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loved it
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i am so sorry friends for late update. 😳 i promise next update i will update soon. so here is part 6. hope u all like it. happy reading.


~~DIL KI BATEEIN~~

chapter 6:


Aapke bateein su nkar hasi aarahi hain maan. U should speak maan tell us what is ur problem open up maan. Aapki DIL KI BATEEIN boliye humko. Aap akele nahi ho maan. We all r there for u. U R NOT ALONE MAAN. Tell us what is problem maan. U have open up maan u have to. Aap aise hi chup chap rahe tho hum kaise samaj sakte hain. Maan apni dil ki baat kehna koi paap nahi hain. Agar aap aise hi chup rahe tho koi bhi aapko kaise samaj sakte hain boliye maan boliye. She is literally begging him to say something.

But maan didnt say anything after so many days he is not feeling alone. A drop of tear rolled on his cheek. He just touched his cheek is he really crying??. He almost forgot hw to smile n cry long back. No he cant cry. He should not loose again. He is MAAN SINGH KHURANA. his eyes became red due to anger.

He stared at her angrily n roared like a hungry lion

ms. handa be in ur limits. I know what to do n what not to do. GET OUT FROM HERE.

Geet moved back due to sudden outburst. She was shocked with his behaviour. Here she is trying to make him normal but maan is maan never listens to anyone. But now geet should act normal because she know how to make him normal. Even this outburst is also very important. We cannot expect a person all of a sudden. He should come out of his past it needs some time. Geet will do everything to make maan happy. But its not that simple. Intezaar karna padta hain. 'intzaar ka phal meeta hota hain'.

Geet stood like a statue rooted there. Maan glared at her angrily he saw her eyes which r showing fear. Yes she got afraid no one in her life shouted on her like this. She never saw any person in her life having so much anger in their eyes. She stared his eyes which r red due to anger. She composed herself n acted normally.

Oh.. oh.. dont be angry Mr. khurana. Agar aap kehna nahi chate ho tho its ok n she smiled at him.

Dr. handa better from next time send any senior doctor. They can do better checkup than u.

oh.. in that case I am so sorry Mr. khurana maine aapke operation kiye the. So I know better than other doctors. U have to bear me Mr. khurana.

Maan is pissed off by her continous taunts.

By the way Mr. maan can I ask u one question? I want to test ur memory.

Maan just glared at her. His face became red due to anger but poor him not in a position to get up. But geet totally ignored his glares.

Do u remember this hospital Mr. khurana?

Maan didnt undertand what she is asking. He controlled himself n asked

what??

hmm.. ok I will only tell. This hospital Mr. maan 5 years back aapke company ne hi design kiya tha. How strange na maan aap iss hoapital ki opening party mein aye the ek guest bankar par ab isi hoapital mein hain aap ek patient bankar.

Thats it now maan couldnt control n told

geet last n final time I a warning u out from here. Or else remember this will be last day of ur practice.

Ahhh.. I am scared mr. maan said geet teasingly. Ok u take rest dont take much strain Mr. maan its not good for ur health. Saying so geet left from there.

But here maan is burning with fury.

Maan(st): what is happening today all r behaving so weird. Pehle annie, dev aur ab iss geet. How dare she talk to maan singh khurana like this. No one dares to open their mouth in front of me but she is taunting me. How dare she?? agrhhh. I have to do something with this girl. N he just smirked.

Geet is observing him from outside. She saw the change in his face expression from anger to thinking n to smirk. When she saw the smirk on his face she literally gulped her saliva.

Oh god he is upto something. Yeh tho seede seede baat nahi karte aur main kya kya nahi bola unko. She looked up n made a baby face n told Hey babaji aapki iss bachi ki raksha karna iss maan se. pata nahi kya karega ab. Yeh tho double dusht danav hain. N she kept on blaberring.

After that the whole day geet is busy with other patients. But here maan is boiling with rage. He somehow wants to teach geet a lesson. In the afternoon dev n annie came to hospital to meet maan. They stayed with him till evening. Annie went back home to prepare dinner for both dev n maan. Pari is also with annie as she is alone in that big mansion. After her duty geet went back home n rested.

