Maaneet spilling the beans..coffee & gussa ..

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Though Gurti are determined never to unveil their instincts for each other but in vain.πŸ˜‰.. having vowed never to mix reel with real,but working late at night they find themselves breaking all their rules😳 They've already stepped forward on their destined path .i.e their journey of love & retrieving from there seems almost impossible for them.☺️.

Geet's planning to say sorry to Maan & landing up in spilling coffee on his shirt is truly adorable.😳.I just admire this sequence so much.πŸ€—.the dialogues between Geet & Adi r too cute & hilarious.πŸ˜†.MSK looks too hawt in that full sleeved white shirt.☺️.

Maaneet r left dumb struck as how to face off in the next morning shoot.😲.they can't sleep for the entire night.πŸ˜•.Geet comes in the shoot early in the morning & gets a bit relieved coz Maan hasn't yet arrived .πŸ˜‰.so she starts planning as how to face him.😊. that too casually..πŸ˜‰ letz hear their monologues.πŸ˜ƒ.

Geet-Thank God..Maan abhi tak nahi aaye.😳socho Geet socho ...kaise unka samna karu. ..yeh ek hi raat mei lagta hai mere duniya hi badal gayi..aysa kyu kiya tumne babajiπŸ˜•


Maan- mujhe itne emotional hone ka kya jarurat thi..damn it!! πŸ˜•I should've checked myself.πŸ˜‰.kya karu mei abh? how do I face her.😲.aysa toh pehle kabhi nahi hua mere saath..Maan focus plz focus.πŸ˜‰.just concentrate on ur work be a true professional & not an emotional fool.πŸ˜ƒ


Geet- waise kaal raat jo hua usse mei kabhi bhul nahi sakti.😳.It was my first kiss ever☺️.. it was such a magical, heavenly & out of the world experience for me.πŸ˜‰.It seemed as if I'm tasting the paradisal bliss.😍.Infact, I would've hated myself if I was successful in resisting myself from that.πŸ˜‰.


Maan- ek kaam karta hu...usse call karke dekhta hu kya response hai.πŸ˜•.whether she's angry with me or just rejoicing that dreamy moment still like me..😳

Unable to get connected on her cell...Maan calls Geet on her room.πŸ˜ƒ.

Geet-Hello!! who's that?😲


Maan-Hello!! Geet πŸ˜ƒ...Maan here.πŸ˜‰..

Geet gets so shocked to hear Maan's voice all of a sudden that she doesn't know how to reciprocate & disconnects the call in the heat of that moment.πŸ˜•

Geet-arre bap re re 😲..yeh toh dusht danav hai..πŸ˜•.abh kya karu...phone kaat deti hu..


Maan- voice toh Geet ki hi thi.😲.kyuki mujhe 'dusht danav' sunayi diye.πŸ˜‰..aur itne adorable adjective se toh Geet mam hi mujhe bulate hai..πŸ˜•.kya iska matlab woh kal raat ki baat lekar mujhse naraaz hai..I must check it out.πŸ˜‰..


Geet -hey babaji!! meine yeh kya kar diya..πŸ˜•yeh toh wohi baat hui ...haath mei aaye laxmi ko thukrana.😲..Geet jhalli kahi ke!! unke man ke baat janne ke raste mei tunne no entry ka board laga diya..πŸ˜†


Maan- achcha toh mera phone kaat diya.πŸ˜•. thik hai mei bhi tumhare dil mei chupe hue hidden feelings ka outburst nahi karwaya toh mei tumhari aashiq nahi.πŸ˜‰.iss dormant volcano ko toh active banake hi dum lunga πŸ˜†.. par Maan ...kahi iss chakkar mei tumhare dil ki molten lava tsunami ki tarah uske samne na aa jaaye...just remember.. she has to reveal first...πŸ˜‰

Geet enters Maan's room coz they have to rehearse for their shots.πŸ˜ƒ.Letz see their face off.πŸ˜‰

Geet- Woh mujhe tumhare saath apna dialogues rehearse karna hai.😊.

