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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy dudde sorry 4 not commenting early
i catched up the updts i missed
wow so kriya is selected n rey called swaron
2 say the news..wow!!
n shock kriya has a house that look like a palace..lol
n can imagine kriya scolding karan n rahul..lol
the preview isreally interesting
cant wait 4 next updt
se uuu soon
love yaa
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LaLi21

You're welcome! Can't wait to read more :D
yea my exams were over on thursday...definitely not fun D:


Will be soon...
Hehe Yes! Techinically mines were too. But I had one online test on Friday 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Khushi... 🥺 how more do we have to wait?

u killed me by the precap... plzz update...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

heyy dudde sorry 4 not commenting early

i catched up the updts i missed
wow so kriya is selected n rey called swaron
2 say the news..wow!!
n shock kriya has a house that look like a palace..lol
n can imagine kriya scolding karan n rahul..lol
the preview isreally interesting
cant wait 4 next updt
se uuu soon
love yaa


heya! It's alright. No prob :D
Glad to know your view dear.
It is interesting. Will update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Khushi...how more do we have to wait yaar...😔

the precap killed me... plzzz update na...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyanshluver

Khushi... 🥺 how more do we have to wait?

u killed me by the precap... plzz update...😊


Heya! Don't be sad 😆 I'm typing the part. Was busy making kriyansh siggies 😳
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Kriya lives in Vancouver and one day she is dancing till her hearts content until she is spotted by Vaibhavi. Vaibhavi sees her dance and is in awe and tells her to audition in the All Star Competation where rey is one of the judges and so is Vaibhavi. But kriya says she only dances for herself.

On the other hand sharon and swayam are in India and are happy and good friends but no more than that. Same with Viha but they are togther and happy.

Viabhavi gets a decetative to know all she can about kriya and she finds out about rey and kriya in the same college and finds a picture of them together holding hands behind the gang and looking at each other.

Sonia is kirya's best friend in Vancouver, and her boyfriend is Rahul and all three live together in a mansion in Vancouver. One day sonia brings up dance and tells kriya to audition but kriya refuses and she gives sonia and rahul a gift for sonia's birthday which is two tickets to her favourite band.

the detective who is called arjun gets sonia's phone number and tells her to get kriya to audition and she agrees and she gets kriya to say yes and then kriya goes into flashback when sharon and kriya meet and then sharon throws a challange to kriya to dance and kriya says yes and then they have a face off and they are impressed with each other and then sharon tells kriya to join the team and flashback ends.

Karan malik the professsor comes to meet kriya he knew she would be here as she always wanted to live there it was one of her dreams.

On the other hand sharon gets upset in India as she misses kriya and she tells swayam to promise her that he will bring kriya back and sharon finds out that swayam knows where kriya is and she instead tells her to promise him that he will never leave her alone.

On the form which kriya is filling for the audition it asks are u a leader or a follower and she goes back to the flashback when sharon allowed her in the team and then the others except rey are not happy and then she watches everyone and then when they leave she dances and everyone is watching her hiding and the gang decide to give her a chance and leave halfway and then sharon and rey who are watching on see that she falls on the floor and starts crying and shaorn sends rey in and rey asks her is she is a leader or a follower n then she says leader. Flashback over.

Kriya then auditions and when she enters rey see her again and he can only see pain in her eyes during the performance and then rey goes into flashback where he asks kriya is she needs a lift and she refuses and then he followes her and reaches to a big mansion and decides to check if kriya is fine as she did not come out for a long time and flashback ends.

Then kriya is in the next round and everyone leaves and then rey goes back into the detention scene and the flashback ends and then rey informs swaron that he saw kriya at the auditions and they are happy and on the other hand rose aka roshni kriya's new made friend she made during the audition's comes for a sleepover.


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The story starts off with one year after they graduate from college and then it goes back in flashback at times to show college times. In present time period, both are famous dancers. Due to misunderstandings, Kria leaves India and goes to live in Vancouver.She lives wid her friend Sonia. Rey lives in India and becomes a great dancer. They are having a dance competition where Rey is one of the judges.

