he didn't know why' she was not his, she was free to be with any one, but still the thought scared him.

The fact that he was the one who intruded her virginity somehow made him possessive towards her though he will never accept it.

He must go as she denied but he did not go and was waiting there' thinking and looking outside the window.

"Challen'I have done the packing" Maan's trance broke, ohh she is coming with him.

Geet was not obliged to listen to him or she had complete right to deny him, but seeing him so thoughtful and concerned and above all some how she could not deny his request' why she did not knew'

Anyways she had argued to herself'. She will be paying him.

Next to be continued.

I will be updating 'Her complete submission" soon.
Also I will soon fix the Prologue page of this one. got ruined from mobile.
Please like and comment.😉
--Anu
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Can't wait maneet living together :D

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