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Next day morning as usual geet came early n checked on maan when he is asleep. He looks very peaceful when he is lseeping but when he woke up its quiet opposite.

Whole morning geet was busy n in the afternoon geet has to give injection to maan so she went to quitely to maan's room didnt talk anything. Maan is also quiet. Geet forgot some medicine which she have to give to maan so she excused n went to bring. But unfortunately she forgot maan's report in the room itself. At what time the medicine should be given is wrote by geet. So maan took the report n changed something. Before geet came there he placed the report aside like a innocent boy as if he dont know anything. Geet came with the medicine n at the same time senior doctor came for rounds. Geet wished him

good afternoon doctor.

Good afernoon Dr. handa. How r u now Mr. khurana.

I am fine doctor .

Doctor took maan's report n checked. Suddenly he asked

Dr. handa which medicine u r giving now?

***** medicine doctor told geet.

What is this Dr. handa I didnt expect such a negligence from u. u have to give this medicine at 11am. But u r giving at 1 pm.

No doctor... before geet complete senior doctor gave the report to geet. She checked the file n shocked to see the change in time. Immediately she understood who did this. She glared at maan he just smirked. Maan didnt talk anything he is just enjoying the scene there.

I am sorry doctor told geet.

What sorry doctor how can u neglect. Its such a big surgery. U know all the complications happened during operation. This is last n final warning to u dr. handa. Next time I dont want such negligence from u. better concentrate on work. Ok?

Ok doctor I am sorry.

We r so sorry Mr. khurana. From next time we will be careful.

Its ok doctor kabh kabhi aisa ho jata hain. Dr. handa might be busy so she forgot. Waise I am fine now.

Ok Mr. khurana take rest. Bye.

Bye doctor.

Doctor left from there. Maan turned towards geet. She is tears. Maan felt bad but he teached a lesson to geet for her yesterday's behaviour.

Dekha dr. handa, be careful before talking to maan singh khurana.

Geet knows that maan is angry but she never expected that maan will do such thing. But somewhere she is happy that they played the same prank on yash when they were in school. But when it comes to her career no one can bear this type of false accusion. But has to do everything for maan.

Geet didnt speak anything further she gave the injection to maan n left from there. She went to caf n ordered coffee for her. Just then she felt someone patted her shoulder. She turned back n saw who is that person. Her anger raised seeing that person.

Tumko pata bhi hain yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? 2 days ek phone nahi kuch nahi. Do u know how tensed we both are? Ha ha aap kya samajthe ho sirf humko pareshan karna hi aata hain tum logon ko. We live or die kya farak padta hain. Tumko pata hain meera kitni pareshan thi. Muje chodo meera ek phone tak nahi kar sakte tum.

Geet let out all her frustation on that poor guy. He is just listening to her. Pata nahi beech mein kuch bol diya tho aur daant padega shayad.

Just then meera came there n shouted YASH..

yash sw her n gave a weak smile n eyed to geet.

Geet what happened yaar? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Asked meera.

Samajte kya hain apne aap ko. I just hate him. Its my fault that I want to change him. But kisi ko kya farak padta hain.

Yash didnt understand anything. But meera understood that she is angry because of maan. Meera turned to yash n whispered

I will tell u later.

Yash just nodded. Geet left from there angrily. Meera sighed.


Precap : maan's discharge.

Geet, yash n meera's plan.


hi friends so here is part 6. hope u all like it. thanks alot for ur likes n comments.

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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dear...hope there is some change in Maan from now onwards
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oh god..!
maan has changed a lot..
her tears s not affecting him..!
i hope the trio's plan vl work to bring old maan back..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan ki to mainand geet



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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
awesome
maan was so rude
hope maan comes to no abut d truth fast
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lovely update...
humarein sherni itne sehi darr gayi...aur maan toh maan hai...pagal kahinka...
thank u fr d pm...n update soon...waiting...

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