Kriya is in vancouver n daily at morning she dance at some nearby place. One day Vaibhavi notices her dance n asks her to participate in the All Star Competition for which she refuses. on the other hand Swaron r in India n are in luv wid each other. mean while in Vancouver Vaibhavi appoints the detective Arjun find out about kriya. Arjun meets sonia n tells her the whole thing n she promises to convince kriya.

Where as in India sharon was missing kriya n she asks swayam to help her i finding kriya but he refuses as he had promised kriya dat he would not search for her aftr the college. Arjun gives Vaibhavi a pic of the D3 gang wer rey n kriya were holding hands.

Now Vaibhavi knew dat der was something wrong between dem and finally sonia convinces kriya for the auditions. Kriya filled the application form n gave it to Vaihavi. Finally the audition day arrived. Kriya sat in the waiting area instead of standing in the line because the application that she had filled out was given to her by Vaibhavi. It had a stamp on it and since she was the judge, she got an early pass. Outside the other judge had arrived n every one was cheering rey's name. This is how kriya got 2 know dat rey was the 2nd judge.

It was almost an hour after and Vaibhavi and Rey were tired of the dances they were seeing. Some had no idea of dance but they were doing it to meet 'Rey!' They weren't realizing that they were making a fool out of themselves. The next turn was Kriya's. Wen kriya was performing rey couldnt take his eyes off her n after her performances both the judges told kriya to go to the waiting area. Finally the results are out n kriya was one of the member who r selected. After a while rey reached his hotel room n dialed swayam's number n It came engaged, as in on call with someone else.

Rey knew dat he was talking to sharon.Swayam received another call and he cursed the person for interrupting at the wrong time. Then he saw the caller id which flashed Rey's name. His anger vanished as he informed Sharon. Swayam put the call on confernce so dat all the 3 of dem could talk. Rey told dem about kriya's audition. Swaron wer shocked to hear dis but at the same time they were very happy.
Edited by --silvermist-- - 13 years ago
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Kriya closed the door behind her. She remembered the time Rey had said the same thing rose had. She couldn't forget that day ever in her life'

***

*FLASH-BACK*

Rey looked at the guards closing the huge gate. "There's no way I can get past them'" he looked around to find another way in. he saw a medium sized wall. "Chalo, at least those hiking lessons will come in use now." He murmured as he inspected the wall.

He tugged at his pants getting in the mood of climbing. Remembering the tricks and other tips given to him by the teacher, he started climbing. The fear of falling didn't leave till he reached the other side. "Rey, great going. If someone had seen you doing this, then you would be a laughing stock. What will girls say? They run after you and here you are. Following a girl!" he mocked himself in attempt to calm him heart which was giving him unpleasant emotions.

As soon as he saw the guards, he ran behind the wall to hide himself. When they left, he looked here and there to find a door. All of them seemed closed with only one window open.

"Great more climbing!" he sighed.

Luckily, he found a ladder close by. He climbed to the top and jumped in the room being careful. Once up, he fixed the ladder in a way that others can't see it. When peeping in, he found no one in the room. But the room was big and cozy. Tons of Kriya's picture's with people he didn't recognize and her self-portraits. Some of them included baby pictures. Two of them to be exact. He wondered who they could be'

"So this is her house!" he exclaimed. He plopped down on the bed which bounced a couple of times before it settled. Just then Kriya walked out of the bathroom patting her face dry. As she opened her eyes, she stood rooted to the floor with shock.

He watched with amused face as she jumped back seeing him. "Rey! Aap yahan?!!! How did you get in?"

He picked up a photo-frame kept on the top of the desk and teased, "So this is your big secret huh?"

She panicked a little. "What are you doing here?"

"What do you think I'm doing here? By the way, I didn't know you were good at lying! No, no. Not just good. But great at it!"

She sighed. "Rey' I can explain'"

"Of course you can. You have to. But first, I'm starving." He tempted her and walked out the room looking for the kitchen.

She looked around trying to embrace all that just happened. She then rushed into the kitchen following his tail.