Maan- hmmm...aur mujhe bhi.πŸ˜‰.


Geet(self-thought)- yeh itne shanth kyu hai..inke chehra ka forecast mujhe storm ke aane ki pehle ka serenity ka signal de raha hai..πŸ˜•.pakka aaj kuch galaat hone wala hai😲


Maan (self-thought)-hayee!! she looks out of the world in this color too.😳as rosy as her lips.. omg...again I'm getting carried away.☺️. just lemme check her lips πŸ˜‰..kuch jyaada toh nahi ho gaye kal raat...thank God.πŸ˜ƒ. they're perfectly alright.😳.but before I get tempted again ...I should stop checking her out & behave otherwise.😲.

Maan tries to remain kool before her.πŸ˜‰.he lifts the mug from the table & take a sip of the coffee ..he wants to present himself quite normal before Geet.πŸ˜ƒ.

Geet-tum kya coffee hi peete rahoge ya rehearse bhi karoge.😲.nahi toh aaj hum fhir se late ho jayenge.πŸ˜•.


Maan- toh kya mere waja se kaal late hua.😲woh toh tum mere saath nok-jhok mei itne time waste karte rehte ho ki hum late ho jaate hai.πŸ˜•.


Geet- ha abh sara kasoor toh mera hi hai na.πŸ˜•.tum joh karte rehte ho mere saath uska kya?.😲.either tum mujhe most of the time check out karte rehte ho nahi toh apne Tom & Jerry fights mei mujhe uljhaye rakte ho..


Maan-O ho!! tum toh bohot dudh ki dhuli hui ho 😲..kya tum mujhe drool nahi karte?.πŸ˜‰fhir bhi tum nahi manoge ki tum mujhse...😳


Geet- haa haa bolo bolo..mei kya.😲..mei tumse humesha fight karti hu..drool karti rehti hu aur mauka dekhkar kiss bhi karti hu.😳.hai na.πŸ˜‰.

Maan- meine aysa kab kaha.😲.tum toh bina break ki gaddi ki tarah bolte hi jaa rahe ho .πŸ˜•. mujhe bhi toh explanation ka mauka doh.. woh kaal raat ke liye...I'm sorry.😊.I got a bit carried away.😳.par tumne bhi toh mujhe reciprocate kiya.πŸ˜‰.toh uska kya😲..


Geet- Oh!! toh feelings sirf tumhara hi ho sakte hai.😲.mei toh human hu hi nahi.πŸ˜•.mere toh koi instincts hai hi nahi.πŸ˜•.mera toh dil hi nahi.πŸ˜•.hai na!!.πŸ˜‰


Maan- achcha toh tumhara dil kya karne ko kehte hai tumhe?😲


Geet(self-thought)- O god!! mei yeh kya baak rahi hu.😲.abhi andaar ke baat bahaar nikaal jaate.πŸ˜•.

kuch nahi.😊.fhilhaal mera dil scene rehearse karne ko kehe rahe hai.πŸ˜ƒ.toh kya hum shuru kare.πŸ˜‰.

The very thought of the cat coming out of the bag disturbs Geet too much.πŸ˜•.She gets so nervous regarding the outburst of her hidden instincts before Maan that by mistake she spills the coffee from the mug on Maan's shirt.😲.

Maan gets too annoyed with her impractical behavior ...

Maan- Geeet!! ..yeh tume kya ho gaya.😲. itne panic kyu kar rahe ho.πŸ˜•..mere shirt spoil kar diye..abh mujhe PH se dusra shirt mangna parega..

