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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Someone needs to save khushi!!!!!!

this story is getting better and better by each part

i can't wait til the next updates

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i loved part 6 as well...i totally did not see it...i guess i am the first one to comment about part six

the last line was the cutest think i ever read...it left me smiling

thanks a ton for the emails

Edited by anita_21492 - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

awesome ending loved it that was perfect

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Awesome...especially these lines -

" Why did he never appreciate her when she was there, by his side, healthy and happy. Why did it take something like this to show him how wrong he was. If he could only have a minute with her now, he would tell her what he felt. That is all he asked for, just a minute."

Did u really have to end it here? Would my Pretty Polly Please inspire you to continue???

Edited by Vsc94 - 13 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Great update! Loved this OS!

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Awww Hayley! The ending was so beautiful, loved it! (:

I seriously cannot wait for the episode to air! It's still Sunday night over heree! :( arggh haha thanks for a wonderful weekend OS! (:

--Garima

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Finally read the whole thing. And I love it!! The ending sentence was epically cute. Thanks for emails.

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Hey!!!!!

You should have told...arghhh i regret not checking my mails as often as i do in week days in weekends!!!!!

The weekend would have been poor bliss with your writing instead of the torturous hours spent waiting for the actual episode!!!!!

This was lovely story!!!! Well the CVs...hmm no idea how they will take the scene but this was way better as it had the inner turmoils of both Arnav and Khushi!!!!

And of course their ending will not be so simple!!!!! and easy right???