"Rey' please' suniye na'" he stuffed a piece of apple in her mouth blocking her from speaking further. Giving a smile, he walked around her and turned the T.V. on. Switching it to music channel, he looked back at her after sitting on the couch.

"This is some secret all right! I mean who are you?! Your house is even bigger than mines! And I thought my father was rich!!"

She felt hurt somehow but knew she couldn't blame him for the mocking sentences. Anyone would say these sort of things after finding out she had been lying to them. She felt like she was repeating his name for the thousandth time in the last five minutes. Now that she was busted, she decided to come clean and not brew up more lies.

"Rey, look' I'll tell you everything. Just promise you won't tell anyone else."

He raised his eye brow showing that he was all ears. Knowing the tone she said it in, he figured it must be something serious. "Kriya, chill. You don't have to be afraid. You can trust me."

She blinked knowing that she understood what he meant. She sat on the opposite end of the couch and he waited for her to begin.

"Hah' I don't know where to begin from... ok, about who I am' my name isn't Kriya Ghai.

Hearing that, Rey received a shock! He felt like the ground was snatched away underneath his feet and the sky erupted on his head. The girl he was falling in love with was no more than a fraud! A fraud. How can he make a mistake judging someone? For the first time in his life, he felt betrayed. He shook his head with disbelief. 'This can't be!' his facial expression said.

Her eyes widened in horror as she realized what his thoughts were depending on his horror-ed expression. She quickly said, "No no! you're getting it all wrong. My name is Kriya. Just not Kriya Ghai."

She continued as she said nervously, "Its ' It's Kriya Ghai Raiprakash."

She looked at him waiting to speak up. She just needed to hear something. Anything. She needed to console herself that he wasn't going to hate her for this.

While Rey was too stunned to speak anything. By looking at her, he knew that he should say something. But his throat went dry and even though he wanted to say something, he was unable to. He looked lost as well. Kriya Ghai Raiprakash!! It can't be what I'm thinking'

"Kriya Raiprakash as in Gaurav Raiprakash's daughter." She confirmed biting her lower lip.

"What?!!!" he freaked out. That really was a shocker to him. "You mean Gaurav uncle's daughter? But that's impossible. He only has one daughter. Why would you still lie then?" he fought against his own conscience not knowing what to think anymore.

Then the reality stung him. "If you aren't lying then it meaning that'"

Kriya sighed and completed, "That I'm Sharon's sister."

Both sat there in silence for a while. Kriya somewhere felt good that she won't have to lie to him anymore. On the other hand, Rey felt his heart getting heavy. It was a lot to take in for one night. It was he himself who was adamant on following Kriya to know her secret. And now that he did, he somewhere wished he didn't know.

Now that all was done, he didn't know how to react to it. Even if he went along with it and supported her, he couldn't bear the thought of lying to Sharon. What will happen to her when she finds out about this? How can I do this? One side, there's my best friend. And on the other side, it's someone more than just a friend. Whom do I support? I don't want to keep it from Sharon either. We have always shared our secrets to each other'

She called out to him when he sat silent for a long time. "Rey?"

He murmured, "Huh? Yea' you and Sharon' sisters' But how?"

"How about I start from beginning?" He looked at her with a blank confused look. She got up and forwarded her hand.

"Come on. I have to show you something."

Not knowing what else was in the store for him, he put his hand in her and let her guide him up the stairs.

*Flash-Back Ends*

***

"Kriya, what are you doing here?" Karan asked bringing her out of her past. She looked around to find herself standing at her balcony. As she blinked the past away, she realized she was freezing and the realization made her shiver more.

Karan shook his head in disappointment as he picked up a blanket and wrapped it around her. "You never did care about yourself." He murmured under his breath. She smiled seeing his concern.

"That's because I know you're always there for me." she replied sweetly.

He mocked, "Ha-ha. Don't try to butter me." both chuckled at that. "No, on serious note, you should think about yourself more. I mean look at yourself, you look like a mess!"

"What?! she yelled at him with shock.

"Yea, I mean if Sharon saw you like this, she would get a mini heart attack!" he continued.

She realized he was pulling her leg. Giving him a deathly look, she said his name in two separate syllables. "Ka-Ran!"