Geet-Ahhh!! I'm sooo sorry Maan.πŸ˜•..meine yeh jaan bujhkar nahi kiya.😲..woh mei darr rahi thi ki agar mei tumhare itni kareeb na chale jayu ki tum mujhe fhir se kiss kar lo.πŸ˜‰mere matlab...mei tumhare samne aapna feelings hide karne ki koshish kar rahi thiπŸ˜•


Maan(self-thought)-chalo akhir dil ke baat jubaa pe aa hi gaya..😳

kya kaha tumne.😲.mei tumhe humesha kiss karne ke liye bechayan hu kya!!..😲.aur tum kyon sa feelings ke bade mei baat kar rahe ho?πŸ˜•

Geet(self-thought)-O god!! mei hu idiotyo ki princess.πŸ˜•..yeh sab bakne ka kya jarurat thi ..kya karu...kya karu..isse distract kaise karu...yes!!idea..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Suddenly Geet holds Maan's shirt & starts unbuttoning it.😳. Maan gets shocked at Geet's attitude & weird action.😲.

Geet- plzz Maan tum yeh shirt khol doh.πŸ˜•mei abhi isse clean karke laati hu..πŸ˜†.I'm sorry.πŸ˜•. mujhse galti ho gayi..meine unjaane mei kiya..plzz.πŸ˜‰..


Maan- Geet tumhara dimaag toh kharab nahi ho gaye.😲..yeh tum kya kar rahe ho..mei khudh kar lunga.πŸ˜•..tumhe aur help karne ki koi jarurat nahi...tum toh directly mere izzaat pe haath dal rahe ho.😳.O god!! mujhe be-abroo karoge kya.πŸ˜‰.


Geet- mazzak maat karo Maan.πŸ˜‰.abhi kuch der mei humare shot hai aur tumhare shirt ka mei band baja diya.πŸ˜†.plzz mujhe yeh clean karne doh.😲.I'm feeling guilty.πŸ˜•.

Maan- abh toh tum mere izzaat ka band baja rahe hoπŸ˜•..stop it Geet...come back to ur senses..

But Geet becomes irresistible to distract Maan.πŸ˜‰..she's hell bend on her dhulayi..I mean safayi mission completely forgetting the fact as to what has happened last night when they came close .πŸ˜†.Now its Maan who recollects the car fiasco & stops Geet then & there by holding her hands tight.😳..Feeling his tough touch, Geet gets back to her senses & feels too shy & a bit ashamed of her deed.πŸ˜‰.but his intense grip has a deep shivering effect in her nerves..& she fears that it'll be impossible to prevent herself from melting down before him ☺️


It effects Maan in the same manner.😳.he too realizes his inner desire bursting out & he feels like screaming loud to the world that she belongs to him only..

Maan(self-thought)- yeh mujhe 440v ka jhatka kyu mehsoos ho raha hai..Omg.😲.. I'm just losing it again..kahi kal ka car-wala incident ka repeat telecast na ho jaye..😳. whenever I look into her eyes or I touch her ..I feel that rest of my sensory organs become super active..my ears can ear the music of the violin, my nose smells the irresistibly attractive sweet fragrance of hers & last but not the least I've the urdent urge of tasting her..☺️.but my sixth sense is forecasting & warning me, 'Maan ..isse pehle tere andaar ke tsunami bahaar aa jaye.😳.leave her hands & come back to ur senses dear..'πŸ˜‰


Geet(self-thought)- Hey babaji, yeh mei kya kar rahi thi.πŸ˜•.mei sach mei jhalli ho gayi.😲. par yeh mujhe warning dekkar abh kya karne pe tule hai..kahi yeh mujhe fhir se kiss na kar de.😲.bas bohot ho gaya..isse pehle ki cyclone aa jaye...hume protection le lena chahiyeπŸ˜‰..

Then both of them utilze their thoughts in action & just drift apart.πŸ˜‰.both of them gets ashamed for their childish acts😳

Maan decides to make his mind strong coz its becoming to hard to concentrate on his job & he threatens himself for being so impractical.πŸ˜•.He can't stop blaming his brain from diverting his attention from his work.😑.he decides to shift his focus from real to reel.πŸ˜‰.

