PREM AND MUKTI FOREVER....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys..i am writing a fanfic between prem and mukti..and it starts from the end of yesterday episode...

(mukti will go to search prem and she finds him siting in a bar and he is almost drunk..)

Mukti:prem........

Prem:oh...miss mukti desmukh...tum yeha...ab mainey kya kiya hai????

Mukti:prem...chalo ghar chatey hai...sab log tumhara wait karaheyhai...

(since there will be too much noise in the bar ....he cannot hear properly wht mukti says..)

Prem:hey DJ...stop the music..

(the DJ stops the music and now everyone is around prem and mukti)

Mukti:prem...sab log dekh raheyhai..chalo ghar chalteyhai..

(then prem looks at the other people)

Prem:hallo guys...meet mukti desmukh..kitna pyaar sey mujha ghar bapas bulaneykay liye ayehai...laykin ajh mai jis hal mai huh...ush ki jimeidar aur kohi nahin balkay...yehi ladki aur meray apney dad...oh sorry mera ex-dad...dad basu hai..

(mukti's eyes are filled with tears)

Prem:hey basanti..now u also donot turn to be miss..nautanki and stops crying....jitna rona hai meiney roliya..aur tumhai to khusi horahi hogi kya tum ney mujha apney dil ki sath sath apni ghar say bhi nikaldiya...am i right miss desmukh..???

Mukti:nahi prem...tum nay kabhi mujha samjha he nahi...mei janti huh kya yis baar mujhsey galti huehai..laykin tumney bhi to apney jindagimey bahoat galtiyai ki hai..aur tumhai apney dil se nikalney ki baat...janti huh ki tum meray kabil nahi ho..laykin kya karu.pyaar kiya hai aur ye dil kabhi samajta he nahi kya tum meray kabil nahi ho..

Prem:bas karo...may bhi janta huh kya may tumhari kabil nahi huh...because i know that i had hurted u so many times and i had even make u cry alot..but wht can i do..miss basanti..the more u try to run away from me the more i want to come close.u are the girl that had shown me a way to life...u r the one who made made me cry for no reason..coz whenever i think of u..i feel like crying..u r the girl i feel like respecting and being forever..but i know i donot love u..coz i am not able to be your's..

Mukti:prem....maynai kabhi nahi socha tha ki..jitna pyaar may tumsey karti huh...kabhi tum bhi mujha yotna he pyaar karogay..ajh mujha tumhari aakhon may meray liye pyaar dekrahahai..

Prem:nahi mukti...meray aakhon may pyaar nahi bas ashu hai..aur ye ashu tum nai mujha di hai..tumnai...and above all i donot love u damet..i donot..

Mukti:tik hai prem..mana ki tum mujhsey pyaar nahi kartay ho...laykin yis bakt ghar chalo please..

(mukti comes closer to him and prem and mukti's eyes meet..both of their eyes are filled with tears..mukti cannot help herself and hugs prem...and prem he feels like dying in her arms..but still as he is a egoist person he keeps saying..may tumsey pyaar nahi karta...and even other people's eyes are also filled with tears and when they both hug each other..everyone calps 👏and starts thinking about such a strange love between prem and mukti)

(hope u people enjoy reading it...and last but not the least..kabhi na sakun aya kabhi na karar aya jab sey hai mujh ko tum pey pyaar aya....PREM AND MUKTI FOREVER......)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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well done!!!!
looks like your new welcome to IF!!!!!
im sure you'll make heaps of friends!!




enjoy!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kool fanfic yaar i loved it!!!!!!!! its the best i have ver read 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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welcome to IF yaar and nice fanfic
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PERFECT!I give that a 10/10! 😛 Wonderful!and welcome here 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow taht was really gud 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!! omg!!! that was so good!!! 10/10 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow haila even i felt hopeful at the bit where she says i can see the love in your eyes!!!

PM best jodi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...tht was really good....i cant wait...plz continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i love reading PM fanfics yaar thanks a lot for making this

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