1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
he hehehehehehehehehe
maan is maan
bindiya ko bad me aane ko kho
n othr wz tumhari interogtn khtm ho gi to thoda pyar krle...
awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg


oh ho,, then no sorry no thanks,, luv ya

luv u too tich
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Posted: 13 years ago
tich change ur pg no and part no dear
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 28
nice part...
what is Daadi's problem with Geet?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww awesome update!!
loved it
waiting for next
con soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update your status its ch 28


Originally posted by: meena..

tich change ur pg no and part no dear


thanks tamanna and meena,,, i didn't saw that 😆😆,,, muaahhhzzz for reminding that,,, and now i m updating 29
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sirf mere liye


part 29...

bindiya: chalo geet...aslesha doesn't like the attension she was getting from maan.. but she can't say anything right now...

geet and maan were walking beside and aslesha and bindiya was on the othe side..maan slowly takes her hand in her hand... geet looked at him shocked and embaressed... bindiya was talking with aslesha whom eyes are on maan who was seenig geet continuosly... (kitna lamba line hoga lol)

maan slowly whisper to geet: bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho,,, to which geet only smiled and her cheek become red due to blush...maan pulled her close to him...

geet: maan chodiye na,, aslesha dekhegi to kya sochegi...

maan: sochne do, hume usse kya,, geet smiled sadly... ye to kabab me haddi ban gayi hain,, abhi ye nahi hoti to hum kamre me,,,,

geet: maannn...

aslesha: kya khusur phusur horahi hain,, hume bhi to pata chale...

maan: none of ur concern aslesha...aslesha was feeling a sudden jealousy from geet...

bindiya: ye hamre dadaji ka kamra hain... isme bohot khubsurat cheese hain... their was antiqe furniture and his paintings...

aslesha: huh ye purani fatichar jagah kya hain...

maan: asleshaaa... ye hamare dadaji k room hain,, tumhe nahi dekhna to yaha se ja sakti ho...

aslesha has to cover up soon: oh i m so sorry maan maine suna nahi tha... hmm really its interesting... the ashtray is nice...

geet: ye ashtray nahi candle stand hain...

aadi just make his way right then: hahahahaha candle stand ko ashtray,, wah...

aslesha: ha main janti hu bas tumhari kwonledge dekh rahi thi...

geet suppress her smile goes to the paintings collection... there was a spark in her eyes... she was touching every painting with her finger like she found a treasure...

aslesha: yuck kitna dhul hain...

geet: its beautifull,, sunset when moon is coming... dark yet light...

maan could saw she was loving it,, he goes near her : ye dadaji banate the... he used to made painting for me...aur kuch dekhna chahogi? geet looked at him with questioning eyes..

aadi and bindiya was talking to aslesha to busy her with them... aadi was appreciating her style and she completely forgot about maan n geet...

maan take geet to a old book self,, that was huge... a little dusty yet beautifull... geet was too happy to see it as she loves reading...

geet: maan its huge... her eyes were big and sparking... she was happy...

maan take her in his embrace: hmm thats why tumhe yaha laaye hu,, mujhe laga jisse dadaji k paintings pasand ayenge usse books bhi pasand ayenge... geet tum yaha se kabhi v koi v book le sakti ho...

geet was smiling: sacchiii?

maan: mucchiii... but ek shart hain..geet face become dull

geet: kya shart? maan looked her mischeviously and took a step towards her and geet understood his intension... maannn...geet run away from there and hit aslesha by mistake...

aslesha: what the hell u b,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, but stopped middway to see the rage in maan's eye...

geet: i m really sorry,,

aslesha: its k... she goes to maan hey maan chalo na tumhara room dekhe,,, she was touching his arm and that was not tolerable for geet,, she made a cute angry face to maan, to which he ignored...

maan: lets go... he knew the only way to get geet close to him is jealousy...

geet to aadi: dekho na bhai wo kaise maan se chipak rahi hain...

aadi: but maan bhi to mana kar sakta tha na,, kya jarurat thi,,,,

bindiya: but bechara karta kya, daadi k guest hain.... all were having fun to see the jealous geet...all went to maan's room...

