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Posted: 13 years ago
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i just have written a poem after many days so thought to share with you all..i hope you will like it..

*Dastaras*
Hamesha yaad rakhta hoon main tumko
kabhi khawaboon ki surat main
jo dekhe the kabhi main ne
haseen jo pal the woh sare
Mere Hamraaz,Mere Hamdam
yaqeen hota agar mujhko
kabhi ye hoon ge na pore
samete leta unko pehle
bikharne se
magar phir sochta hoon
kahan tha waqt mujh pe mehrbaan
aur
kab tha tu meri dastaras main
Main kal bhi Be Amman tha
aur aj bhi!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Poem API...🤗
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...😍😍😍
i m glad u posted it...
as i used to love wenevr u add something in ur FFs...
hopefully now u will write dis type of poems regularly...
n han...U R MY ALL ROUNDER SIS...😎
LOVE U LODSSS...🤗🤗🤗

Ps: Tasnim... :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow veryyy nice poem maria
lovelyyy
--Sanchu-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice...though i felt a little difficulty with a few words...
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing..i did not know u can even write poem
beautiful
u r an amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow it is so beautiful😳
do write more😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so beautiful poem plzz do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome poem..very nice job..loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really engaging!Really nice maria...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its wonderful Maria..specially last lines...
so love it.❤️

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