He dodged the punch that she delivered on his shoulder. Sonia came there and announced, "Anyone up for ice-cream?"

As soon as the words were out, both rushed past her making her take a semi-circle twirl before she regained her balance. "Whoa! Ok, I'll take that as a yes!" she commented after them.

***

Next morning, Rey woke up before his alarm went off. He had nothing to do till 10:00 A.M. so he decided to go roaming the city. He didn't want to take chances of getting surrounded by people. Thus he went to the nearest park. The same park where Kriya was headed.

She opened the car door when Rose come running out. "Hey, are you going to gym or park?" she asked after looking at her attire.

"Park. Want to come along?"

"Definitely. Just a minute." She ran back in and ten minutes later, she came back in her track suit. Starting the car engine, Kriya teased, "I thought you said one minute!" rose smacked her arm playfully and the car giggled away.

***

Kriya inhaled the morning fresh scent in closing her eyes. Rose exclaimed, "This is so refreshing!"

"Yea? I come here every day!!"

"That's nice. So, have you ever been to India?" she asked as they started walking.

Kriya chuckled at her silly question. "Been there? Hun, I was born there and lived my life there only."

"Oh! I so wish to go there and now that dream is coming true! I mean I was born here and only seen India in movies and all."

"Trust me, you'll love it there. I know I did!"

"Then why'd you come here?" rose asked not knowing the depth of that answer. Kriya went silent as they continued walking'

Rose found it awkward and changed the subject as she found a bird on the tree. "Hey! Look over there. They're so cute!"

Rose exclaimed as Kriya looked and smiled at her babyish act.

***

She started bursting in fits of laughter. "Oh god! Your brother is hilarious!"

Rose complained. "You're finding it funny! He ruined my date!"

Kriya ran in front of her and started jogging backwards. "Hey! Come, that's what brothers are for! Besides, you should be glad he saved you from that dork."

"Yes, well, he can get the credit for that." Both giggled and continued jogging. Kriya was still in front of Rose jogging backwards so they could see each other's face as the continued talking. She didn't realize she was about to crash into someone. That some was none other than Rey.

Rey was looking at his iPhone changing the song when he crashed into someone.

As a reflex, his hand went around the person's waist as the other hand grabbed her left hand and pulled her towards him stopping her from falling.

Her eyes were shut due to fear of ending up on the floor hurt. But she felt someone pull her and a pair of hand going around her slim waist. The touch sent shivers down her spine.

He stared at her in please as he found none other than Kriya in front of him. She stared in horror at him after she opened her eyes. Both of them were drawn into their past when they had a basketball match. A similar incident had taken place.

***

*Flash Back*

Kriya was going backwards towards their goal area, waving her hands in air. Swayam passed the ball to her blocking Sharon's attack. She went past Vicky and made the goal. That was the winning point! She jumped up and down in excited and started going back. Just then Rey walked backwards as his team was about to grill him down for making them loose.

*Flash Back Ends*

***

That day, Rey had saved her from falling the same way he had done right now. Everyone stared at them the same way Rose was at the moment.

Rose came out of her surprised mood finding both of them gazing into each other's eyes dreamily. She called out to them, "Um Kriya?"

Rey and Kriya looked at their position when they heard her call. He helped her balance on her feet. "You okay?" he whispered softly to her.

She gave a slight nod and took a step back.

Silence followed and rose decided to break it. "Rey! What a surprise seeing you here."

"Hi. Roshni right?" He asked smiling.

She nodded. "Call me Rose." She was so used to everyone call Rose that sometimes she herself forgot that Roshni was her real name! her phone rang and she excused herself from them and went away leaving them to themselves.

***


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As I said, this is the longest update so far in this FF. So, liked it? Was it unexpected? 🤔 I hope all your anger has calmed down and suspicion gone too. Kriya and house flashback will continue in one more chapter as I couldn't fit it in this one. All that didn't go along with the flow of the chapter so had to divide it again. Comment away! And don't forget to vote!!!


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Thank you all for the likes and wonderful comment! Thread 2 will be opened as soon as this one reaches page 150.

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