aadi made him self comfatable in maan's bed, and maan slapped him in his head and told him to behave in his room...bindiya took a seat in the couch as she was feeling tired cause of the pregnancy..geet help her to sit and made herself comfatable... aslesha was impressed to see his room but geet was slightly hesitating as this is the 1st time she come in his room...

aslesha: nice room maan,,, the room was huge,, in center there was a king size bed... one corner there was 3 cupboard,, and another side there was his piano... aslesha goes near the piano and tried to impress maan by playing but that horrible,, soon aslesha realized she couldn't tolerate herself anymore...

aslesha: maan ye kaisa piano hain, thik se bajta nahi,,

aadi: isse bajana padhta hain...

everybody laughed at her and so was geet, she was giggling and that was not acceptable for aslesha...

aslesha: itna has rahi ho geet tumhe khud bajana bhi aata hain??

geet: nahi wo mujhe but maan grab her hand,

maan: main sikha dunga,, he made her sit infront of it and he hold her hand from behind... geet was angry with him as he let her enter the room but maan hold her hand tight and nuzzle close to her neck infront of aslesha to fuel her anger... maan slowly started the piano with a sweet rythm... they played fro some time...

aslesha: ye to tum mujhe bhi sikha sakte the na,, then main bhi play karna sikh sakti thi but then they heard the piano sound all looked at it to see who is playing and there was geet playing the piano like she was lost the rythm... a beautifull rythm that can melt anyones heart.. daadi heard the sound from downstairs.. and was surprised as its coming from maan's room.. and this is a new DHUN... she was loving it but didn't know who is it... suddenly geet stopped and her eyes were moist...

maan could sense something went wrong with her...

maan: kya huya geet? tum roh kyun rahi ho?

geet: maan ye dhun mujhe papaji ne sikhayi thi,, unki bohot yaad arahi hain...

maan hide her in his embraces like sheidling her from the world,, sshhh geet mat roh,, wo thik hain aur bohot jald tum unse milogi... okk he cleared her tears with his thumbs...geet noded...

bindiya: chalo abb sab dinner k liye chalte hain..

all were coming down by the coridor,, aadi bindiya and aslesha were together and maan geet behind them...

maan saw the sadness in geet's eyes... and he knew how to divert her mind from there...

maan: bindiya tum aslesha ko niche le jayo main kuch vul gaya kamre me,,, wo leke aata hu...

aadi understood his intension,,, maan goes from there,, the coridor was huge,, and aadi make them busy in there talk while geet was behind them lost in her world, suddenly someone pulled her,, before she could utter a word he rest his palm on her mouth...geet was pulled in a dark room... but she was not scared as she knew the touch too well...after pinning her to one of the wall he takes off his palm...

geet: maan... ye aap kya kar rahe ho...

maan: romance,,,

geet: aap pe romance ka bhoot kuch jayada nahi chadha hain?

maan: nahi to,, kya geet itne time baad to tum kareeb mili ho,, kuch pyar karogi lekin tum,,,, he was coming close to her lips but geet stopped him... and poked his arm

geet: ye sab kya hain maan, aise saitaniya aapke dimaag me aati kaise hain...

maan: tumhe dekh k,,, geet takes her eyes down...

maan comes close to her earloab: itni khubsurat lagogi to main kaise sambhalu apne aap ko? geet blush furiously,,, uff geet main jab bhi tumhare ye laal gaal dekhta hu to mujhe inhe,, inhee

geet looked at him curiously: inhe?

maan slowly whisper: kha jaane ka man karta hain,, geet was smiling... maan kisses her cheek sweetly,,, geet closed her eyes,, he then one by one kisses her eyes...geet rest her hand on his heart...

maan: geet ye dhadkan abb sirf tumhari naam ki sunayi deti hain... geet meet his eyes only to see love...

unconditional love where there no place to jealousy or any other thing in the world... she hugged him tight,, only she knew, wht he meant to her, she doesn't want to losse him,, till the time aslesha came she was finding difficult to say anything to anyone,, mostly daadi but ow she knew what she have to do,, no matter what happen she couldn't let him to be alone.. she can fight with anyone to anything only for his happiness...

precap: dinner and angry maan... oops mirchi...

thats it for now... will update tomorrow...more passion to come wink...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

cant bear this alesha she is a real torch er
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Posted: 13 years ago
just hate ashlesha kick her out soon awsem update

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