Maan- Geet tum plzz bahaar jao aur mujhe change karne doh..we're getting late for shoot.πŸ˜•.abhi director ka call aa jayega...aur mera aaj kuch jyaada hi shots hai..


Geet- I'm sorry Maan for everything.😊don't take me otherwise...really I was not at all playing pranks it was just an accident.😲.plzz mujhe maaf kar doh.πŸ˜‰.pata nahi tumhare pass aane se ya tumhare touch se mujhe kuch ho jata hai.😳.


Maan- mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai Geet.😑.. plzz stop all these nonsense aur apne room mei jao.πŸ˜•.


Geet- but I'm really sorry Maan..I swear.😳 plzz believe me..kaho na tumne mujhe maaf kiya.😊.


Maan- haa kiya.πŸ˜ƒ.abh tum jayoge ya mei tumhe uthake tumhare room mei chodke aayu.😳.


Geet- nahii!!!! thik hai mei jaa rahi hu.😲.itna gussa toh maat ho.πŸ˜•.

Geet leaves Maan's room.πŸ˜‰.Maan waits for his new set of clothes coz he's getting too late to deliver his single shots.😊.after which he has to shoot a lengthy sequence with Geet.😳.

Maan- yeh dresser abhi tak mere fresh clothes lekar aaye kyu nahi!! kitne time ho gaye.😲.director ka doh bar call aa chuke hai..I hate to keep people waiting.πŸ˜•..yeh ladki mujhe kahi na nahi chorenge...abh mei rehearse hi nahi karunga uske saath..seedha takes dunga..haa..yehi thik hoga usse avoid karne ka..par shots agar perfect nahi hue toh..Ohhh!!😲

After half an hr Geet comes out of her room & gets shocked to see Adi in a weird look .πŸ˜•.She inquires about Maan to himπŸ˜‰..

Geet- Adi aap ayse joker ki tarah dress up kyu kiye hai.😲.kya aap kuch funny scene kar rahe ho? aur Maan ko aapne kahi dekha hai?


Adi- Geeet !! Maan ne mera izzaat loot liye.πŸ˜†.mere matlab mera vastra-haran kar liye.😳mujhe kahi ka nahi chode..mujhe aapne show ke hero se ayse umeed bilkul nahi thhe 😭


Geet- kya Maan ne aapke shirt pehen liye.😲. kyu PH ne unko dusre kapde nahi diye kya.. yeh sab mere waja se hua hai..πŸ˜•.na mei unke shirt mei coffee spill karti aur na aapke izzaat spill hote.πŸ˜†.I'm sorry Adi.😊.


Adi- Oh! toh asli culprit tum ho!!.😲.issiliye Maan itne gusse se andar set mei gaye shot dene ke liye.πŸ˜•.


Geet- kya woh abhi bhi gusse mei hai.πŸ˜•.tab toh mujhe unke paas jana chahiye dubara sorry kehne ke liye.😲.aapko ko bhi sorry Adi ..woh kya hai na aapke yeh aadha izzaat utarne ke peeche indirectly mere haath haiπŸ˜†


Adi-thik hai..thik hai..meine tumhe maaf kiya .😊..par tum bilkul andaar maat jana πŸ˜•pata chala tum kuch aur disaster kar baithe toh 😲...mei toh poora gaya na.πŸ˜•.itna tak toh mei sambhal liya.πŸ˜‰.par tum dono hero-heroine milke mere poora izzaat toh maat utaro na.😭. I can't afford it dear.πŸ˜‰.

Then Maan arrives there after delivering his shots..πŸ˜ƒ

Maan(self-thought)- think of the devil & the devil is here.😳..isske liye mujhe oversize shirt pehenna par raha hai..mujhe isse thoda dur dur rehna parega jab tak sab shots na de du.πŸ˜•.nahi toh sayyad pants bhi kisi aur se borrow karna pade.πŸ˜†.aaj hi PH ko mere saare kapde dry cleaning mei dena tha.😲.


