OS: Manyata gives her Janu(UV) a visit

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manyata cOmes to meet Udayveer.

She entered his room without knockIng. She was mad and really mad. He had cancelled her plans to go to Akash On hi birthday, but she thought he did it because he didn't know. But now she found out that he did know by the help of J Manyata found out and she had come runningto kill him. But as she entered she saw him. She froze at the sight. He was SHIRTLESSS. Manyata blushed a she saw his muscles. 😳 Withour her permission, her eyes had started staring at his back. She admired it. What the hell was she thinking? She Bruges the thought away and started to walk towards him when she suddenly halted to a stop. A girl with barely any clothes on according to our Manyata hugged UV from the back.

Manyata gasped in horror. Iski toh. She thought as she took her sandal off. The girl said in a flirting tone

Oh UV, you are just da best.
Thanx sweetheart, m gla you enjoyed yourself.UV said

Chee Manyata yelled startling both.

Yeh kaun hai the girl asked a shocked UV.
Haan Batao Batao main kaun hoon agay peevhe to bara mhoon par k bholte te na an bolo.

Uv explained to the girl who left crying. He stared at Manyata afraid of wht she would do now.

She grabbed him and took his shirt and put it on him. He stood their silent. She looked hurt he thought. She was jealous. Usually he wouldve made fun of her for being jealous but thts something he didn't want to do or even try to do by looking at her anger.

Sharam nahu atthi tume bara kehte ho k main tumhari hone wali maharani hun lekin an Kia hua. Thang agaye mujhse jiski wajah se yeh patte paticher kapre wali larkion k saath unke sath she didn't know why but she felt like she was about to break down.

UV couldnt bear those tears. He could never, he knew they were on their way. He knew her from her childhood he knew when she was happy or sad. He quickly pulled her in his arms.

I'm sorry Manyata hum ajke Baadh kabhi Aisa nahi kerr he lekin app bhi aj k badh yeh kabhi mat Kenna k hum app se thak Gaye. Because princess I love you too much, and for you I'd b willing to do anything. Please hume Maaf kerde.

For the first time he had actually said that he loved her and he meant it. It wasn't his brain speaking for him today it was his heart. His brain always gave up to his heart whenever he saw Manyata cry.

It's okay. She couldn't believe he actually said that he loved her. It didnt feel anything like the way Akash said it. It was something different as if UV said it from
His heart. She smiled and looked up at him. She let her heart take over her and do the work. She had a lot in her brain and she didn't want to care about it. She letherswlf melt into his arms as he shut off the lights and carried her to his bed.

He slowly laid her down and she looked at him. He laid on top of her as she blushed. She closed her eyes as he bent down. His hands reached her waist and he bent down to kiss her. She wrapped her arms around him tightly. His arm moved forward and lights out. Manyatas eyes opened in shock. One arm going towards a lamp and the other about to push UV OFF.

Part 2 coming up soon.

Lol very small and guys like I said I have literally gone insane so please ignore this paagal bachi who has turned besharam. Guys like I said in the previous 3 fan FICA uver written today that I can't keep Maanveer out of my head and I have gone insane. This is was written because Salekh encouraged me in my other os to keep writing wht ever comes in my thoughts so this is dedicated to her. Love u Salekh for such lovely comments. Guys I hope you enjoyed my tragedy writing I know it's kind of wanna be besharam well sorry but their are 3 days left for my wanna be besharmi to become total full on besharmi cz m turnin 15. Lol Maanveer and me uff. Guys plz comment. Thang for taking ur precious timing for reading this
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adventure_gurl thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you have written a lot today, but don't think that should happen before they are married
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly, THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THE DEDICATION <3 <3 <3
REALLLY REALLLY REALLY REALLY LOVED IT
it was trulllyyy mindblowing..ahaha loved manyata's jelousy..
HAYEEE,Udayveer shirtless...
OMGGG! Loved it
I was sharmaofing the whole time
Thank you soo much..
and im really looking forward to the next writing of yours cant wait!!
Pleasee keep writing
Your keeeping the Manveer HOTNESS alive!!
Thank youšŸ˜›šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

you have written a lot today, but don't think that should happen before they are married


Lol i kno but nothing happened I let the lights shut bcz I dint know wht else to write after but nothin bad happened. Lol cz Manyata would kill him I have to continue this it's just part 1 lol forgot to write tht.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: salekh1

Firstly, THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THE DEDICATION <3 <3 <3

REALLLY REALLLY REALLY REALLY LOVED IT

it was trulllyyy mindblowing..ahaha loved manyata's jelousy..

HAYEEE,Udayveer shirtless...

OMGGG! Loved it

I was sharmaofing the whole time

Thank you soo much..

and im really looking forward to the next writing of yours cant wait!!

Pleasee keep writing

Your keeeping the Manveer HOTNESS alive!!
Thank youšŸ˜›šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜Š



Lol u r welcum m so glad u liked it. M just waiting for these two scene where Manyata gets jealous and Maureen not only me but everyOne else is also waiting for UV shirtless scene. Cz if I faint when o see him with a shirt on what would happen without his shirt on. I would dieee. I haveturned shameless. Lol it's gonna b continue this one so let me know if u wants pm. M glad I m lol thanx for reading it m really glad you took your time and did
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lol thnx for reading it I forgot to say tht. M just so hyper right now tht I keep on saying lol. Lol. See I dint know why though. I have gone insane. Lol. Thanx for taking your precious time. Love you as always!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eagerly waiting for the 2nd part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice...please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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M got jealous šŸ˜† šŸ˜† .luv tht part.
Awsome writing. Plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manyata gets jealous is something we won't see in the show soon but happy it happens in ur OS.
Do continue soon

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