Geet(self-thought)- yeh itne tough looks kyu de rahe hai mujhe.😲.lagta hai abhi mood thik nahi hua..aur yeh mom bhi na abhi tak nahi aaye..kab phone kiye thhe ki kuch delicious lunch prepare karke le aaye..taaki mei Maan ke saath share kar saaku.😳..aur iss tarah Maan ko thanx aur sorry bolna ho jayega.πŸ˜ƒ. kal raat ko mujhe lift dene ke liye thanx aur aaj coffee spill karne ke liye sorry.😊.

Just then Maaneet hear a sweet voice calling by Geet's name.πŸ˜ƒ. they turn round to trace it.πŸ˜‰.

Geet's mom-Chinky.πŸ˜ƒ..tum dono ke liye mei lunch prepare karke layi hu.😊.


Geet- mom!! ..aap itne late kyu hue.😲mei kab se aapka wait kar rahi hu..plzz aayiyeπŸ˜ƒ


Maan- yeh tumhare mom mere liye lunch kyu laye hai?😲

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOdetuJu61A [/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wm3hE0vIH4E&feature [/YOUTUBE]

So, whether this shocker for Maan will prove to be a rocker for Geet!!.😳.didn't get it??.πŸ˜‰arre whether Geet will be able to manofy Maan is what for us to check out in my next update yaaro.πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

for those who've joined late..here's the link of my previous one..

Action speaks louder than words for Maaneet.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too good BobbyπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— Loved it😳 Thank you so muchπŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG..!!! IT WAS AWESOME..!!! IZZAT...ABROO...VASTRA HARAN..!!! 🀣🀣

THANK YOU SO MUCH..!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—

JUST CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE TO SEE BOTH OF THEM DROOLING AND CONTROLLING THEIR INSTINCTS AND FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER..!! πŸ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW Awesome Post BobbyπŸ€—

πŸ‘...totally rocking episodeπŸ₯³
Uff Agar tu na hotti toh mera kya hottaπŸ€—
Hyeee Missing Gurti :(

Kya Din Teh Voh 😍
Edited by jaspreetm2815 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow di awesome... Mujhe is scene ki yaad aa gayi...
Ur dialogues are amazing waise r u studying disaster management coz i read volcano lava tsunami cyclone lol...
Maan was looking at her lips to check out zyada to nahi hua by God!!!! Di me was just red...
Maaneet were awesome in hiding their feelings specially Maan qki Geet ne to bak diya na lol... Aur nervousness me coffee... Jhalli was trying to take his shirt off.. Lets see ab kya blunder karti hain ye geet madam...
Commenting via phn isliye pheeka pheeka comment... But me eagerly waiting 4 next update... Haaye ye confession kab hoga? Love u di...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bobby awesome superb Post dear...

Kya kadu...
super pissed with the current situation but

loved your post very much...

Thanks Bobby for the awesome post...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...its super hillarious Bobby 🀣
loved d dialogues like vastra haran πŸ˜†
loved d pics more with ur spicy dialogues πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumona28

Bobby awesome superb Post dear...

Kya kadu...
super pissed with the current situation but

loved your post very much...

Thanks Bobby for the awesome post...

Mona thanxx a lot for ur compliments dear..
Me too dear...its becoming too hard to come out of this disastrous situation...
Thanxx for loving & appreciating my post Mona dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bobby13rocks

Mona thanxx a lot for ur compliments dear..
Me too dear...its becoming too hard to come out of this disastrous situation...
Thanxx for loving & appreciating my post Mona dear...




Yes dear its too hard to come out but we should try to come out...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Bobby πŸ‘ ,loved Adi 's partπŸ˜† ,waiting for the next episode πŸ˜‰

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